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| DEATH - My Childhood Friend by forandy(op): 8:43am On Mar 06, 2017 |
Death is a childhood friend of mine  I've held her close all my life In secondary school we flirted, though I could never commit And 1st year in the university, we fought when she took mom instead Yet she remained a constant comfort  As I become older we technically march closer but we grow more distant I know I want to live but she is still there At every slight issue she comforts me At every minor inconvenience she is remembered That's why I smile when I look over the edge Because even though I want to live I know she's always there |
| Re: DEATH - My Childhood Friend by forandy(op): 8:44am On Mar 06, 2017 |
Cc zynellsmum Tohpahz |
| Re: DEATH - My Childhood Friend by zynellsmum(f): 9:30am On Mar 06, 2017 |
forandy:it's really nice but at the same time creepy. ...... |
| Re: DEATH - My Childhood Friend by forandy(op): 11:12am On Mar 06, 2017 |
zynellsmum:Lol. I'm well aware swtty. Thanks for your review |
| Re: DEATH - My Childhood Friend by tohpahz(f): 7:30pm On Mar 06, 2017 |
I like the poem. And I don't like it.. Lol The personification of the word "death" |
| Re: DEATH - My Childhood Friend by forandy(op): 9:32am On Mar 07, 2017 |
tohpahz:Lol. .reality check could be terrifying at times  |
| Re: DEATH - My Childhood Friend by Nobody: 11:21pm On Mar 07, 2017 |
Nice. It's bold of you to share this. I can relate to this as well. If life is a room, death is that door I would leave ajar so I don't get claustrophobic. Problem is, if you consider it a valid option you would never truly commit to living either. And you let everything that is important slip to the edge before picking it up. Nice poem. Keep it up. |
| Re: DEATH - My Childhood Friend by forandy(op): 8:52am On Mar 08, 2017 |
RaggedyAnn:Many thanks Love your grammatical command |
| Re: DEATH - My Childhood Friend by tohpahz(f): 12:00am On Jul 11, 2017 |
forandy:wawu. Y am I jealous |
| Re: DEATH - My Childhood Friend by forandy(op): 8:52am On Jul 11, 2017 |
tohpahz:Lol... Maybe you and I have an idea you wish to have doscarded |
| Re: DEATH - My Childhood Friend by tohpahz(f): 1:02pm On Jul 11, 2017 |
forandy:No idea bro.. I'm just jealous |
| Re: DEATH - My Childhood Friend by forandy(op): 3:17pm On Jul 11, 2017 |
tohpahz:Lol... Oya be jealousing nau. Would be nice to watch you play my role  |