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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Nobody: 11:12am On Dec 20, 2016
Eniqurl:
I would have preferred a slow painful death for Funmi... That b****
Someone finally talks sense. Like using a bread knife to slowly cut her throat or grate her like cheese tongue grin

Sly my guy, you are the bomb. Now its time to see Annie as a woman she is.....make her Tom's mother bro, the lady loves you.

Oh...oh...almost forgot. Please m'Lady, don't tell me Annie will still press charges against Sly....Please don't do it. Yoi and your twists...anything is possible

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Twinkle004(f): 11:23am On Dec 20, 2016
I feel sorry 4 Funmi, she ended badly without redemption but guess some1 most die 4 d story 2 be completed.
Bibi welldone
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Chumzypinky(f): 12:23pm On Dec 20, 2016
I c Bibijay viewin. Mayb der's an update on d way *rejoicing*

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 1:08pm On Dec 20, 2016
Epilogue

Dupe

I removed the dark glasses I wore and stared at the sky. It is amazing how we take so much for granted, the sky looked so beautiful, the air smelled so fresh and the evening breeze caressed my skin gently. I took a deep breath before getting into the car, Uche looked at me and gave me a wide smile. I smiled too, happy.


Our chauffeur, Annie turned around and beamed at us. I reached out and took her hand in mine. She was more than a friend, she was family now.


“Hey guys, this is your captain speaking. Fasten your seat belts! Its time!” Annie said.


“It’s time to go home Dupe,” Uche said.


“Home” I said. I was finally back home, beside my husband. “Where my heart belonged. “Home is wherever you are Uche,”



“Awwn, that’s sweet.” Annie said, “Oh you guys! You make me want to cry!” And she started bawling.



“Oh Annie,” I said.


She got down from the car and got into the back with us. She pulled Uche and I into her arms, in a big hug.
**************************
Sylvester


“I have enough evidence to put you away forever.” I said. “You won’t go scot free this time around.” I said. “I won’t let you ruin the life of another young boy again.”


He laughed evilly and sneered.” You can’t imprison the wind.”


I laughed too and he started laughing as well until I stopped abruptly. “Two of your boys are also behind bars and they are ready to talk so they can have lesser jail terms. And oh, I have convinced them to lay all the blame on you.”



“My boys are very loyal to me, they will never betray me like you did!” Ognoni76 said, scratching his bald head.



“You mean they won’t talk? They already talked! We also know that you forced them to rape and kill a pregnant woman as a form of initiation into your evil cult”



He looked perplexed for a second. “Who told you that?” he growled.



“They are in special unit. They are being protected.” I said. “They talked, a lot.”



“Why are you doing this?” he asked.



“This is for Nonye.” I said, “And the countless innocent lives you have destroyed.’’


“Who is Nonye?”



“You will find out soon enough” I said and turned to leave.


“Wait! Remember we were once in this together! Remember you made your money through drugs! I had to change tactics when you left me! I was broke and almost homeless and the law was on my heels. I had to find a way to get back to my feet. I delved into Yahoo, something I thought was for little boys, so I recruited Dubem to be in charge of that but he duped me! All I did was to give you lot a meaningful life! See, we can still make it work again!”


“I think you are going senile because I have never met you before. I am a well-known reputable lawyer, what have I got to do with the likes of you?” I quipped.


He laughed and slapped his bulgy stomach. “I have trapped you little boy. The evidence is on your arm, you were once my protégée.” He lifted up his polo to reveal his bull head tattoo. “You have this tattoo too! Let me see how you will explain that to the judge, lawyer boy!”


I opened the buttons on my shirt while he looked on, wondering what was going on. I showed him both of my arms and he gasped. “What tattoo?” I sneered.


“Where…..where….how….” he stuttered. “ You….you…”


“See you in court” I said and sauntered away while he rattled the irons bars holding him prisoner.
*********

During the drive to the Airport, my parents huddled close to each other. They talked, held hands, whispered and giggled like school children in love. When their flight was announced, they both pulled me into their arms at the same time and gave me a fierce hug.


