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Re: Hearts In Ashes by Jay542(m):
skar baby, welcome bacc kiss so Seyi killed his dad for nothing. How badsad it was even a good thing omotola even said the child was TJs if not she would have been dead toosad
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Re: Hearts In Ashes by Nobody: 9:19am On Nov 21, 2016
I wonder how girls feel okay killing others just for a guy as if in the end that guy wont still die... undecided

I wonder how Tomiwa is doing in the company of such a wicked person undecided


++++

Welcome back Skarlie smiley...
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Re: Hearts In Ashes by Julietogbo(f): 9:48am On Nov 21, 2016
Thumbs up skarlett n welcome bck but blessing n real evil oooo
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Re: Hearts In Ashes by iykekelvins(m): 10:14am On Nov 21, 2016
skarlett:
The worst kind cry

God save us from enemies within like somebody would say
[color=#099999]I dey fear am oh, chai.

Amen!![/color]
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Re: Hearts In Ashes by adebriana(f): 11:13am On Nov 21, 2016
skarlett:
You're welcome dear, yes you were right although this one na obsession cheesy
lol... yes o. Wonder what her motive for the attempted murder of Dr Lily, maybe she figured out the truth.
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Re: Hearts In Ashes by debonairprinx(m): 11:52am On Nov 21, 2016
skarlett:
Dedicated to debonairprinx, yinkhar and bb4u





Tbc
Mention was most appreciated skarlett.
About the story; Events and reasons are unfolding. Good work. #thumbsup.
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Re: Hearts In Ashes by Amenya96(f): 12:13pm On Nov 21, 2016
skarlett love welldone.nice one
I guessed rightlol
blessing. d killer
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Re: Hearts In Ashes by bossy512(f): 12:24pm On Nov 21, 2016
welcome back and thanks for the update
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Re: Hearts In Ashes by Nobody: 12:31pm On Nov 21, 2016
Welcome...
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Re: Hearts In Ashes by Nobody: 2:50pm On Nov 21, 2016
Lovely story line, suspense filled, intriguing, entertaining, and great composition. Skarlett, thanks alot for this, more brains to you!!
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Re: Hearts In Ashes by ADECULATE(f): 4:52pm On Nov 21, 2016
Welcome back dear nd tanks 4 d dedication, ve missed u ehn
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Re: Hearts In Ashes by Bb4u(f): 5:54pm On Nov 21, 2016
skarlett:
Pele dearie kiss
Ese gan n tanchu 4 d dedication
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Re: Hearts In Ashes by Nobody:
Dedicated to foxyluv, tgirl085, bossy512 and amenya96


Twenty-nine
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Re: Hearts In Ashes by Nobody:
Dedicated to iykekelvins, julietogbo, ritababe and darkrebel01


Thirty
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Re: Hearts In Ashes by Julietogbo(f): 7:41pm On Nov 21, 2016
Oshe jor thank you so much for th dedication nice one. Blessing is so mean I hate girls who would do anything just for a guy that does not care about you
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Re: Hearts In Ashes by Nobody: 8:11pm On Nov 21, 2016
lipsrsealed embarassed huh
Re: Hearts In Ashes by iykekelvins(m): 8:30pm On Nov 21, 2016
[color=#099999]Explosion? My God! cry
My only concern is for Tomiwa, hope he's safe :'[
Thanks a lot for dedication skar kiss[/color]
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Re: Hearts In Ashes by JeffreyJamez(m): 8:48pm On Nov 21, 2016
.....wow... embarassed
Re: Hearts In Ashes by Creeza(m): 8:52pm On Nov 21, 2016
Skar you are simply good. I'm impressd with your descriptive insights.
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Re: Hearts In Ashes by Nobody: 9:25pm On Nov 21, 2016
It will break my heart if anything bad happens to Tomiwa. It's surprising the length some girls will go for a guy who don't notice them. Thanks alot for the dedication skarlett!
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Re: Hearts In Ashes by Amenya96(f): 9:53pm On Nov 21, 2016
[quote author=skarlett post=51244655]Dedicated to foxyluv, tgirl085, bossy512 and amenya96


Twenty-nine

“Good morning,” he greeted cheerily as she walked out of the gate.

Omotola didn’t go towards him, didn’t slow down her strides, just said, “Good morning, Dayo.”

He caught up with her in a moment’s time, her much-shorter legs no match for his long strides. Falling into step beside her, he asked, “Where are you off to?”

