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| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by germaphobe(m): 6:45am On Mar 24, 2019 |
so rosemary33 you though you can continue this story without me abi, na lie!!, i don catch up with una. Oya kwantinue ma'am |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by Rosemary33(op): 8:36am On Mar 24, 2019 |
rukidanty:yes o, I will message you |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by Rosemary33(op): 8:36am On Mar 24, 2019 |
germaphobe:hahahhaaaa chai! You are funny o, Biko don't call police for me o |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by Reflex01(m): 5:01pm On Mar 24, 2019 |
Madam Rosy tanx for the update, biko kwantinue |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by queenitee(f): 9:31pm On Mar 24, 2019 |
Thank you |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by Rosemary33(op): 7:06pm On Mar 27, 2019 |
Reflex01:I am so sorry for being quiet for long now. , the truth is that this story is almost at the conclusion stage. One or two episodes remaining to go . |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by Rosemary33(op): 7:21pm On Mar 27, 2019 |
Meanwhile, I am working on my next story, so I want to ask you my good readers: what would you want to read again from me? What do you want me to write about? Romance, Horror, Crime, or a story like this one we are about to finish. Let me know your thoughts Secondly, what would you have loved to see in this story "Victims" what didn't seat well with you? What of the characters, what did you love or hate about them. Where would you have loved for them to end up? What of me? Criticize me Biko, I will not cry ![]() |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by Rosemary33(op): 7:38pm On Mar 27, 2019 |
Ehe ehem.... I got a surprise gift yesterday from rukidanty. I seriously wasn't expecting it, but she decided to surprise me with a Token ![]() Chai ruki, you will have more money in your bank account o, NEPA will not cut your light at all God bless you so much, I really appreciate. You have encouraged me with this gift. Respect to you |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by Nobody: 9:11pm On Mar 27, 2019 |
Rosemary33:First off, I'll start by commending your sincerity towards we your readers. You're really worthy of emulation!!! Then, congratulations for being able to paint the true history of a national event in words. You're really a fierce writer!!! I can still remember like it was yesterday when I stumbled upon this story and what captivated my attention was the opening intro... Twas just like a movie.And since then, I've been following quite closely. My favorite character in this story is Ukuoma.. well she's actually the hero anyways . Her character depicts the strong doggedness of every female folks trying to survive in harsh conditions. God bless you all. Well I hope she gets Justice... I forsee the government helping her and she in turn would establish an NGO . Every other characters in the story would smile at last due to Ukuoma affluence. Now to the real koko gangan... Maybe in your quest to quickly write and update us your reader's , you made some major/minor grammatical blunders in some episodes of the story. So my dear, next time take time to proofread and edit before posting .My last submission.... You're a highly intelligent and prolific writer who understands how to paint situations in words. Thumbs up my dear... You're going places. Chinue Achebe , Chiamanda Adiche, Wole Soyinka and others go dey learn from you. Just continue your good works. God bless you!!!!!!!!!! |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by rukidanty: 11:04pm On Mar 27, 2019 |
Rosemary33:well thanks for the compliment but we would like to read a romance story from you and i am not a she but he,ok?well i would love the imam to die and ukwoma to be compensated for all the pains she has gone through and live happily again |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by Rosemary33(op): 12:20am On Mar 28, 2019 |
cuteguy14911:Thank you so much much for your sincerity and everything. I really appreciate you. I will strive to do better and will not disappoint. |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by Rosemary33(op): 12:22am On Mar 28, 2019 |
rukidanty: |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by Nobody: 2:59am On Mar 28, 2019 |
Rosemary33:Thank you too... Me am actually a lover of horror stories... Guess maybe that's what raised my interest when I started following this story. I wouldn't mind if you write another. |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by FortunateB(f): 7:32am On Mar 28, 2019 |
Rosemary33:Personally I will like a Romance story next. The story victims is nice but the pains suffered by Ukwuoma was too much, I also didn't like what Ife went through it was way too much for her. I hope Ukwuoma and Ife find peace at the end. Talking of criticising you, I haven't seen any where for that yet, your updates are frequent and you have your audience at heart also. Keep up the good work and the sky will be your starting point, Kudos. |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by rukidanty: 8:00am On Mar 28, 2019 |
Rosemary33:i understand but its a unisex name |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by Smith06: 12:03pm On Mar 28, 2019 |
