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| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by Nobody: 12:51pm On Feb 10, 2017 |
EmperorLee:Haha nice try. Sure it has inspired me but I'm not chanced to dedicate time for writing now. Fiyah let's see yours. |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by Divepen1(mod): 12:59pm On Feb 10, 2017 |
drnoel:Thanks. |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by NevetsIbot(m): 1:02pm On Feb 10, 2017 |
Divepen1:lalasticlala. Push this to fp biko. Atleast, let the literature section get some attention... Divepen... Greetings. How are you? |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by Divepen1(mod): 1:05pm On Feb 10, 2017 |
NevetsIbot:Boss me, I'm good. You? |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by NevetsIbot(m): 1:06pm On Feb 10, 2017 |
Mattkent:MattKent. Bad guy.... I enjoyed your own story. I still dislike that jennifer mehn. Better take care. And biko, when Janelle comes, give her a rose for me..before she kills you. She's my crush. Solomonbrown64 drop something |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by NevetsIbot(m): 1:07pm On Feb 10, 2017 |
Divepen1:I'm also good Boss. How's the day going? |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by drnoel: 1:31pm On Feb 10, 2017*. Modified: 8:17am On Feb 11, 2017 |
So many wonderful writers already present, some of my best still yet to show. Am drawn to write a continuation to pull out some of my very best writers. Come on guys lets have fun here. ................................. I walk into the bathroom with a very hard rhizopus. Pour water on my face to clear my head. My fever had broken but my head still felt as if full of cobwebs. To cap it all, my nose was running like a fountain as if it had a mind of its own. My grumbling stomach reminded me of my hunger of last so I decided to make myself some sandwich as I clearly told myself I would call in sick. I walked into my kitchen feeling a level of familiarity. It was after I made mysellf something to eat and was munching away that it hit me. It looked like my kitchen but then not really. My kitchen equipments were wrongly set in a slowly familiar way. I was still pondering why when "U know who" aka Tiwa walked into the kitchen in her full glory". This time my eyes where clear as day. I start choking on my drink with growing trepidation as fear gripped my chest like a vice. I finally found my voice that was not my voice and asked in a squeaky nasal tone "how come u are here. U are supposed to be an imagination"? But she replied me "even imaginary things do come true and urs have done so. But there is a problem, ur actions of yesterday has shown me that we are not compatible. I have always loved Obinna and will always do. For me there is no room for another man in my life. That's why u have to go". As she said so, she pulled out a long kitchen knife she had been hiding behind her back and slowly walked over to where I sat. I screamed myself awake..... |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by GSteve001(m): 1:50pm On Feb 10, 2017 |
please do try to finish your story in one post. or, modify the uncompleted one when ready, so that the stories don't end up disjointed. |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by Nobody: 1:56pm On Feb 10, 2017 |
bibijay123:Aww... Romantic. |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by Nobody: 1:59pm On Feb 10, 2017 |
GSteve001:Awwn awwn...This is touching. Uncle, goan free ahmed oh. |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by Nobody: 2:00pm On Feb 10, 2017 |
NevetsIbot:Thanks lot. Yours was like watching a movie. Great stuff. |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by Nobody: 2:03pm On Feb 10, 2017 |
Chumzypinky: ![]() Damn crazy... Hahaha ![]() |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by Nobody: 2:05pm On Feb 10, 2017 |
NevetsIbot:Omg... hahaha ![]() This is fun mehn |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by GSteve001(m): 2:08pm On Feb 10, 2017 |
Lawlahdey:. lol, seems like I don't have a choice here |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by Nobody: 2:12pm On Feb 10, 2017 |
donkross1:Scary ![]() Abeni agbon ![]() |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by Nobody: 5:38pm On Feb 10, 2017 |
Heemah do check out this thread. |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by heemah(f): 6:47pm On Feb 10, 2017 |
Mattkent:The stories got me rolling on the floor. Biko, you guys should continue ooo. TiffanyJ, Solomonbrown64, leriebloom, fiyah, come and post yours too. |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by Nobody: 10:27pm On Feb 10, 2017 |
This is really nice |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by JeffreyJamez(m): 10:42pm On Feb 10, 2017 |
skarlett:Indeed it is.....Which one you want meet?..Make I conjure am come based on Oracle things ![]() Royver!!! Come and do your in o!! ![]() Prettyspicey you too! ![]() AudreyTimms ma bo bi bayi o! ![]() Safarigirl bia ne ba o ![]() Repogirl...Oya come and do your own. ![]() |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by Nobody: 10:43pm On Feb 10, 2017 |
