Cass01:


You are really doing a great job here, man
Your stories are really interactive and sense making, even if you had not mention me, I would still be here sir
I owe you two olosho

Thank you, I really appreciate

Brian is a smart guy, i like him.

Ehm... Boss Silver abeg i no talk say make you kill am oh.

Nothing is hidden under the sun, there will always be consequences

Thanks silver

This is getting real.

Something is about to go down.


And Silver is doing really well by keeping it away.


Good job manh

Silver this is simply amazing but why do I think you're rushing the story..just an observation

Their biggest mistake is leaving her shoes and bag behind because their story is not going to fall together without it

Lilly4endu:
Their biggest mistake is leaving her shoes and bag behind because their story is not going to fall together without it

You're right, but wait, isn't her phone in the bag, police might trace it to them

Where i wan start to talk now? Am scared o.

Hmm. I seriously feel for mark. There is no worse feeling than knowing you just ended a life.(am yet to experience it o).
Thanks for the update sir. You are doing an amazing job

This is truly heartbreaking for Mark o, I just hope he doesn't take a drastic decision because of guilt

I still don't think Mark killed Abigail but fingers crossed.
Thanks Silver

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Oga Silver1996 you are the outright Master of Suspense ...
More Grease to your elbow and ink to your pen

I don't think Mark killed her , but if it isn't him, who killed her

Mr Silver1996, u are the best, more inspiration... Brian get mind oh. Thanks OP

showgoeson:
I don't think Mark killed her , but if it isn't him, who killed her

Only Silver1996 will know that... Abigail may have committed suicide after having her big d**k desire fulfill.

Na wa oooo, wetin come kill Abigail like this

Thanks for the update

O ga oooo


Thanks for the update,

Ann2012:
Na wa oooo, wetin come kill Abigail like this

Thanks for the update

Maybe she was poisoned prior the time she went to f**k mark

Nice one silver

i dedicate this comment to my older fictional name sake jeffrey with whom i share similar xteristics/experience

friends just kps calling us V-guys

THE BACHELORS
EPISODE 7
EPISODE TITLE- Comes the guilt








Mark stepped into the shower, toes flinching as they touched the chilled ceramic floor, his mind was in shreds, he would never forget the fact that he killed someone.., he turned the dial, old and metallic, releasing thousands of lukewarm drops, darkening his hair and trickled down his back, his eyes fell closed over and over, each time showing him her dead body like photographs...., the water pours down, it drips by his side, as his mind fades into dullness and everything is a foggy illusion. The sensation of the steamy water calms him but fails to get the taunting memory of what he did from his head...

He turn off the shower, grab a towel and step out of the bathroom.., not bothering to change into any shirt, he sat on the bed allowing his head to revisit the memory, the painful moment of his life.....

"Mark..."Brian call out knocking on the room door..

Mark ignored the knock and drown into an attitude of profound sadness..., her body was found the previous day and questions were asked on how she died.., the news of her death rented all newspapers and news stations, people are saying in social media that she deserves what she got while others assume other things, they rant insults on her memory and it pained him.., every fibre in his body wants him to confess..., he wants to be relieve from the guilt that was slowly devouring him from the inside.., how long will he live with the guilt.., he knows very well his life will never be normal again.., never will he derived pleasure on doing things he do before because he'll always be reminded of what he did, always be reminded he should be in jail and not live like others...

"Mark...."Brian shouted again

Limp extremities creaked and cracked under the pressure of Mark's body. Abigail's lifeless corpse came like flashes in his head.., he couldn't sleep the previous night neither did he sleep the night before because whenever he closed his eyes, he sees her crying out for help, just for a sign someone was there for her, but her whimper was slowly lost in the thinning air.......

"Mark open the door or I swear I'll break it down.."Brian retorted, his voice carrying a thread of anger that went beyond his need to enter the room..

The guilt drained through Mark rather than skating over his skin. It travelled through every cell to reach the ground..., fatigue engraved in his worn face, he manage to stand up, drag his feet towards the door and opened it...

Brian suck on his teeth as he walk into the room, he stare at Mark, watching him sit before he moved his eyes around and realise the food he brought to him before he went out was still on the floor just as he left it....

"What's your problem man..?"Brian queried with shrugged shoulders..."Do you want to kill yourself...?"

Mark didn't reply, his friends will never understand the horror that is happening inside him, they'll never understand how it feels to have your hands sour with someone's blood.., how it feels to be the one who ends someone life, someone's dreams and aspirations....