Rosemary33:Speaking for myself I will prefer romance. Victim look real and is looking like a story I can relate with, so I'll like Yusuf to repent and live a good life after, I'll like ukwoma and Ife to find peace |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by Rosemary33(op): 10:37pm On Mar 28, 2019 |
CHAPTER 35 She didn’t know how long she stood by the grave side, before ‘Iya’ walked up to her, both women stood in silence talking to the dead in prayers. Ado-Odo didn’t change much from the last time she was there with Tunde and the children, except for more brick houses that has replaced some old mud ones, with Aluminum roofing sheet instead of raffias. It wasn’t difficult locating the village after four years, she met Iya in the farm weeding, her old shaking hands held the little hoe firmly, her wrapper was on her waist while her dry long breasts flaps like cocoyam leafs each time she moves her hands. Ukwuoma stood with the boy and watched the old woman, she fought her emotions, “Iya” she called out The old woman paused and looked back, she thought she wouldn’t recognize her at first but the old woman did, “Iyawo mi” Iya called out with her shaky voice “Mama!” Ukwuoma called out, her voice shook with emotions. The old woman tried running towards her, but she got to the woman faster, they held each other in a warm embrace “Iyawo mi…o ti igba pipe…” “Beeni Mama” It took the old woman sometime to notice the small boy that stood some feet away from them, she eases herself away from the embrace and her gaze held that of the boy, “Mi o ti ri eni yi ri (I have not met this one before)” she said. Ukwuoma followed her gaze, unsure of how the old woman would accept the news that brought her home. “Wa ki o si ijoko isale mama (Come and seat down mama)” It was obvious the woman was no longer as strong as she used to be, Ukwuoma led her back to the house and the boy followed “Awon iyoku da? (where are the others)” Iya had asked after she was settled on her favorite seat. Ukwuoma didn’t answer, she had wondered how she would be able to look Iya on the face and tell her of what life brought to them, of the visit death paid her and how he left with everything she has. The old woman searched her face for answers, she felt there was something wrong; “Iyawo mi…awon omo mi da? Oko re nko? (my wife, where are my children? What of your husband?)” Iya abandoned her seat and was seated on the ground by the time Ukwuoma finished narrating her story, the old woman wore her face as hard as a stone, but one could hear her groan while she shook her head and her outstretched legs, she was in pains “Oko o mi …” she soliloquized, a name she called Kunle her only child after twenty-one years. Iya was the first wife who was unfortunate with child bearing, for she was always visited with an ‘abiku’ a child that brought joy and sorrow with him, he would come and go after three months. When the fifth child died, it became necessary that a sacrifice should be made, “You are called to be an Ifa priestess” the Babalawo had told her “You shouldn’t have gotten married, but you are stubborn. Ifa must be appeased before your child will stay” And Ifa was appeased, two months later, she was pregnant again for the sixth time. “He must be presented to Ifa eight days after delivery if you want him to live” When Kunle came out, he was so beautiful that it scared her. He looked like a child from the spirit world, but his laughter was very adorable. Kunle was her world, the air she breath. When her husband talked about taking another wife five years after Kunle was born and there was no sign of another child, she gave him her blessings and concentrated on her only son Kunle. “Oko o mi… (my Husband)” was what he called Kunle, the gods have cheated her, they have played tricks with her. Why would they allow her so much happiness and took it away before her very eyes? They would have waited for her to die first. It was mid night when the two women dug a shallow grave and buried the bones, while the young woman went back inside the house with the small boy, the old woman sat on top of the grave soliloquizing and asking the unseen gods some questions which was never answered. Ukwuoma lay in the dark, her eyes opened and her mind afar gone. So as both women stood by the grave two days later, Ukwuoma watched as ants burrow tiny holes on the grave, she watched them make their way in and out of the holes, she also saw a lizard waiting patiently by the side of the grave, soon it would make its move towards the unsuspected ants “Omo na ma duro (The boy will stay)” Iya said, “maybe… Ifa brought him for me, knowing I have nothing else left” “o seun mama (thank you Mama)” They talked about the boy before, “He would remind me of what I lost” Iya had said and Ukwuoma understood so she didn’t try to persuade the old woman. “I am old now but I have hope” Iya said while both of them kept their gazes on the grave that housed the bones of those they loved. * “Auntie one Army man dey look for you” Ukwuoma was at the cassava farm when a visitor for her was announced. The child that brought the news ran off before she could even ask who the visitor was, not that the child would answer. She unconsciously wiped the dirt in her palms on her wrapper, tied her head tie