“Nowhere important,” she muttered and told her jittery stomach to calm down. Much to her own chagrin, it wasn’t just his presence that was making her feel trapped. It was her body’s, her heart’s reaction to him that was eating away at her.

Even now, her heartbeat was quickening. Being near Dayo set her blood to boiling and her nerves dancing. His scent. His voice. His nearness. All combined to make her want with an ache she knew would never really leave her.

And to have him close by was a torture. Maybe he saw what he was doing to her and enjoyed it immensely. She risked a gaze at him, his smile was too friendly for her liking.

“I’d like to know exactly where nowhere important is,” he said.

“Mt. Sinai Hospital,” she told him with a wave.

“Who’s at Mt. Sinai Hospital?”

“My mom,” she mumbled staring down the road for a taxi.

“Great then, I’ll drive you there.”

Her eyes closed into slits as she regarded him, “why?”

“Well you’ll need a ride there and there’s no reason you should get a taxi when I can drop you off. Also I’ll get a chance to meet my future mother-in-law,” he smiled sweetly at her as she turned at him. “We will kill two birds with one stone.”

“No.” She shook her head. “You are not going anywhere near my mother.”

“Why not?” he asked softly.

A sizzling fizz of heat began to fire deep down in her body. That there was something else going on here as well as the conversation they were involved in, made her flicker a wary scan of his face. He was leading her somewhere and she did not want to look at where that might be.

“I would be too ashamed to present you to her,” she said.

And hit a raw nerve. Omotola watched the warm possessive golden light in his eyes turn off like a switch. He drew back from her as if she’d physically struck him. It was like watching a dangerous animal take a serious blow it had not been prepared for, and she

WoW,I feel loved....
Thanks for the dedication skarlet
I love you scatter
You are the best
love you plenty

Story is coming to an end
I pray Tomiwa is safe
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Re: Hearts In Ashes by spixytinxy(f): 10:11pm On Nov 21, 2016
Well done skarlett
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Re: Hearts In Ashes by phieccayurmie(f): 10:28pm On Nov 21, 2016
skarlett:
I don't know where to start my apologies from but I want everyone to understand that the few days without update was not intentional, i had some things to do offline, which unavoidably disturbed writing the story. The good news is, I'm back and I appreciate everyone of you that tried to reach out to me one way or the other and even those that made excuses for me, y'all are the

Cc:
Khutie
Ritababe
Jeffreyjamez
Lleigh
Swann
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Dominique
Jagugu88li
Lawlahdey
Adeculate
Yinkhar
Phieccayuhmie
Jay542
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Bb4u
Creeza
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Lovelyudy
sori dear,I hope u re back now sha cos I can't wait oo..
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Re: Hearts In Ashes by Debra01(f): 10:52pm On Nov 21, 2016
Loving this Skarl....Thanks
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Re: Hearts In Ashes by Nobody: 2:35am On Nov 22, 2016
She's obssessed and not in love with the guy.
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Re: Hearts In Ashes by BlizzydoDo(f): 6:48am On Nov 22, 2016
spixytinxy:
Well done skarlett
Hian!! r yuu MTNhuh
Re: Hearts In Ashes by Jay542(m): 6:53am On Nov 22, 2016
What kind of blessing is thisangry
Re: Hearts In Ashes by debonairprinx(m): 7:34am On Nov 22, 2016
Those two updates was awesome skarlett. Made my morning. Pity Tracy had to die that horrible death though. Blown to pieces.
Re: Hearts In Ashes by spixytinxy(f): 8:43am On Nov 22, 2016
BlizzydoDo:
Hian!! r yuu MTNhuh
beeni oooo, blizzydodo d only fried plantain on GC
Re: Hearts In Ashes by Lleigh(f): 8:43am On Nov 22, 2016
Thanks for the mention skarlett.

Superb update....keep it up
Re: Hearts In Ashes by dominique(mod): 9:41am On Nov 22, 2016
Chai! Baby Tomiwa ooo cry
Re: Hearts In Ashes by Nobody: 9:57am On Nov 22, 2016
Tgirl085:
She's obssessed and not in love with the guy.
Psychological issue. Best she gets admitted to a psychiatric hospital if she makes it out alive, as opposed to prison. Otherwise life after this could be impossible. She would have done time, released only for The Re-Birth of Blessing (bibijay123 sef, ehn! cheesy)

Cinnamon7 osleek, what's your take?
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