Brian grunted, look away before facing him again...."Look man she's dead, she's not coming back again, starving yourself or living like a breathing corpse won't bring her back.., so snap out of it man.., I need you back..."

"What are people saying about her death..?"Mark ask in a low tone

"What people are saying about her dead aren't our business anymore man.., her body was found in the gutter, people will surely talk..."

Mark lour his head, the guilt inside him was a hollowness. He can't tell what's worse. Sometimes the hollowness becomes a shell, holding in a thousand oceans of tears. Sometimes though, it holds a thousand pieces of glass that are wedged in between his soul and body.and he fears he might break and give up.....

"Mark..."Brian snapped...."What happened to you could happen to anyone.., it isn't your fault she died okay..., you said it yourself, you don't even remember if...

"I want to be left alone Brian.."Mark cut in not raising his face to look at him..

"Why, so you can keep starving yourself and eventually kill yourself.., you haven't even eaten anything since yesterday..."

"I'm not hungry..."

Brian heaved a weakening sigh...."Look, I brought someone to cheer you up again.., she's beautiful..., have some sex and forget your sorrows man..., drown them inside the condom.."

"I want to be left alone Mark.."He said again..

"Fine..."Brian said in surrender..."Only now I'm going to have both of them..."

Mark didn't reply, didn't have the strength to, all he is now is a roll of sadness like every other emotion has been pushed from his being. Where there was love, light, laughter was now an aching hollowness that demands nothing but his total destruction and it was working.., he's at the verge of self destruct and he fears he might not be able to turn back....

"Fine..."Brian said when he waited too long for a reply..."But eat your food..., I'll hate to have another corpse lying around here..."He added taking one glance at him before he walked out of the room...








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When Jeffery heard the giggling and loud hysteric laughter again, he opened his eyes totally agreeing with himself there's no way he's going to have a nice siesta with all the noise coming from the parlour...
He sat up and held the pillow to himself, his mind wandered off to the body and he quickly stood from the bed to shake the thought off..., Abigail's lifeless body had given him two nights of no sleep because he kept seeing her face.., her cold face staring at him....

He exhale, grab a pair of trouser as he quickly decides to join Brian in the parlour and join in the laughter...., satisfy with his clothes, he wore a mild perfume and walk out of his room and heads towards the parlour all the while wondering how to start a conversation with the girls..

Since his secondary school days, he has been the shy type, the type no one notices in the class but in his case he was and that's because teachers always point at him to answer questions since he was always quiet and love sitting in the front..., then in secondary school he hated the backseat because he always thought the backseat were meant for the noise makers and the dull ones...

He stopped in his tracks when he saw one of the two girls Brian had brought to the house.., he couldn't believe it..., she's the same girl he's been thinking and having all sorts of fantasies about...

"My man..."Brian hailed when he saw Jeffery standing gormlessly...

Brian's voice jolted him from his big thoughts.., a bit abashed, he moved towards Brian..."Let me talk to you for a sec man.."

"Okay.."Brian dragged between his teeth standing up to follow Jeffery outside...

"Where did you meet that girl..?"Jeffery ask the moment he was sure they were out of earshot...

"Which girl..?"

"The fair one man.., Benita..."

"You know her..?"Brian ask

"Of course I know her, she's my crush..."

Brian flinch with surprise before he crackled..."Are you serious..?"

"If I wasn't serious, I won't be telking you this..., I've fatasize having sex with her more times than I can count.., how did you meet her, what's she to you..., wait, she be olosho...?"

"Yeah kinda..., actually I brought her here to be with Mark.., but that guy nor wan get sense..."

"Come on man.."Jeffery said.."You know that's a bad idea, it's just been two days since this whole thing happen.., I don't think Mark will have sex for a very long time...."

Brian sigh.."Yes you right.., so that means, Benita is yours.."

"Wait, are you serious..?"

"You get condom..?"Brian ask in pidgin

"Yes na.."

"Wetin you dey take dem dey do..., nor be balloon dem be o.."

"That's an insult Brian.."

Brian laugh.."Come on, I'm just kidding..., come inside.."

Jeffery lick his lips and followed...., when they were in, he fixed his eyes on her.., God she was so beautiful and her eyes were magical.., her fair skin was worth devouring by his tongue.., he watch as Brian approached her, whisper some things into her ear before he extended his hands to the other girl who took it...

Brian eye-beared him before he went outside with the other girl leaving only him and Benita...

