Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) - Literature (2)

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Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by Akazeta(f): 6:15pm On Aug 11, 2017

Beautiful story

Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by Beosten(op): 10:37pm On Aug 11, 2017

Akazeta:
You're GOOD

Thanks, bro. I had hoped to hear more of this but it seems readers don't like this kind of genre.

Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by etzskillz(m): 4:33pm On Aug 12, 2017

nice write up,pls update

Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by Pearl05(f): 6:19pm On Aug 12, 2017

Beosten:
Thanks, bro. I had hoped to hear more of this but it seems readers don't like this kind of genre.

Ha, while I ve been check you up for at least twice daily for update?
Chai! There is God ooooo

Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by Beosten(op): 8:15pm On Aug 12, 2017

Pearl05:
Ha, while I ve been check you up for at least twice daily for update?
Chai! There is God ooooo

My sister, thank you for the encouragement.

Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by horlajumokhe(f): 2:31pm On Aug 15, 2017

hungry for update, am loving this. God bless your head

Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by Beosten(op): 11:23pm On Aug 15, 2017

Pearl05:
Ha, while I ve been check you up for at least twice daily for update?
Chai! There is God ooooo

I will update it tonight.

Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by Beosten(op): 11:24pm On Aug 15, 2017

horlajumokhe:
hungry for update, am loving this. God bless your head

I'm dropping it tonight, oloruko aburo mi.

Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by Beosten(op): 11:27pm On Aug 15, 2017*

Nbbv

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Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by Beosten(op): 11:31pm On Aug 15, 2017*

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Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by Bester44(m): 9:07am On Aug 16, 2017

Keep it up.

Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by Nobody: 12:19pm On Aug 16, 2017

Nice

Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by Pearl05(f): 7:45pm On Aug 16, 2017

Well done �. But can't help it, give us more. Longer, bigger update.

Oliver Twist!

Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by Beosten(op): 8:52pm On Aug 16, 2017

Pearl05:
Well done �. But can't help it, give us more. Longer, bigger update.

Oliver Twist!

Females commenting on my thread is a good omen o. If lefulefu comments here, I will break one of his hands. Wetin I go take men do?

Pearl05, don't mind me jare. Having enough time to sit down and type is the major problem here.

Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by Nobody: 10:00pm On Aug 16, 2017

Beosten:
Females commenting on my thread is a good omen o. If lef.ulefu comments here, I will break one of his hands. Wetin I go take men do?

Pearl05, don't mind me jare. Having enough time to sit down and type is the major problem here.

Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by Beosten(op): 11:19pm On Aug 16, 2017

lefulefu:
..

Lefu how far na. As I broke pass, team slay.q.ueens don chase me out romance section come here to dey write stories.

Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by dupsai(f): 11:28pm On Aug 16, 2017

Thumps up, brother Makoko, l grew up in Ebute meta close to the bridge though.

Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by Nobody: 12:29am On Aug 17, 2017

Beosten:
Lefu how far na. As I broke pass, team slay.q.ueens don chase me out romance section come here to dey write stories.

so cos dem babes say make broke men no get erection again na im make u run bah? cheesy

na wao

so persin can not play wit u again? cheesy

Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by Beosten(op): 12:22pm On Aug 17, 2017*

Uyt

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Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by Beosten(op): 12:24pm On Aug 17, 2017*

Treewjjk

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Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by Beosten(op): 3:56pm On Aug 17, 2017

dupsai:
Thumps up, brother Makoko, l grew up in Ebute meta close to the bridge though.

You be confirmed lasgidi gal niyen o. Thanks.

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Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by etzskillz(m): 8:52pm On Aug 17, 2017

dupsai:
Thumps up, brother Makoko, l grew up in Ebute meta close to the bridge though.

interesting, I was born on d mainland but I wasn't raised there
But maktown is one hell of a slum

Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by etzskillz(m): 9:00pm On Aug 17, 2017

keep it up op

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Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by Beosten(op): 1:27am On Aug 18, 2017

etzskillz:
keep it up op

I be romance section dropout. That's why I say make I write to entertain for a while. Can this compete with nairaland best stories?

Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by etzskillz(m): 10:48am On Aug 18, 2017

Beosten:
I be romance section dropout. That's why I say make I write to entertain for a while. Can this compete with nairaland best stories?

it should

Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by Eyinimofeoluwa(f): 8:52pm On Aug 18, 2017

Nice write up Op

Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by Akazeta(f): 10:13pm On Aug 19, 2017

Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by Beosten(op): 11:17pm On Aug 19, 2017

Eyinimofeoluwa:
Nice write up Op

Thanks, dear.

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Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by Beosten(op): 11:18pm On Aug 19, 2017

Akazeta:

Madam, I sight you o. Hope my grammar not bad?

Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by Pearl05(f): 7:12am On Aug 21, 2017

Please don't be one week one post writer, lest your readers interest will shift from the work and find it difficult to recall each character's role in the story.

What am saying is try to serve it real hot �. Happy � New week.

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Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by Beosten(op): 12:32pm On Aug 21, 2017*

Bcc

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Re: Sunrise in Makoko(A short story) by Beosten(op): 12:34pm On Aug 21, 2017*

Gggf

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