“Are you sure you don’t want us to go with our grandson?” Mama said in Ewe.


“He just became a father, let him enjoy his son for a while.” Dad replied. “Let him visit us as soon as he starts walking.”


I stared at the both of them. It had been ages since I heard them speak Ewe. I couldn’t believe they were speaking the once forbidden language in broad daylight. A dark skinned petite girl in Angelina blouse and short skirt walked by and called out greetings to us in Ewe.


Mama Laughed. “Did you hear that Sylvester?”


“I heard Mama,” I finally replied and they both hugged me close again.


“We love you Sly,” they both chorused. “Don’t forget to bring your son home as often as you can.”


“I promise” I said and pulled them into my arms.

****
“Hey” Annie said, walking into my living room.


“Hey” I replied, pouring her a glass.


“How’s Tom?” She asked.


“I just put him down for his nap and I am still hunting for a nanny.” I said.


“Look no more.” She said. “I will care for him.”


“Umm… Annie…. I was thinking you might be more than that. I want you to be his surrogate mom.”



“Oh really?” She said, excitedly. “Thank you Shar…Sly.”



“But there’s a tiny problem.”


“What’s the problem?” She asked.


“When he gets older, he will realize his friends have two parents living under the same roof but he only has one and that might traumatize him. So …. Well…”


“Are you asking me to move in?”


“What?” I laughed and looked shocked.” No…. I wouldn’t dare to…”


“Yes” She said. “I have always wanted to be a mother and Tom is such an adorable baby. Henceforth, no more cuss words, late nights, heavy music and we must go to church every Sunday.”


“Why?” I asked.


“We have to be model parents. We will bring him up in the way of the lord.” She replied.


“Oh” I said in surprise. “But you are a Muslim.”


“I converted.”


“When?” I asked.


“Few minutes ago. We have to get books on parenting as well and ….”


“I want to show you something.” I said and opened my shirt. “This” I pointed to my bare arm where the tattoo was.
“Oh” She said, “Well I am glad you removed it. We wouldn’t want our son thinking it’s good to have tattoos” She brought out her phone and started flipping through it.


“Annie what are you doing?” I asked.


“I want to call the movers.” She said. “We have to change some things because right now this place still looks like a bachelor’s house and we have to make it more conducive for our baby. Right?”


“Right?” I agreed.
******
Mabel

“What is the baby’s name?” I asked, looking at the sweet looking thing.


“Annie.” Dupe replied.


“Oh that’s a sweet name.” I said.


“We named her after our own Annie.”


“Yea she’s my name sake” Annie beamed.


Dupe and her Husband, Annie and the lawyer came to see us because Tade would be discharged any moment from now and we would be heading for the Airport immediately.


The doctor walked in. “he can go home now.”


“Thank you” I said happily.


The doctor walked out once again. Annie brought out a camera and waved her hand.


“Photo time.” She cried out, “Who will snap us?”


“I will.” Sylvester said.


“No, no, you get to be in the photographs too. Go get one of those starchy nurses.” Annie replied.


He sighed and walked out of the room.


“Thank you all for coming. This means so much to me” I said. “I can’t believe we are finally going back home.”


“Bell, we are going to the states.” Tade reminded me.


“That is still home. My parents and Serwa are there and they have decorated the whole house in anticipation of our coming.” I said, beaming.



“Well that’s still home.” Annie seconded. “You will be coming back when the trial starts, right?”



“Cecilia’s?” I asked. “Yes. Can I…. can I hold Tom?”


“Yes.” She said gleefully. “He might not let you hold him for long because he’s used to his mommy’s hands already. Isn’t he such a cutie?” She placed him in my arms.


I held him close to my bosoms, looking into his handsome face. He looked neither like Tade nor Funmi. He looked like himself and that pleased me. No questions will trail him later in life, looking at the lawyer and Annie you wouldn’t know he wasn’t theirs biologically.


Sylvester walked in with a young pretty nurse tucked into the crook of his arms, it was obvious he had charmed her as the poor thing was blushing and giggling.



“Uche, Dubem sent me a text. He has gone back to Malaysia.” Sylvester announced.