stronger and came to meet her visitor. The Man was already chatting with Iya before she walked in, she didn’t recognize the face at first, “He said he is your friend from Abuja” Iya said in Yoruba “no mama, her friend from Abuja sent me” Lieutenant Abdul corrected Ukwuoma drew a chair closer and sat down, if there was a message from Abuja, then it must be either from Kafaya or Ifeoluwa. Iya left the two and went inside. “How is Kafaya? What news did you bring?” “I thought I wouldn’t find you again” Lieutenant Abdul said Ukwuoma didn’t recognize him still, she looked at him for a long time without any clue of who he was “I was there in the church when the boy almost died…you were determined to die with him” He said. Then she remembered; “It was you…you were the Army man that couldn’t leave us to die” Ukwuoma commented with gratitude in her voice “Allah forbid that I would make the same mistake twice in my life, I wouldn’t have forgiving myself. That scene would have hunted me forever” He told her the story that had stayed with him for years, the story of his twin brother “I am still in the force because of him, I want to justify his death, I want to tell him that I still fight for the cause he died fighting” After his story, Ukwuoma didn’t have much to say, she sat with a stick in her hand, flogging the sand “I looked for you at your place in Abuja, Kafaya told me you have gone” “How is she” “She is fine, said I should greet you” He searched his pocket and brought out a brown envelop “She wrote you a letter” Ukwuoma took the envelope from him. Cleaned her palm on her wrapper and began to read “we miss you every day and wish you were here with us. Ife is fine, she is home with me and will be starting school next term. Though she slides into depression once in a while, but gradually she will be completely okay. They have not been able to locate the man that took the boy, that man we saw in the market. But his father is still in prison though no news of him being sentenced. Abuja is still hot, protests and riots. We have not heard about any death yet. I have journalists knocking at my door or calling me on phone every day, they want to speak to you or the boy. I told them you have travelled home, but didn’t tell them where, I think you don’t need the exposure neither does the boy, they may come for him. I can’t tell your story to them either, I may not be good on it, it is better told by you. You have become a celebrity here though, your face and that of the boy are on the newspapers and television stations. I love watching your face with Ife in the evenings, they would deliberate on what happened and would call you a strong woman and a hero. When are you coming back? Please write to me if you can With Love K and Ife. Ukwuoma smiled, she folded the letter and slip it inside her wrapper. “I have not seen the boy” Abdul said, looking around “He is playing in the next hut with other children” she cut her finger nail with her teeth and spat out “How did you find me?” “Kafaya told me what you told her, the name of the village and your mother-in law’s name” “Hmm” “Why here…why not with your parents?” Abdul asked her “I can’t face them” Abdul understood that feeling, when his brother died, he couldn’t face his parents either, he had wanted to die rather than go home. He didn’t know why this woman would want to avoid going back to her parents, but for him; it was guilt and shame, the feeling that he wasn’t able to protect his own, he failed his family. “Why did you come looking for me?” Ukwuoma asked him He didn’t know why, but she had not left his thought after that ordeal. Maybe she was his connection to the past, maybe he saw in her the strength he didn’t have, maybe there was something more. “I don’t know…I felt I should look for the woman everyone is talking about lately” they both laughed, a laughter she was having for the first time since she came back. He looked at his watch and stood up, “I will be going now, I f I am lucky I will follow our military van back to Abuja tomorrow morning” “wait!” Ukwuoma hurried inside the hut, scribbled few words on a dirty paper and hurried back to meet Abdul “Give this to Kafaya…I can find something more appropriate to write to her with” “no problem, I know she will be thrilled to read a letter from you” “I don’t even know your name” Ukwuoma said “Abdul” “Thank you Abdul” He nodded and left. Iya who has been watching them from the window closed the window. * Somewhere in Port Harcourt city, hidden from prying eyes and suspicious minds, surrounded by bushed and a dirty river, with a narrow part-way, a covet meeting of sixteen men went on. The man who stood as the spokesman was simply following instructions given by a higher authority who he chose not to disclose his identity. “the Imam needs to be moved out of the country without raising any dust” “But why? Can’t we leave him out of this and look for another person?” “We have talked about this severally, he commands large followership, we don’t have time to start making fresh negotiations” “Don’t you think he could take advantage of this opportunity like he did with Kazeem and his men?” another asked “They allowed him call the shots, he gave them conditions and they obeyed him, this time we are calling the shot and the Lord Supreme has made it possible for him to follow