JeffreyJamez:Blessing the evil nanny ![]() |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by JeffreyJamez(m): 10:45pm On Feb 10, 2017 |
skarlett: Make I hide for ya back lol... Oya na,would love to see what you come up with ![]() |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by Nobody: 10:46pm On Feb 10, 2017 |
JeffreyJamez:E still dey cook for fire ![]() |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by JeffreyJamez(m): 10:51pm On Feb 10, 2017 |
skarlett:Make e done quick biko I don dey salivate. ![]() |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by drnoel: 8:18am On Feb 11, 2017 |
GSteve001:What fun would that be? |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by PrettySpicey(f): 11:34am On Feb 11, 2017 |
It was past midnight. I cast an absent glance at my phone's 24hour-set clock and breathed an impatient sigh. I needed to be in bed; but I needed to complete this chapter too. So... My fingers swept across the keyboard with as much speed as I could make them -- which was no speed at all. I should have taken that damn speed-writing class serious! The knock was brusque and I shot my head up. Christ Almighty! Was someone knocking on my PC screen? It came again. Swift, loud and impatient. No, it wasn't coming from the PC. "Darn it, TM, get a grip!" I muttered and scraped back my chair and marched to the door. I pulled it open and stared, hugely irritated, at the girl... make that woman... No, young woman at my door. "Do you know what the time is?" I demanded, wondering why I'd opened the door at all. Could have been a robber. Could still be. "After midnight, I should think." She retorted, nudged me out of the doorway and walked into the room. I muttered something not polite under my breath and shut the door with a snap. "Writing, are you?" She asked when I resumed my seat. "Yes." I didn't bother to spare her a glance. "Of course, that's what you do -- write." She perched a hip on my desk. "What are you writing?" I slowly raised my head. She was slender -- quite slender. Dark, like ebony dark. Her hair was some kind of frisky, short style with tinges of red slashing through the pitch black weave. Her mouth was coated in red -- bright, sultry red and pursed as she stared back at me. Love red much, don't you? I thought with a sneer, sweeping my glance over her maroon coloured designed-to-fit dress. Good thing you went black on the heeled sandals. But who wears heels after midnight? "A story." I answered her question, moving my eyes to hold hers. "A story." She repeated and the semblance of a smirk crossed her face. "Let me guess, a love story. Romance. That's what you write best, right?" I didn't like the smirk. "I do other genres but Romance does take the lead. Why are you asking?" She ignored question and peered at the PC screen. "So, whose love story are you weaving, writer?" I definitely don't like her tone. Why the heck again did I let her in -- a total stranger? "It is the story of Micah, Shadrach and Noah." My tone was crisp... and patronizing. "Ha, Micah. I'm guessing that unisex name would belong to our leading lady, right?" "It does." I should get rid of her. "And... pray tell, and when did you meet this," she crooked her fingers, "Micah?" "Not that it's any of your business," my patronizing tone amplified, "but she and I made contact in September." "Last September?" She spluttered, springing to her feet. "Like 5 months ago September?" I was thinking I liked her perfume, even though I didn't like her screeching indignantly and looking all astonished in my room. "Yes, that September." I nonchalantly held her gaze. "You met her in September and you're already writing her story?" She cussed, under her breath and explicitly. Not a word I'd ever write. "5 months and she gets her own story? Gets to become the heroine of her own love story?" "Yes, 5 months and she gets that." Now, I've had enough. "Who are you again?" "What?" She gave me a look like it was a stupid question. "Kike." "Kike?" I arched my eyebrows. "Kikelomo Adeyemo." She hissed. I arched my brows even higher. Hadn't known that was possible until now. "I don't believe this!" She ground out, stamped one heeled-foot. "Kike. Valerie's best friend? Un-Break My Heart?" "Oh." My mind opened, captured, processed and recalled. "But... that can't be! I can't be talking... seeing... you are a character from a story for Christ's!" "Mmm-hmm. A character in a story you wrote." She'd crossed her arms over her chest now and was smirking again. "A character you created. You created me and you forgot all about me." "Forgot all about you?" I was still trying to convince myself not to abandon my PC and run for my dear life. "But... how? What did I do?" "What did you do? Toss me out. Threw me into oblivion; buried in hip-deep promises," she swung her hip -- a pronounced one for one so slender -- to one side, "and eternal procrastinations." "Right." I blinked, wondered if one nut had come loose in my head... again. "It is not right, TM!" She... Well, I can say Kike now. Kike snapped. "You treated me shabbily. I was a good character. A damn good character. Heck! I put the zing in your Un-Break My Heart. People loved me. They wanted more of me -- the spice that made their reading an unforgettable experience. They asked for me, and you promised them a story." She jerked a finger at me. "You know when you wrote UBMH, TM?" "Ah..." She is using acronyms like I do? Dang! "2013! 