“Typical of him.” Uche replied.



“How did he get the money to go back?” Dupe asked and we all stared at him.



“What?” he asked. “Okay, I might have helped him a little.”



We all burst into laughter. Annie gave the camera to the nurse and we clustered around Tade on the bed.


“Say Cheese” The nurse said.


“Cheese we all chorused.”
****

Tade and Mabel headed for the Airport, Annie, Sylvester and their son drove back to their home while Uche and Dupe went house hunting. They wanted a big house with a garden where little Annie and her siblings that are yet to come will play. When Little Annie is six months old, her parents would travel to India to check if there’s a chance for her father to see again. Whether he sees again or not, we all know that Dupe would be his eyes for the rest of their lives.



THE END




Thank you all for making this book a success. Special thanks goes to those awesome readers who have been arguing back and forth over each scene, through your rich points I have been able to develop the plot. I don’t know if I have been able to pass my message (the theme) across effectively, but I do believe we all have been entertained. Thanks once again, compliments of the season to you all! *kisses*

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by yusufibrahim(m): 1:15pm On Dec 20, 2016
jagugu88li:
Someone finally talks sense. Like using a bread knife to slowly cut her throat or grate her like cheese tongue grin

Sly my guy, you are the bomb. Now its time to see Annie as a woman she is.....make her Tom's mother bro, the lady loves you.

Oh...oh...almost forgot. Please m'Lady, don't tell me Annie will still press charges against Sly....Please don't do it. Yoi and your twists...anything is possible
haba that's pure wickedness she has suffered enough na she always deserve happyness
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 1:25pm On Dec 20, 2016
Barristertemmie:
Bibijay123 if funmi is truly dead, I feel tade shouldn't go unpunished. Even though he has escaped police investigation coupled with the fact that sly has covered up for him, I want karma to catch up with him.

Life is so unpredictable. Sometimes the bad guys triumphs but I tell you it is only for a short while. Tade has lost the right to his son already, who knows what else life has in store for him.

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 1:26pm On Dec 20, 2016
Chumzypinky:
I c Bibijay viewin. Mayb der's an update on d way *rejoicing*

lol Yea!! grin

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 1:27pm On Dec 20, 2016
jagugu88li:
Someone finally talks sense. Like using a bread knife to slowly cut her throat or grate her like cheese tongue grin

Sly my guy, you are the bomb. Now its time to see Annie as a woman she is.....make her Tom's mother bro, the lady loves you.

Oh...oh...almost forgot. Please m'Lady, don't tell me Annie will still press charges against Sly....Please don't do it. Yoi and your twists...anything is possible

lol wicked gal angry grin

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 1:29pm On Dec 20, 2016
missuniverse:
I knew Funmi would get stuck on a long run, but I didn't see her dyeing dat way...

if Sly went unpunished, why wouldn't Tade; both acted on wrong information...


I've always knwn Mabel lives on Grace, I think it was dis same grace by extension dat saved Tade, and maybe if she hadn't returned to the state Funmi's death would hv bn delayed...


At times, we try to take credit for our present achievements, forgetting that it could also be because of another person right next to us.

Look around you - Probably someone is there around you, in the form of Your Parents, Your Spouse, Your Children, Your Siblings, Your friends, Your Colleagues, etc, who is saving you from harm..!

Think About it..

kudos Bibi

awnn that's so true. I like this, thank you babe kiss

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 1:29pm On Dec 20, 2016
Creeza:
And the cold fingers of death ripped out the cold heart of Funmi... she kissed the dust and laid down to rust...

Now her baby is subjected to a life without a mother, #life

Dupe is reunited with her family, now that's one heck of a harmony in the view of calamity .

Sly is God sent, solving everyone's problem but he is still single but has a good heart. I love him o jare (am not gayy o!!) grin

bibijay123. Sometimes you make me wanna cry, laugh and smile at the same time.. just like you did with this update.


madam you are gifted. # I rest my pen


Thank you creeza grin

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 1:30pm On Dec 20, 2016
AyamConfidence:
Bibijay123 I hope you've seen my previous message... Info bout the parry....you coming?

