"Daddy am through with cleaning my room"he said as he entered his dad's room
"sit"
"Okay sir"Daniel said sitting down on the chair opposite his dad's reading table
"Daniel"
"sir"
"hmm....you know that you are now an adult and you are supposed to have like one.I and your mom are now seprated so there is no room for any rubbish.You are 19 going to 20 in the next five month and i cant see any sign of marturity only that you are becoming one physically and not mentally ,you think every thing in this world is for play bt its not.You have to face your studies the more and play less.I have made a decision that you will be moving to the states to complete your studies and establish yourself and you are going to start all over again so start getting ready"he said.
"yes sir"Daniel did not know what to do and dint know what came over his father after he got a divorce with his mother he became a really strict man.He didnt know what happened btw them but he knew his mum really broke his father's heart .Hhe was going to leave his chicks and girlfriends here.SHIT!!!. Well he had no option than to obey his father
"You may leave now"williams said.
Immedately when he got to his room he picked up his iphone 7 and called his buddy
"Hey buddy am coming over gat something to tell you"he said to joe
"Okay buddy i'll be expecting you''
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U ar wonderful, amazing nd goodwriter.

Keep it coming

hello morning.......hope am not late? lemme grab a seat....where that girl selling coke?

Lets join d moving train....kip it up.

Interesting story, watch the way you use pronouns, I assume the first person I should only be used for the main character Tolu, also the development of the story drifted at the second death, I became quite disconnected at that point...Nice start.

U guys tenks alot...i will try to kip it moving

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Interesting story, watch the way you use pronouns, I assume the first person I should only be used for the main character Tolu, also the development of the story drifted at the second death, I became quite disconnected at that point...Nice start.

this story has four main characters u will get to understand

Interesting story, more update pls

Joe put his phone in his jogging pants and made his way into the house. He went straight to the kitchen to get a bottle of water but on getting there he forgot his mission. Bolu was busy chopping something on the chop board. He could not get his head off her since when she came to the house. She was the first girl he would ever see beautiful without make up. Since he had started dating he had never dated a girl that dint wear make up. She was beautiful as a sunflower,with full succulent lips,hazel eyes and a perfect shape. Even a blind man could see that she was hour glass with the baggy gown she wore. He stood there for like five minutes and he dint know he was there. She opened the top cabinet to take a bowl and could not reach it. He tip toed behind her put his hand across her waist and the left one in the cabinet. She was startled and she turned back immediately with his and around her waist she had no where to go and he put down the bowl. He looked down at her lips and without thinking he kissed her. She was dump founded but she kissed him back. Her mum used to give her light kisses but it was not like this. Her body responded to the kiss and filled her with joy she locked her hands behind his neck and drew him closer. He put his hand behind her and carried her up the table and as he wanted to cup her breast a sound of someone coughing came from the door way and they broke apart .
"Did i interrupt anything"Daniel said with a smirk on his lips. Bolu got down from the table and turned to what she was doing in embarrassment .
"Hey guy,awfa na"Joe said going to meet his naughty friend acting as if nothing happened
"Nothing is far oo"Daniel said walking into the mini sitting room with Joe
"Whats the matter"joe said with a frown on his face.
"before i talk who is that maid you were all over"
"bolu,she just came here. She is disturbing my mind and also driving me crazy"
"i thought you said you dont sleep with ur maids"
"am not going to sleep with her what i feel for her is diffrent but it has to stop cause am already engaged you know"
"yea"
"so what did you want to say"
"my dad just told me that i wil....."
"am sorry to interupt,your food is ready"bolu said and left
"lets go and eat"
"yea so i was saying that my father said that i am going to complete my studies in the us"
"wow same here my father said he was tried of the strikes so am also going to the us"
"so we are in the same shoes all we need to do now is to convince our dads to enroll us in the same school"daniel said happily
"now can we eat"
"yes"
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"I also" she heard joe say. So he was going to the us. Since he was going she had to stop whatever was going on in her mind. She just got here and she was kissing her boss's son. Everything had to end if she didnt want to be trown out. What will her boss do if she found out. That she does not want to think about. Her heart dint stop yearning for his touch but she kept it no one must find out. She cleared her thoughts and carried the bin for disposal

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Nice one dear.

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