Bad Belle them, wetin concern una? well done damsel.

So Ezenwa still have some sympathy left in him?
well done OP, you na fashion baby ooo, see as you describe wetin Melody wear.
am glad her mother inlaw is in support of their relationship.

I go love ooo, well done OP

damsel come and update ooo. wetin come happen next as JoeMels them kiss finish?

My Melody and my Jewel, okay ooo.
well done OP.

this Ambler that is encouraging Ezenwa, just know that your end is near too.

Adesina12:

Looking at you in 3D Just wait and stay with us to the end Sweet popcorn for una

lol, okay ooo, make damsel no fall my hands sha.

If anybody must die, it should be the stalker. well done OP and please keep Mels alive for us.

Embellished:
Oya damsel, infact kill everyone, starting from

Joel
Melody
Chidiebube
The detective
Joel's parents
The stalker
The stalker's father
Okenwa down to
Udoka and
Mama Kola even Mama chidera sef.



Please nobody should come for my head oooo, ayam not feeling fine mbok. lol.

story go don finish be that na lol

Thebigdream:
I've also noticed most nairalanders tends to read love stories and they love this motion of "Happily ever after" , this is why I love silver1996 stories, every character in his stories is dispensible, he kills both major and minor characters, funny enough he can save a character from beginning of the story only to kill it at the end, you'll just be wasting your time if you're expecting a happily ever after in his stories.

Anyhoo, Damselposh, your story rocks, infact I love it.

TeamJoel

Ehen Damselposh already killed Joel's ex fiance na, abeg no more death.

Adesina12:

You said ?

your plan will not work.

Adesina12:


What do you think?
This storyline should be tragicomedy
You people only want to read about love stories
Go and get Hardly Chase novels and enjoy yourself
But Melody must ..........
Damselposh baby ...over to you
Sweet popcorn for all the readers both physical and ghost

Well this is not Hardly Chase novels, this is damselposh's story, there is no way Melody will die ejo.

Adesina12:

Exactly my observation and my thinking
It's not right to have let two official careless like that
And Ezenwa play over their intelligence
However, I am happy Melody was captured and I would like to read about how she was violated
But the scene of abduction demeaning the intelligence of Joel and detective
Sweet popcorn for you damselposh
following you bumper to bumper

your plan will not work.

crossfm:
I did and I must tell you that is not enough reason to live her out there by herself. We are talking about a murderer coming after her.her opinion is not needed at that point. Its the duty of the security to make sure she is save.most celebrities and politicians don't like going out with security but the state still insists on protecting them regardless of their opinion. For the fact that Joel has feelings for her is even the main reason he never should have left her alone.
Like I said earlier, its just an observation.thanks

Okay then, damsel will come and explain to us.

damsel, I know Melody is stubborn, but please, let nothing happen to her, i take God beg you.



thanks for the update

crossfm:
Op you are doing a wonderful job here.I have been following your story since you started and I must commend you for doing great.But I think the last update is a negation of your good work.
My point is if really she was adopted by the psycho,then it ridicules the whole situation.she was with not only one but two top security personnel. Which I can say are intelligent considering how the both of them have been handling the case at hand.how could they be so careless to let melody be alone knowing how dangerous that action could be.the fact that she complained to the captain while shopping that ezenwa was very close should be a signal that she mustn't be left alone. The puncturing of his tyres was another glaring case that he was closer than they thought.
Another observation that baffled me is the scene at the hospital. A hospital that is big enough to have both male and female private wards should at list have a section where people are welcomed or a receptionist.the fact that you made her to stay back in the car made it too obvious that there is danger and for me that is very predictable.
My deduction from the story is that the character ezenwa is intelligent. If not how has he been able to conceal the series of killings.his ability to outsmart his brother and confined him to a mental asylum points to his intelligence. So he can disguise as a doctor,nurse,patient or even patients relative's to get to melody in the reception.
Op like I said earlier you are doing great. And mind you its just an observation.I love your work.

did you read the part where Joel asked about a lobby, but Melody said she would be fine outside. That girl is stubborn fa.

Ayaf landed kiakia, carry dey go, nothing do you.

Embellished:
damsel is busy, so she had to send me the chapter to help her upload, i had to proof read for like 29 times before posting lol.

lol, before you go cause quarrel. thanks for sharing.

Well done OP and thanks to you Embellished dear for posting.

Their father was wicked to Ezenwa, truth be told.

Khriztarl:
Damselposh is busy again, and she wouldn't give preshbeauty to update because she's scared we might end up quarrelling again. That's so sad.

lol, i won't even make that type of mistake again.

Thanks for the update damsel.

Ewoooo, na me cause this one now. Make una no just vex.

you people should not be angry please, the fault is from me, i didn't copy it well the way she sent it to me on Whatsapp. damsel abeg no vex for me.

What could be Okenwa's crime? I think he did something to his brother to fuel this kind of hatred.


well done OP

Captain is in love ooo

Bia this stalker So because your father treated you badly you are now killing innocent people that did nothing to you abi?
you are really a psycho.


well done OP

love story about to start. captain is in love.

well done damsel.

Chineke nna ooo, their father is still alive?

OP OP, Queen of suspense

Fire on jare, now i know what the doctor is doing.

Oga stalker go and rest. Our Melody is now in the hands of her captain.


Well done damsel

Thank God Melody is safe ooo

See as captain heart dey beat.

Well done OP, more grace

This doctor should pay attention kwanu.

So you want to destroy your brother's life because of some documents? Wicked man.


Well done OP, please tell us what happened to captain and Melody, am anxiously waiting to know.

Ghen Ghen

Action about to start, now that Mercy has been buried, let the captain focus on Melody.


OP OP, i sight you.

This Melody won't kill me with laugh


Well done damsel

Lol, "punching".

Well done Damselposh