Mrlemuel:
You Should proof-read It, And Put aprostrophe On Words That Are Spoken By The Characters.

Tanx bro noted. Check my new update

samjeorg:
More ink to your pen brother

Tanx bro more mb to your phone

Daeveed:
Jomagibs What'z D Queen Like??

update just confirmed it read now

ChemicalReaction:
Pheeeww.. Finally here! Nice one Jom.agibs!

Don't live me on this thread you are one of my 1st commenter

bibijay123:
Weldone bro

LEGEND I will want to sing you a song Happy birthday

Daeveed:
Osun

She will do that's if you are the only that says its her but if another dont comments then twist you shall get

jomagibs:

She will do that's if you are the only that says its her but if another dont comments then twist you shall get

no twist our head ooooo.... nice one bro.

jomagibs:


Tanx bro noted. Check my new update

Its Getting Better, Nice Work.

enjoying ur story, ride on!

jomagibs:
Don't live me on this thread you are one of my 1st commenters

Lols.. I'm going nowhere.

ChemicalReaction:
Lols.. I'm going nowhere.

Ok love tanx

jomagibs:
Tomorrow we will be unfolding the mystery of unnamed since no one could guess who she was


Watching Nigeria vs Germany match just came back from work update is tomorrow

assumed u don't watch d match, to update next episode.. We cud av beat germany.. U made us loose, buhari must probe u for dis act

olatex25:

assumed u don't watch d match, to update next episode.. We cud av beat germany.. U made us loose, buhari must probe u for dis act

seconded

Frozeen:
seconded

Yhh.. Thirded!

this story is fantastic,,, but I noticed u were using "where" instead of "were",,,, I think the person he saw should be chidera or Johnson,,,,pls m expecting more updates from u because m really into this story,,,thanks and nice one bro

Niqqa, wat d f*ck is ur problem? Hav been followin ur story 2 almost 2 weeks wit no siqn of it comin 2 an end all because of ur delays. Such a waste of time, mtcheeeeeeew... *spits, and walks out of thread*

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ChemicalReaction:
Yhh.. Thirded!

Even you clasmistress .Now I know am all alone

holufunmie:
this story is fantastic,,, but I noticed u were using "where" instead of "were",,,, I think the person he saw should be chidera or Johnson,,,,pls m expecting more updates from u because m really into this story,,,thanks and nice one bro

Tank for your contribution.let's see

IamCeazer:
Niqqa, wat d f*ck is ur problem? Hav been followin ur story 2 almost 2 weeks wit no siqn of it comin 2 an end all because of ur delays. Such a waste of time, mtcheeeeeeew... *spits, and walks out of thread*

Sorry bro .I respect you. Sorry if my update are poor but remember you ain't paying. Spit on your spit

olatex25:

assumed u don't watch d match, to update next episode.. We cud av beat germany.. U made us loose, buhari must probe u for dis act

Dream team Rio .
Thank God am not a Nigerian
Am a naija

Frozeen:
seconded

Hmmmmm all against me

Bros you badt sha!

Good One, Good One, Bt Ur Punctation Marks Are Amiss, Please Try Fixing Them, Especialy The Comas.

unbanned

Op Try Nd Make D Updates Faster??..... Abi Cloak Breakers The Attack You.... Nice Piece Tho

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Osinachi, The Driver... Hahahahaha, Mk Dem Gv U Bulldozer As Weapon Nao?

FINALLY O! the prodigal son returns. Wow after much much I don't finally catch up with u guys. Oga Jomagibs I hail o

I qive u osinachi the driver last of his kind and the vessel..... #lol... na whc skill im qet sef to qo fiqht immortals?

Jomagibs pls is there no update today

HASHEM Bless the hand that have written, the heart and the mind that have thought and brought these effort together.
Ride on brother.
Your effort will never be in vain.