2013, TM?" Kike snorted a derisive laugh. "And in 2014, you made the promise to write my love story after bringing the UBMH on board here. 2014, that's 3 years ago, TM. 3 years. Yet, Micah, only 5 months in the radar, is already getting her own story. That is so not cool, TM." "Ah..." "3 years and I've been waiting for my story." Kike cut off my stuttering. "3 years, I've been waiting to be made a heroine. Waiting to be upgraded from supporting character to heroine. Waiting to be the bride and not die a bridesmaid. Waiting -- and every year, you buried me deeper in promises and procrastinations. While you made Toni a heroine. Made Lara a heroine. Even made that money-lover Richelle a heroine too! And now, it's just-sprung-up-5-months-ago Micah. Hell no, TM! I want my story. I demand you write my story. You created me, so give me a better life!" "Right." I nodded, breathed... blinked. "I will write your story, I promise..." "Enough with the promises, just do it!" Kike snapped. "You know how old I am now? 31, TM. 31, since you put me out there in 2014. Do you know the kind of pressure out there when a girl's 31 and no man?" "I will write your story. This year. No more procrastinations, I swear." Swearing was better than promising, right? "You do that." Kike gave a snooty sniff. "But back date it. No way am I going to be older than 30 on my wedding day. You found Valerie her man on the day she turned 30 and I want the same." But you're already 31. As a matter of fact, it is 32 since the story was dated in 2013." "It's fiction, TM. You can do whatever you want." Her eyes sparkled menacingly. "Back date it. 30. The big three-oh and a man of my own. And I want a wedding. You gave Elizabeth and Amarachi a wedding scene, I want one." "Ah... that could be too repetitive. I did an after-wedding scene for Samantha..." "I don't care about Samantha, or the others. I want a wedding." She pinned unflinching eyes on me. "You make my wedding happen, get it?" "Ah... yes." But, dang, she was bossy! Was that how I created her -- all fiery and bossy? "Good. Third quarter of this year at the latest, TM. No longer." "No longer." I absently acquiesced. Where did the full-length mirror she was primping in front of come from? "Great. Super. Me likey." She grinned at her image, fluffed her hair. "So, what's with this Micah?" "Micah." I tried to clear my head. "Um, she's actually got a 9 year old son and just got engaged to the man she is dating. But Shadrach, her son's father, comes back and she starts..." "Yeah, yeah, yeah." Kike cut me off. "Save the long details for those eager to read it. I don't care to be bored by another's heroine's love tale. I got mine to dream about." She critically eyed her image. "Yeah, I'm all set. Going over to Valerie's. She's got a baby now..." "Valerie has a baby?" The information surprised me. "Yes, she does. A boy. You would know if you'd bothered about my story." She made a clucking noise with her tongue. "Anyway, I'm off. It's going to be green-eyes moments with Val and Nathan billing and cooing at each other. But I love my girl and I love Nate Phillips, so no hard feelings." Her mouth pursed. "What will be hardship is having to put up with that Duncan." "You don't like Duncan?" My eyebrows shot up. "Please." Kike scoffed. "He thinks he's all that. He's a yellow skin for heaven's sake! All about himself like I'd ever be interested in a sun-lit man." She clucked her tongue and sashayed to the door. "Get me a real man, TM. Tall, dark... and I'm talking ebony real African dark skin... and hot." With a dramatic wink, she swept through the door. "Aha!" A scene opened before me. Then multiple scenes. Possibilities. The things I could do. Oh yes... "TM?" I snapped open my eyes. My PC's cursor blinked twice. "Continue my story." Micah's voice ordered. "I'm not giving up my turn for her. And the other Antoinette is waiting her turn too. So..." She let the words hang on that meaningful note. I gaped at my PC. Christ, these characters were too bossy! *** Um, @ JeffreyJames, ah... what was I going to tell you? *Thinks* Oh well, don't matter. I've got work. Kike... No, Micah... ah... *getting back to work* |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by Divepen1(mod): 11:43am On Feb 11, 2017 |
PrettySpicey:Chai... Chai |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by Oyinprince(m): 12:39pm On Feb 11, 2017 |
