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april wise: Queen xstar, am waiting for d story, am ur no1 fan

Thanks love!

D9ty7: Can't wait to see u start a new story.

I am trying to open a word press account to no avail. I don't mind help or guide please.

Missing all my friends here, So I am urged. Start another story before the week runs out.

Parenting is important! Train up a child in the way he should go.

Love It's uniqueness.
Wonderful job.

ceira: Nice n luvly

Thanks darling!

zika1: lolZ ntin close 2 bein one. I love 2 read so I knw wen tinz re jst fixed 2geda so as 2 come 2 an end. Well u did well bt I strongly believe u cn do way better. Well I will advice wen nxt u want 2 write on this forum,take ur tym dnt jst conclude cos reader want 2 get 2 d end. Put in a lot of suspense dat will kip dem coming bk everyday 2 check 4 updates even if dere is non. Bt amidst it, u cn apologise 4 no updates so d reader dnt get offended. Nd guess u shld hv d story all written down 2 d end b4 startin.

Noted darling. if I decide to place another here, it will be one of what have written.

Winnie1950: i'm here o sorry 4 leaving u like that. This story realy gives something to ponder on. I hope any one going through any of the situations stated in the story would learn from this. :

I will be fulfilled when that has happened.

zika1: I'm here oo babez. Sowie dis is coming late been so busy I hardly read dis days bt I'm here nd I'm ryt on track. Tnx 4 dis beautiful piece. As u knw I will always speak my mind. I dnt tink dis shld hv ended dis early looks like u kinda rushed 2 finish it. Tho dats d right way 2 end bt I expected a lil more. Well done all d same I knw its nt easy 2 write @ all. Wit u dear God bless u.

You a psychologist or what!? Truthfully …didn't want to prolong it and probably water it more than necessary.

zika1: lolz I kinda agree wit the guy bt I will help u out. Well dey all repented after full realisation of their wrongs or deeds.imaobong realised she had been a bad mother nd realising what ws actually goin on in her house nd nt having been d best mum. Same goes 4 prince nd temilade dey all saw d light nd repented. Dats basically all bout it. If I'm wrong pls correct me. Dis is d way I understand it.

You nailed it girl! simple and short. Not really a pleasure but a ponder story.

DEDICATION

To all readers, you kept me going.

To all those who could relate with this work, God save and keep you.

I'm so lost without you, My Hope against Hope, God.

IfeomaVanessa: I'm right behind you oh. Sorry for the silence. Good job

Yea!

D9ty7: We ar all behind u. Nice story kip it up

Thanks love.

jjagz: Xtar. Been a silent reader since. But after you replied someone I just kept my onions to myself, the response was scary. Anyway. To the story.

Nice concept. Nice idea. Nice message. Good beginning. However, towards the middle of the story, I just think you didn't do it when it came to proper character differentiation. A simple header before jumping to Imaobong or Eniola would have done magic. At this point, though am at the end I can't seem to get the exact circumstances that lead to their repentance because everything is painfully clutered up.

I believe proper editing and reorganisation of the story would do it a great deal.

There, I said it. *closing eyes waiting for bashing*

Haba Dear, did you say you don't know the exact circumstances that led to their repentance? Readers come to my rescue o.

jjagz: Xtar. Been a silent reader since. But after you replied someone I just kept my onions to myself, the response was scary. Anyway. To the story.

Nice concept. Nice idea. Nice message. Good beginning. However, towards the middle of the story, I just think you didn't do it when it came to proper character differentiation. A simple header before jumping to Imaobong or Eniola would have done magic. At this point, though am at the end I can't seem to get the exact circumstances that lead to their repentance because everything is painfully clutered up.

I believe proper editing and reorganisation of the story would do it a great deal.

There, I said it. *closing eyes waiting for bashing*

Oh Sweetheart, open your eyes, am not like that na. This what I wanted all along, a constructive criticism. If you bring it all along, I probably would have written better. Thank you very much, point accepted.

I need this work to be criticised.

Oh Where is Winnie?

Where is Olufunmi, Zika, Cash matters, Ifeomavanessa, you and you …Where are you? I'm compiling a list.

april wise: Gud job Weldone

Thank you.

I want to dedicate this work, Where are my readers …? Yemi Where are you?

"Forsake them …"

'I forsake my sin dear Jesus, please have mercy on my family and I. ' Omoefe opened his palms before him.

"The word of God standeth sure, whatever you sow you reap. Repentance and holiness is not a bread and butter affair, it won't be all rosy. There will be consequences for your past actions but His yoke is easy. Ask for grace and mercy. Pray for God riches at Christ expense."

'Gracious Redeemer, I ask for your grace and mercy. Give my sister and I grace, give us the strength to face the consequence of our action and come out refined. Purge us …' Indifreke laid on the floor and wept to God.


Overwhelmed by a force he couldn't contained and his nose now weeping, Prince slumped.

"Thank God for answered prayers … Thank God for your salvation. "

'I am grateful King of all, my Hope against Hope, I give all the gratitude. Even if my body is tongue alone is not enough to express my appreciation to you.' Cynthia whispered with enclosed palm.

Temilade smiled and raised both palms. 'Thank for this peace you have given. Thanks for bringing me back to you. I can no more serve sin.'

'Our dotted lines are filled in you, thank you for this precious privilege. ' Eniola had her palms enclosed.

"Restitution is very important, go back and restore what you have taken forcefully, if you can't restore it back, go and make peace. Go and sin no more, for your lines are complete in God. Your Life is now graven upon the palm of His hand and your walls are now before him.