SC31:
Jomagibs pls is there no update today

Typing..............
they is update today two at least or three maximum .Tanx for following

jomagibs:


Typing..............
they is update today two at least or three maximum .Tanx for following

ok great,nice right up

*[b] -----*******××××××××Kwan2nason×××××××××*******

OSINACHI
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Soon weapons was placed before me i saw of different types and size

"Choose your weapon "
The greenman said

My weapon !
but i dont know how to wield any even my so call magic is not woking,its really a dooms day for me.
The moment each doors to a cage is opened the spectators at the top do call by names and celebrate them shouting and screaming like insane things .then it was my turn I came out but no one celebrated me. Not Even O let alone SINACHI . maybe my name is hard for them to pronounce. But who will know a mere mortal maybe when i die Osun will know am not the vessel she was obsessed with that I was.
One thing I know for certain is that am no match for the smallest creature of this city let alone one that everyone and everything fear.
Cheers of their celebration filled the air,And my mind is on my death sentence.the Queen spoke again
"Let the contestant present themselves before the spectators demonstrating their skill so that each spectator will chose who to pray for so that father may grant the person victory or Good rest by his side"

We all moved forward as the four beings stood tall above me like trees shading a boy.their height stature and colours made me scared let alone the black pecus that I've not seen,is wickedness.

Keren stood before the Queen to entertain her she started a wireworks with heavy blasts .soon she made something as red as volcano and swallowed it her whole body turn red as smoke surrounded her. Her skills in martial arts where excellente.Then her sword play I thought China men are the best swordsmen but this lady was too good too fast and too focused to sexy ,I was already in love with her ability,then she bowed before the Queen after she was done.

Next was Flux I don't know if I should say her fire works are stronger or leaser than keren but she have it ,each blast like it's a thunder.
she just stretch her hands then bang thunder .they was a time she tied herself with thunder like a rope kneeling like she was kept captive.
Then she opened her hands with ease the tied thunder went flying blasting the walls of the arena Her weapon is an arrow
She was a skilled Archer threw six fruit up and arrowed them down before they hit the floor.

Then NOx the dark I mean dark not black his eyes where all black a macho each of his step makes the arena shook he stretch his hand hits it on the ground the whole arena got a crack.which made the people hail him the more.He had a two sword behind him and he drew them out they reflected light like a mirror. This guy is good too good to be true.Good skills but I can't grade him yet.

Next was Phobia calm creature he walks like his foot will hut the ground ,been gentle . He wills a two edge sword .so skilled damn good .I mean dope good,
Slow but fast steady an concentrative you will think he is not a what he is called then his fire work which got the whole arena scared felt like he will fall the whole place even the Queen was scared. No wonder his name is phobia.

Last man standing was me OSinachi I had no fire works no magic that I understand the little one I did with Osun could not manifest its self I need to show them something as if I don't at that point I will be killed I walked before the Queen bowed knowing my death is numbered in minutes. I started hitting my chest like kingkong but then the people stopped cheering and started looking at me.

"Whoo whoo whoo"
Was the mocking sound they gave me i just need to play a little try one last thing have not done for long I went back holding the big sword I took as my weapon I ran back holding it like I want to perform some stunts screaming but as I reached before the Queen I started dancing Ogene the cultural dance of the igbo.which made laughter erupt in the square instead of cheers I shyly went back looking depressed I know I will die but why mocked before my death.then the Queen spoke

"Now the show is over let's start the main deraign the combat for greatness .its time to hold yourself firmly as we will be releasing the black pecus
Roll the Gate"

Soon everyone on the arena tied themself to the stone chair they were sitting on, I was like what anything that will make this people tire themselves even the Queen and her elite the maids and guards that thing must be very dangerous and deadly.with a fear filled heart this is new I wanted to laugh but my humor was cut short by a roar

"Moooor"

Which got the whole arena crumbling scared to look at the direction of the roar .As I turn I saw---------------?


Next update coming soon Answer/guess this one let's see. Don't forget to share comment and criticize[/b]

Lol, instead of u 2 dab, u are dancing ogene.. I can't blv i laf out loud while reading dat prt..

olatex25:
Lol, instead of u 2 dab, u are dancing ogene.. I can't blv i laf out loud while reading dat prt..

i no fit control my laff self..... nice one bro

olatex25:
Lol, instead of u 2 dab, u are dancing ogene.. I can't blv i laf out loud while reading dat prt..

lol... And i thought the Queen will tell Osi to "GeRRaRaHERE". Hmm that apple the maid gave him might be his greatest weapon o