Jeffery legs shook as he search for words to say to her.., this is his dream girl..., too bad though she's an almost olosho...

"Hi.."He mutter at her

"Hi.."She said back barely smiling and it scared Jeffery..., one more reason adding to the reasons he doesn't talk to the girls he crushes on..

"So.......

"Should we go to your room...?"She cut in

Jeffery mouth dropped, that was quick, he wonder what Brian must have told her..., he must have told her he needed sex..., he wanted to indulge her in a meaningful conversation first before sex.., but since she wants to start with sex before conversation, who's he to deny her such proposal...

"Okay..."He replied slowly standing up from the chair.., when she stood up too, he realise she was wearing a short gown that barely reached her knee.., but damn, her face, her well package breast was already giving him a hard on....Congil na bastard..

Like an obedient boy, he walked her to his room, his heart rent as she look around, he wasn't the dirty type that leaves his room untidy and unkempt but he was still ashamed she might find a fault with his arrangement...

"Your bed is soft.."She said sitting on it..

He had no idea how to react to the kind remark, so he just smile like an amateur madman....., his mouth dropped and his heart pulsated when she began to pull off her gown revealing her pant and her bra..., just then he knew, it's about to get hot.., it's time to break the yoke of virginity....

"You're shaking.."She said dropping her gown on the ground...

He poked his eyes out surprise how she knew he was nervous...

"Are you a virgin or what..?"

"I'm not a virgin.."He lied immediately.., he didn't want to be laughed at and telling her he's a virgin will bring that....."I just like my women taking control.."He added when no other word suffice..

She pout and move closer to him, then she helped him took his shirt off before she unbuttoned his jean and dragged it down then she peered her eyes at the bulge in his tight underwear..

Jeffery wondered why she was staring at bulge instead of just grabbing it, pull his boxers down like they do in pòrn and take his dick to her mouth...

As if she read his mind, she pull down his briefs, when his erected dick bounced up, she stare at his face..

"What.."Jeffery asked immediately.."You don't want this..?"He asked totally bothered by what was running in her mind.., there it hit him.., his penis isn't that big, neither was it thick like Mark's.., she must have seen penis way bigger than his..

She didn't say anything, instead she roam her hands on his dry chest and push him on the bed..."I want to be a mummy to you.."She said climbing on him and sitting on his penis...

He groaned in pain and pleasure as she grind her waist on the shaft of his dick..., when he felt a pour out of precum, he feared he might spill even before he got fùcked....

"Hold me.."She said

"Okay.."He said and sat up to hold her stomach feeling scared to hold her waist..

"No not my stomach.."She said.. "Hold me on my waist..."

"Okay.."He said obediently and wrapped his hand around her waist, their heads were just a finger distance....

"Relax.."She said.."You're breathing too fast.."

He felt a tickle of embarrassment, it certainly wasn't his fault his heart chose this moment of all moments to disgrace him...

"Now lean your mouth on my neck.."She said

His head brood over how they do it in porn, he did as she ask leaning his mouth on her neck.., her neck was soft, pretty, if only he was a vampire...

"Now kiss my neck.."She said

His head took a second before it sent a command to his mouth..., a bit confused on how to kiss her.., he perked the tender skin of her neck..

"Are you sure you've had sex with a woman..?"She asked immediately

"Mm-hmm.."He replied nodding his head.., avoiding any other question, he kiss her neck again, this time staying longer than the first.

She heave a low moan.."Bring your mouth down, kiss my collarbone.."

He did as she ask, kissed her collarbone..

"Lick it with your tongue.."

His eyes widened but he did it anyway..

"Don't rush.."She said.."Kiss it in a sensual way.., easy, gentle, let me feel the sensation..., bite me gently.."

He stopped at the last order, when she said it again, he did it, bit her gently

She moan..."Hold my breast while you ravish my neck with your kisses.."

He waited for no further information before he grabbed her left breast while he kisses her hungrily, with each moan she makes, the more he gets hard..

"Squeezed my breast and fòndle my nipple.." She said and moan in ecstasy when he did it.....

"Suck my belly button.."She added bringing his head to her stomach

He lick his lips as his eyes grazed her belly button, with no further instructions, he delve into it with his tongue..., after a while, she pushed his head to her swollen pussy.., he knew exactly what she wanted, he has seen it in porn how the males eat the woman's pussy..., the thought alone was irritating.., he couldn't bring his tongue to her pussy, instead he inserted a finger inside ...

