this was such a beautiful read. thank you so much bibijay. more ideas to your sound mind.

Nice story ma,please mention me in your next story

Hmmmm..
Thanks dear.

I came and saw and conquered reading every chapter. Each chapter felt real to me, twa's as if I was watching a "real life story". Bibi, saying ure good is an understatement. URE DA BOMB Girl! Kip it up. Can't wait to read ur nxt story. God bless u

Thanks Bibijay123


I love everything about this story, the twist and all.
Biko don't forget to mention me in your next story.

happy ending

TeamDupe!!!

Bibijay123 am so speechless right now. You are a wonderful writer... Please don't forget to mention me if u wana start another story oo

bibijay123:


I didn't change it oo, maybe you need to get a new crystal bulb

Mbanu, iro!
My crystal bulb can't be faulty, it's ageless!
Remember it's in room089, not in the kitchen, living room or in the other room.

I will forgive you on TWO reasons:

1. There was a subtle mention of room089 in this master piece!

2. One of your main characters goes by my name. It survived your sledge hammer to remain as one of the last characters standing: you didnt kill it. Though its beauties were destroyed.



Honestly Bibi a wonderful master piece you've put up freely for our consumption and delight. May God bless you. I thank you for understanding and bearing with us readers especially when we write amiss or mount so much pressure on you for an update fogetting that you have other things doing and studies to contend with.

I see this work as one of your works that will go places.

Bibi why didn't Sly and Annie have a legalized marriage at leat for the sake of little Tom?

Shalom

Such a lovely story.....thumbs up to you bibijay123

Hmmmm almost perfect indeed.....first time of commenting on ur story..really enjoy twine n now almost perfect is wao!!!bibijay123 may God continue to water ur brain with fountain of knowledge,wisdom n understanding.3 gbosa for d upcominmg master story teller

Awww, why did the story have to end?
I enjoyed every single update (except the ones with Nonye and Dupe's mum's death)
Can't wait read another masterpiece from the supertalented Bibijay123. Girl you rock! May God bless the work of your hands.


To every one that commented at one point or the other, you guys are awsome. Thanks for making Literatureland the place to be, it's been fun reading your comments and rubbing minds with you all

Almost perfect ending. Thanks Bibi for another wonderful story

Wonderful ending bibi. U rock. I loved d fact that Tom got good parents and that Annie ended up with Sly. Funmi had to pay, she would have been sentenced to death even if she wasn't poisoned. Love the fact that Tom ended up with Sly. Even though Tade and Sly should be punished, they've gone through enough already. So that's fair.

Wonderful ending bibi. U rock. I loved d fact that Tom got good parents and that Annie ended up with Sly. Funmi had to pay, she would have been sentenced to death anyway, even if she wasn't poisoned. Love the fact that Tom ended up with Sly. Even though Tade and Sly should be punished, they've gone through enough already. So that's fair.

Awwwwww,such a great and beautiful story, jst made my day, God's blessing on u alwaz, u simply d best.......lots of love

Tnx plenty plenty Bibi for this masterpiece. Been a nice voyage, looking forward to ur next.

Aunt Bibi, tanx for these one.
tag me when there's a new one pleaaaase

Wow bibi you are too much
Thanks for this nice piece

vandops10:
Thanks for making 2016 intersting for me
U one of d best thing's to happen on Nairaland dis year
God continue to give u brain to put us in good suspence
Thanks bibi

You just took the words out of my mouth. May the almighty God bless you bibijay123 and may you continue to increase in wisdom, wealth, knowledge and understanding.

Another wonderful story has come to an end but i know this will not be the last great story from bibi enjoyed it and hope for more

Madam bibi am angry at you seriously 1st for killing funmi 2nd for letting tade go freely 3rd for finishing the story. Your story alway keep my company, there are some story i read on nairaland that are not and wil not complete until jesus come. It only u i know dat update every day and complete your story. May God lift u up and make u excel in all ur endavour thank u

thanks a lot for completing this wonderful story you are d best cos many writer on nairaland find it difficult to complete their stories Buh u av shown me dat u r different. I appreciate your efforts may ur inspiration never run dry. thanks a lot God bless nd keep u for us pls remember to mention me when u start a new story. I heart u

wow , i must really commend u , because you are the best nigerian(africa) writer have ever seen, nice story , keep improving, GOD BLESS YOUR HAND.

all i can say is beautiful as always. thanks for this piece madam bibi

bibijay123:


I saw it bro. Still thinking abt it.

we'll be sha expecting you...the fun will be madt trust me

nice one dear.more grace.

Oh bibijay123, it was almost perfect for real. In my own opinion it was funmi that made the story almost perfect because if she didn't die it will be difficult for Annie to marry Sly and be Tom's foster mother and I like the fact that Uche didn't see till the end of the story.This is a great work and I believe you will go places by the grace of God all the characters went through a lot. Don't forget two things dear: mention me in your next story and you said there will be a sequel to our loving TWINE.

So this wonderful piece have come to an end....Bibi...on behalf of we the Nairanders...I say a big thank you for this story, for the dedication, for the twists, for making me smile at my phone, for being sweet all the time...gracias amigo

Lemme go and read another of your stories before you start a new one

Respect mama

Barristertemmie:
You just took the words out of my mouth. May the almighty God bless you bibijay123 and may you continue to increase in wisdom, wealth, knowledge and understanding.

Amen! Merry Christmas in advance

Hnmm,what a happy ending, Sad for funmi tho. You rock Bibijay...the sky is ur starting point