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Here already
Nice work

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Wow! So captivating!

thanks man.

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Thanks very much for continuing.

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Wow! You good!

Please next!

Wow! What an update.

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Wow. The vengeful cheetah is so powerful. This is awesome!

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Wow! This is breathtaking!

Just one word. "BREATHTAKING "

Wow!

You are gooddd!

thanks guys. glad you're enjoying it.

Cool Bro

O boy na story i dey read so ? I swear the tory make brain die no be small.

Ahhhh.....

This is awesome!!!

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King of folklore....

My only worry is that you are too detailed. Are you.......?

maybe i am. but all that will be sorted during the final edit. thanks for pointing it out.

Demosalesman:
maybe i am. but all that will be sorted during the final edit. thanks for pointing it out.

No, you aren't too detailed. Your work is good as it is.

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Demosalesman:
maybe i am. but all that will be sorted during the final edit. thanks for pointing it out.

ahhhh...not what I meant oh. I was trying to point out that you know so much about mystic or spiritual stuffs. I want to believe no one can curl up such detailed spiritual things and sayings out of wind without being close to them. Either way... you are a raw genius bro.

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Please who took the princess..the gimmiods or slavers?

none of the above. she was transported away by a protective spell.

Demosalesman your story is just the best on nairaland so far..
The twist, description, suspense are just mindblowing..
I thought stories as these no longer exist on nairaland,..
Keep it coming bro...am following back2back..
More grace!!

skyblueking:
Demosalesman your story is just the best on nairaland so far..
The twist, description, suspense are just mindblowing..
I thought stories as these no longer exist on nairaland,..
Keep it coming bro...am following back2back..
More grace!!

sometimes while reading... part of me will think am one of the actors. Like that elders meeting at the palace. That scene dey burst my brain.