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Toyin223:
Happy Ending, Weldone Sister

Thank you for reading, it means alot.!

dupsai:
This is beautiful Gracile, I so much love the story and the way it ended. May the Lord bless your heart darling. More grace, strength and inspiration.

Thanks sweetheart, you all made it possible

Ooops gracile! i didn't see this end coming.

Gracile, I love your story.
Thanks for sharing it with us.

Chommieblaq:
Gracile, I love your story.
Thanks for sharing it with us.

Thanks for reading chommie

crislyn:
Ooops gracile! i didn't see this end coming.

Lol, crislyn how would you have preferred it to end, share

gracile:
Lol, crislyn how would you have preferred it to end, share

What i mean is, i didn't know we were going to come to the end so soon. I thought we would have a big dose of rain before we miss her..Lol, it ended well. Anticipating the next one.

crislyn:
What i mean is, i didn't know we were going to come to the end so soon. I thought we would have a big dose of rain before we miss her..Lol, it ended well. Anticipating the next one.

Aww. I miss her too..
About 'next one', I'm sure it will be better by the way I see you read lots of stories here I suggest you try writing too it'd be awesome or what dyou think?

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gracile:
Aww. I miss her too..
About 'next one', I'm sure it will be better by the way I see you read lots of stories here I suggest you try writing too it'd be awesome or what dyou think?

gracile o u want me to be the comedienne of literature section abi? Hahaahaha some of us are good at reading than writing o...make i just remain for my supporters club.

Awwwn it's such a beautiful ending Gracile. Big kudos to you dear. I'm still struggling to finish my own

You nailed it!

EvaJael:
Awwwn it's such a beautiful ending Gracile. Big kudos to you dear. I'm still struggling to finish my own

you better goan update before i call the Nigeria Armed Forces, US Marines and Special Forces, FBI, CIA, MI2, MI6, DSS, Secret Service, SSS on you

crislyn:
gracile o u want me to be the comedienne of literature section abi? Hahaahaha some of us are good at reading than writing o...make i just remain for my supporters club.

the urge one day will come for you to write don't worry, I used to be in your shoes

EvaJael:
Awwwn it's such a beautiful ending Gracile. Big kudos to you dear. I'm still struggling to finish my own

Thank you evajael, bydway lemme go catch up on hidden diamond did I tell you I was inspired to write a poem through the title of your novel I could post it if you want to see

gracile:
Thank you evajael, bydway lemme go catch up on hidden diamond did I tell you I was inspired to write a poem through the title of your novel I could post it if you want to see

Awwwn are you serious? Biko post it abeg. My eyes are itching to read

cyber5:
you better goan update before i call the Nigeria Armed Forces, US Marines and Special Forces, FBI, CIA, MI2, MI6, DSS, Secret Service, SSS on you

Lol for only me? I'll update o. It's just that I've been a lil busy

gracile:
the urge one day will come for you to write don't worry, I used to be in your shoes

E no go happen..my brain doesn't even think of anything else than money and design.

EvaJael:
Lol for only me? I'll update o. It's just that I've been a lil busy

lol


that not all sef, i still got like 10 left

crislyn:
E no go happen..my brain doesn't even think of anything else than money and design.

You do graphics?



Speaking of money, the rate i dream of money these days is something else.



There's this new way i earn now. If you're interested

EvaJael:
Awwwn are you serious? Biko post it abeg. My eyes are itching to read

Here you go:

Title - Hidden diamond

Deep in the core of our essence
Lies a yolk, pure and unsullied
Devoted to its stand;
It, like a mother brings forth life
And death in block blows
Beyond it's false pretense,
Is a gruesome genuineness
Beyond it's cloak of mischief
A hurting heart is hidden
Begs proudly to be beheld
Clamours in silence to be heard

If only it were transparent;
And has not an opaque barricade
That hides it from quick eyes
If only it would shed off the dead scales
Accumulated from many a bitter broth from life's cruel cup
You'll see it shines a glitters fine
And you'll know;
That deep in the core of our essence
Lies a hidden diamond
Devoted to it's stand
Be it ugly, good or bad

©Grace Okoliko 2017

gracile:
Here you go:

Title - Hidden diamond

Deep in the core of our essence
Lies a yolk, pure and unsullied
Devoted to its stand;
It, like a mother brings forth life
And death in block blows
Beyond it's false pretense,
Is a gruesome genuineness
Beyond it's cloak of mischief
A hurting heart is hidden
Begs proudly to be beheld
Clamours in silence to be heard

If only it were transparent;
And has not an opaque barricade
That hides it from quick eyes
If only it would shed off the dead scales
Accumulated from many a bitter broth from life's cruel cup
You'll see it shines a glitters fine
And you'll know;
That deep in the core of our essence
Lies a hidden diamond
Devoted to it's stand
Be it ugly, good or bad

©Grace Okoliko 2017

Oh my God! This is lovely bae. Gosh gosh gosh. I love it more than I love Jathniel biko. You're talented dear. #kisses

Interesting story.. Well done sis

EvaJael:
Oh my God! This is lovely bae. Gosh gosh gosh. I love it more than I love Jathniel biko. You're talented dear. #kisses

Lool thank you but biko jathniel is way cuter

princ007:
Interesting story.. Well done sis

Thank you for reading ma

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