She was panting and giggling when his fingers began sliding in and out of her pale pussy. The scene made her lose her resolve to remain impassive and she quickly reach her fingers down to rub her aching clit..

Jeffery's focus was intense; his need to pleasure her almost feral..., he increases his pace glad she was enjoying it..

"Jesus, fùck me already.."She shouted

"Okay..."He said rushing to his wardrobe to get a condom.., when he got one, he torn it and wore it.., he didn't want to be seen like the virgin boy that he is, so he took his time running his penis over her glistening folds..., the indescribable pleasure of his action was evident on his face, after a while, he manage to enter her, he remenber how it's done in porn, he thrust in slowly and pull out again all the while locking his eyes with her...., his hips swivelled when he bent forward to bite at her nipple, his uninhibited moans filled the room, punctuated by every thrust...

"Stop..."She shouted pushing him off..

"Stop what..?"He ask

"I'm not feeling it.."She said..

"You're not feeling what..?"

"I'm not feeling your penis, it's too small.., I'm sorry but I love big dicks.., you don't even seem like you know what you're doing.."

Embarrassment, shame moulded his face, he said nothing but look at his penis that she called small..

"I'm sorry.."She said wearing her gown before she left the room without a second glance at him...

Jeffery mouth dropped, the shame, the evil embarrassment almost swallowing him up.., realising he can't let her leave like that, he wore his boxers and ran to the parlour but she was gone...., he look at his penis, it was still erected and throbbing hard for ejaculation..., wanting to go back to his room to masturbate, he noticed Mark's room door was open.., curiosity deem on him and he quickly trot towards the door only to get there and Mark wasn't there...

"Mark.."He called out and was about taking a walk to the kitchen when his eyes caught something, a paper and pen on the bed.., he quickly picked the paper up and read the words written on it..., his heart slammed hard against his chest.., when he got himself back, he ran back to his room to get his phone..

Hands shaking, he dial Brian mumber who answered after the second..

"Hey man, happy breaking your virginity.."Brian said jokingly from the other end..

"Mark is gone Brian..."Jeffery shouted looking at the paper again

"What do you mean Mark is gone.., isn't he in his room..?"

"He left a note.., he's going to confess to the police.."

"You have to find him Jeffery.."Brian shouted with unsettled voice.."We can't let him go to the station..., find him.."







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His face frozen like a corpse, Mark walked into the police station, he took a deep breathe, the flashes of her dead body appearing in his visions reminding him he's a killer.., the guilt, he can't take it any longer...

"Who are you looking for..?"A constable asked

A tear dropped from Mark's eyes, at this point he knew there is no return, his decision is selfish but he needed to do it, for himself.., to be free .., he raise his wet eyes to the policemen at the counter before saying the words out....."I have a confession to make..."

"What confession ....?"They asked him...

Mark swallowed forcefully..., once again, he saw those dark flashes of her body.., her cold face when they threw her in the gutter....."I..."He stutter and more tears rolled down his chin....."I.., I killed Abigail..."











TBC

Adekunlated:
Silver this is simply amazing but why do I think you're rushing the story..just an observation

I'm not rushing it

Vitalvector2017:
Ghost Mode deactivated

Oga Silver1996 you are the outright Master of Suspense ...
More Grease to your elbow and ink to your pen

Thanks

Wow! mark did the unexpected, clearly Abigail dead has psychologically drain Mark and the guilt conscience has taken a toll on him. But what if Mark's actions end up affect Brian and Jeffery since they are accomplice? See what happen next. Thanks Silver.

This is getting serious o, but I doubt he'll mention his friends name.

This move Mark made will be bad for the guys, Mark was too quick in his decision, I'm still on the ground that he isn't the one that killed her, he's making the biggest mistake of his life

Thanks for the update

sly12345:
This is getting serious o, but I doubt he'll mention his friends name.

He better not even try that, Mark's action seem a bit selfish to me... Why would he stress Brain and Jeffery in the first instant, only to turn himself to the police later on...

Haaaaaa

Boss silver, you don spoil boys finish. Thanks 4 de update.

Jesu

What if Mark wasn't the one that killed her

Thanks for the update

Amateur madman? where u dy get these discriptions from? The psychological,mental nd emotional torture Mark must b going through. hmmm. Thanks Silver, just leave Jeffery make e dey shame e generation

I knew Mark was going to do this, it'll be bad if he implicates his friends, they were just trying to help