when we call” The spokesman looked at every Man in the room, he was a good Orator and commands respect “You need to see our man now, he is more like a puppy than a bull dog, he will play balls” “And if he doesn’t?” “But he will…oh yes he will” Mr Spokesman had a smirk on his face. The men didn’t have much to argue about, anything to keep the country under their leadership, as far as this unseen lord supreme sanctions it. The 2003 election would be fierce and the party would do all they could to keep the power. the game would be to use the enemy’s weapon against them, they also need to keep the religious and ethnic crisis going, on the other hand they would fight it openly, while throwing blames on the opposition. They would win the sympathy of the people; it would make the presidency look competent in fighting insecurity. They would visit IDP’S and make fancy speeches, donate monies, make press conferences and snap pictures with the military. Imam husayn would give them what they want, he would bring in the arms, train the men, blow the country hot and allow then do the chasing, the catching and the parading of suspects. Agreements has not been reach with the Imam who was about to lose his mind, just the way they wanted him to be. “So where do we send him to…where he will not be traced by the press” “I vote for Dubai” “Dubai is too close; we can’t take that risk” “let’s drop him off to Pakistan, I think he must have connections there already” “That will not be a good idea either, he could get too comfortable over there, and with some skims he could slip off out fingers and turn back to haunt us” The men deliberated and couldn’t not agree on a decision, “Gentlemen” The spokesman rose again “We may not get what we want if we continue arguing and deliberating like school children. I think we should send him to somewhere less attractive and comfort…I suggest Kenya” he searched the faces of the men seated in the room for disapproval and found none “So shall we vote?” “Kenya it is” “Kenya” “I say we allow that man rest in peace in prison and go for another instrument” “What is it going to be Mark” Mr spokesman asked impatiently “Okay…Kenya it is” “Right gentlemen, we will assemble again if need be. Be careful while leaving, we don’t want any of us followed” It was late when they brought the meeting to a close. |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by Ann2012(f): 10:55pm On Mar 28, 2019 |
Thanks for the update |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by rukidanty: 11:23pm On Mar 28, 2019 |
thanks for the update and ukuoma might fall in love with abdul and live happily |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by Michelle55: 11:47pm On Mar 28, 2019 |
rukidanty:Chai.. Don't spoil the suspense please Thanks for the update dear |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by Nobody: 12:17am On Mar 29, 2019 |
Thanks for the update... Happily ever after is about to happen just like I predicted |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by LisaAnne(f): 3:47am On Mar 29, 2019 |
Rosemary33: |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by SkimpleD: 5:17pm On Mar 29, 2019 |
LisaAnne, we don’t do that here o ![]() |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by LisaAnne(f): 1:39am On Mar 30, 2019 |
SkimpleD:sorry.... |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by queenitee(f): 3:48pm On Mar 31, 2019 |
rukidanty:My thoughts |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by Nobody: 9:22pm On Mar 31, 2019 |
Rosemary33:criti wetin.....nothing lyk criticism 4 dis ya tory.....All i can say is dat u are a talented writer.Infact u are a time bomb with ya creativity |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by PrudySara(f): 12:59pm On Apr 01, 2019 |
I really have nothing to criticize about, Rosemary33 your writing is indeed superb!! I don't know, but I kinda relate easily to this particular story.. Meanwhile, I'll prefer your new story to be Romance Rosemary33: |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by Rosemary33(op): 3:41pm On Apr 01, 2019 |
thank you all so much, I am done on this story, the rest is left for your Imagination Lol . i want to introduce the next story to you'THE SOLDIER THAT LOVES ME- A FAT GIRL'S STORY. I will send the link shortly, thank you people so much for following and reading, i hope you will follow this new one and make your comments, you guys mean so much to me. i love you all |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by Rosemary33(op): 3:43pm On Apr 01, 2019 |
cuteguy14911, don't worry i am going to write a horror story specifically for you. but based on popular demand, this next one is a love and romance story, with a little bit humor |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by Rosemary33(op): 4:02pm On Apr 01, 2019 |
https://www.nairaland.com/5110889/soldier-loves-me-fat-girls#77175117 click on the link to start following the new story!!! i am already loving the lady Elizabeth wow!! |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by Taniaa(f): 4:04pm On Apr 01, 2019*. Modified: 6:54am On Apr 24, 2019 |
Rosemary33: |
| Re: VICTIMS- Fiction by Taniaa(f): 4:05pm On Apr 01, 2019*. Modified: 6:54am On Apr 24, 2019 |
Rosemary33:following keenly |
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