I saw it bro. Still thinking abt it.

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Nobody: 1:31pm On Dec 20, 2016
AMEN........Thank you too m'Lady, that your head is smart I swear. Until next time. Oya chop em kiss

yusufibrahim:
haba that's pure wickedness she has suffered enough na she always deserve happyness
tongue no mind me oooo

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 1:32pm On Dec 20, 2016
room089:
Whaaaaaaaat!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mbanu! Aunty Bibi o maka why?

Must you alter the story?

This wasn't the content of the original script I saw with my crystal bulb!

You change the script!


See what you've caused now: Ayamconfidence, Emzy90 and co are now laughing at me! embarassed embarassed embarassed

I didn't change it oo, maybe you need to get a new crystal bulb cheesy

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 1:33pm On Dec 20, 2016
veekid:
What's the outcome of ogboni76 and crew? tongue

prison tinz o grin

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by bibijay123(f): 1:34pm On Dec 20, 2016
missnazzy:
I hate that funmi died. nice twist!

oh embarassed sorry

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by yusufibrahim(m): 1:34pm On Dec 20, 2016
Bibijay always brilliant delivery........ Nice end entertaining educative and lots of morals learnt from the story more grace to u keep going higher the sky is ur stepping stone
#respect
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by cerowo(f): 1:43pm On Dec 20, 2016
embarassed embarassed
y did u allow Funmi 2 die na, am nt happy at al o
i was already planning happy ever after between Sly nd Funmi...u ve spoiled everytin nw
keep it up Bibi u rock
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by MzzAmiable(f): 1:51pm On Dec 20, 2016
Almost perfect iyaf end... welldone BIBI
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by yorhmienerd(m): 2:02pm On Dec 20, 2016
embarassed So film don finish be that
Nice ending Bibi
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Nobody: 2:04pm On Dec 20, 2016
Almost perfect indeed cheesy... This was a great journey Bibi and I'm happy to be a part of it. Can't wait for your next smiley
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by triplemmm3(f): 2:20pm On Dec 20, 2016
Bibijay weldone nice story, May the lord continue to enrich your brain
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by vandops10(m): 2:39pm On Dec 20, 2016
Thanks for making 2016 intersting for me
U one of d best thing's to happen on Nairaland dis year
God continue to give u brain to put us in good suspence
Thanks bibi

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by cerowo(f): 2:56pm On Dec 20, 2016
Its so unfortunate dat Funmi didnt last till d last minute... embarassed at least i stil get small conscience unlike some 'persons' .no name o grin Anyway tnk God d story has ended...all tnks 2 Bibi
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Creeza(m): 2:56pm On Dec 20, 2016
This was indeed a journey... I never regretd any ride in it.
THANK U bibijay , 2016 was blessed for me because I read this story.

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Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by remiseyi(m): 3:07pm On Dec 20, 2016
so far so good... nice job bibijay
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Fox14(f): 3:12pm On Dec 20, 2016
can uche see now?. i thought he was blind
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by rachealfst(f): 3:24pm On Dec 20, 2016
Perfect Ending, Thanks so much for sharing this great piece. Compliment of the season.
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by crazygod(m): 3:40pm On Dec 20, 2016
Thanks Bibijay123. The Lord will entertain u with blessings just as u've entertained us. 2017 will be filled with pleasant surprises cos u deserve it and more. Merry Xmas and happy new year dear.
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by crislyn(f): 3:43pm On Dec 20, 2016
Good work ma!
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by IamLukas(m): 4:02pm On Dec 20, 2016
very nice piece Bibi,God bless you!
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Babycherry(f): 4:02pm On Dec 20, 2016
bibijay123:

oh embarassed sorry


finally.........
thanks bibi dont forget to mention me in any other story
Re: Almost Perfect#nlwriters by Aitee1: 4:04pm On Dec 20, 2016
Wow...wow...wow...wow...wow...this babe got me screaming like an ambulance grin


For real it's the end? I'll give you a call later in the day I'm super busy at the moment!

Good job!!! Cc bibijay123

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