I salute all the writers here o ![]() Thanks for this, Divepen1 |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by Oyinprince(m): 12:40pm On Feb 11, 2017 |
Far away in Dreamland I was when I heard a familiar sound that transported me back to reality in less one minute. As usual, there was no electricity and the hotness of the room was of high degree, there was no thermometer to measure it, you would have been shocked by the temperature. I wiped the sweat which had formed on my forehead with my bare palm as I searched for the source of the sound. I quickly located the phone by the light from the blinking screen. I sat up as I picked the phone and swiped towards the green icon, there was no time to check the unsaved caller's ID as I didn't have enough airtime to call back if the call ended. "Hello, who is it?" I said into the phone but was replied with total silence. "Hello," I repeated twice without getting any reply. I paused the check the phone's screen again, the number was an unrecognized and unsaved one. The call ended before I could place the phone back to my ear. I hissed as I rested back in the bed, wondering who could be calling me by 2am. A text message entered from the same number just at the time I was about to lock the phone. I clicked on view and it read ; "Check your window and call this number when you see what I placed there." Curiosity made me spring to my feet immediately, I turned to the window at the beside and opened the curtain. There I saw something like a small board placed in a slanted position on the floor and resting on the wall. It had a screen which displayed a timer, it showed 13mins 50 secs and was counting down. I didn't understand what it was, so I switched on my phone's flashlight to check and it revealed to me the greatest surprise I've ever gotten in my life. I had only seen it in movies and never thought it to be real, I was scared out of wits. My phone vibrated, another text message had entered. "Meet me at your gate now before it goes off," the new message read. Without thinking, I proceeded out of my room and into the living room. I turned the key to the entrance door and stopped briefly to switch off my phone's flashlight as I stepped onto the balcony. I climbed down slowly and made for the gate, scared of what I was going to meet but more scared of what could happen if the bomb behind my window goes off. I had my family in the house and two nieces who had come visiting. The gate opened by itself before I got there and I stepped out without any pause. Outside the gate was brighter due to the reflection from the gate lights of our opposite neighbor's house. I saw the sender of the message, he was clothed with black coloured materials from head to toe, he had his back turned to me. I stopped on seeing him believing he would have noticed my presence. "Where's Tarasha?" He asked in a thick and harsh tone. "Ehn..." I stammered. It sounded more like a voice from my imagination. "Where's Tarasha?" He asked again. This time his voice came with a warning that he had no time to waste. "I don't know what you're talking about," I answered. Of course, I knew what he was talking about but I couldn't connect it to reality. Why should someone be asking me about a fictional character of mine, there was nothing stranger than that. He raised something up and gave a brief devilish laugh. "You have two minutes more to talk before the bomb goes off," he warned. "I don't know what you're talking about," I said, almost teary. "Tarasha is only a character in my story." "Yes, I know. You created her and you created me also, you know her whereabouts, tell me where she is now." He said as he turned and faced me. The shadow slightly covered his face but he still looked like someone familiar, perhaps I had seen him somewhere before. "Creator, do you recognize me now?" "I don't know what you're talking about, I didn't create you ." I answered shakily. "I'm Rex, you created me in your imagination. Now, tell me where Tarasha is and how I can get her easily, I'm tired of playing games with her." He barked as he took out a pistol and pointed it at me, as if the bomb alone was not enough scare. I fidgeted as I saw the shining tip of the gun, hot urine began to escape down my legs slowly. He cocked the gun. |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by Nobody: 12:54pm On Feb 11, 2017 |
Hahaha.. prettyspicey, Very nice one. ![]() |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by Nobody: 8:45pm On Feb 14, 2017 |
NevetsIbot:dis was the story that made me join NL.but u neva finished it.WHY .could u still finish it? |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by NevetsIbot(m): 9:50pm On Feb 14, 2017 |
Missperfect28:i did complete it. Just deleted it.... I'll complete it again. No worries |
| Re: An Event That Happened Between A Fictional Character And Me by Nobody: 10:04pm On Feb 14, 2017 |
NevetsIbot:okay na.:-( bt m watin ooh ![]() |
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.could u still finish it?