They stood brand new, a terror to the dark kingdom.




THE END.

"Forsake them …"

'I forsake my sin dear Jesus, please have mercy on my family and I. ' Omoefe opened his palms before him.

"The word of God standeth sure, whatever you sow you reap. Repentance and holiness is not a bread and butter affair, it won't be all rosy. There will be consequences for your past actions but His yoke is easy. Ask for grace and mercy. Pray for God riches at Christ expense."

'Gracious Redeemer, I ask for your grace and mercy. Give my sister and I grace, give us the strength to face the consequence of our action and come out refined. Purge us …' Indifreke laid on the floor and wept to God.


Overwhelmed by a force he couldn't contained and his nose now weeping, Prince slumped.

"Thank God for answered prayers … Thank God for your salvation. "

'I am grateful King of all, my Hope against Hope, I give all the gratitude. Even if my body is tongue alone is not enough to express my appreciation to you.' Cynthia whispered with enclosed palm.

Temilade smiled and raised both palms. 'Thank for this peace you have given. Thanks for bringing me back to you. I can no more serve sin.'

'Our dotted lines are filled in you, thank you for this precious privilege. ' Eniola had her palms enclosed.

"Restitution is very important, go back and restore what you have taken forcefully, if you can't restore it back, go and make peace. Go and sin no more, for your lines are complete in God. Your Life is now graven upon the palm of His hand and your walls are now before him.

They stood brand new, a terror to the dark kingdom.

"Forsake them …"

'I forsake my sin dear Jesus, please have mercy on my family and I. ' Omoefe opened his palms before him.

"The word of God standeth sure, whatever you sow you reap. Repentance and holiness is not a bread and butter affair, it won't be all rosy. There will be consequences for your past actions but His yoke is easy. Ask for grace and mercy. Pray for God riches at Christ expense."

'Gracious Redeemer, I ask for your grace and mercy. Give my sister and I grace, give us the strength to face the consequence of our action and come out refined. Purge us …' Indifreke laid on the floor and wept to God.


Overwhelmed by a force he couldn't contained and his nose now weeping, Prince slumped.

"Thank God for answered prayers … Thank God for your salvation. "

'I am grateful King of all, my Hope against Hope, I give all the gratitude. Even if my body is tongue alone is not enough to express my appreciation to you.' Cynthia whispered with enclosed palm.

Temilade smiled and raised both palms. 'Thank for this peace you have given. Thanks for bringing me back to you. I can no more serve sin.'

'Our dotted lines are filled in you, thank you for this precious privilege. ' Eniola had her palms enclosed.

"Restitution is very important, go back and restore what you have taken forcefully, if you can't restore it back, go and make peace. Go and sin no more, for your lines are complete in God. Your Life is now graven upon the palm of His hand and your walls are now before him.

They stood brand new, a terror to the dark kingdom.

FIFTEEN

Prince came out of his car and walked into the church after 15 minutes of contemplating. The last time he was in church was when his step mum had passed on, his mum had compelled him to attend so his father doesn't disown him.

He sat on the seat the usher directed him to and saw the usher file back to the seat. Afterward, a man mounted the pulpit and he knew he was late.

"Shall we rise and open our Bibles to 1John 3:8."

They all stood, all present but some watching via live transmission.

"He that committeth sin is of the devil; for the devil sinneth from the beginning. For this purpose, the son of God manifested, that he might destroy the works of the devil. " He smiled at the congregation. "It is a great day! I am excited and I employ you to be too. For the works of the devil is destroyed today, Amen? "


'Amen! ' They chorused excited.

He stared surprised at the excitement of the congregation. They applaud.


"John 8:11 She said, No man, Lord. And Jesus said unto her, Neither do I condemn thee: go and sin no more."

He traced the words with his fingers mesmerized in such a way he didn't join in the prayer.

"Go and sin no more …for the Same reason the son of God was manifested, that he might destroy the works of the devil. Which is sin, Satan's Identification Number. Many of us still go about with that identity. "

Chidubem's eyes did not leave the screen and he listened raptly.

"These days, it is worst than the days of Sodom and Gomorrah, the children rape by adults, masturbation, incest, homosexuality, gayism and lesbianism, corruption in high and low places, our musical videos are now permissive pornography, violence, ladies now go about practically naked even in the day, parents now provoking their children to wrath and so on. Defiling our bodies the temple of the living God. Nailing Christ to the cross over and over again.

Imaobong lowered her head and dab her eyes.

Temilade heaved.

"Virginity is now old fashioned, a nineteen year is proud to say he is a player and a girl barely in her things can make a married man come running to her for sex. Abortion is now a norm! People are no longer contented with their fellow humans, they seek sexual satisfaction in animals ..." He paused and silence prevailed. "Men now butcher their wives at the slightest provocation. We now give ourselves glorified excuses to indulge in sin. What shall we say then? Shall we continue in sin, that grace may abound? God forbid.

Iniobong bit her quivering lower lips.

"Jesus is saying to you this lovely Sunday morning, neither do I condemn thee. For all have sinned and come short of the glory of God. We are have a past, the adamic nature. Romans 6:6 says Knowing this, that our old man is crucified with him, that the body of sin might be destroyed, that henceforth we should not serve sin. Verse 7 - For he that is dead is freed from sin. Whosoever shall call on the name if the Lord shall be saved. He is not willing that any should perish but all should come to repentance. He is knocking at the door of your heart, will you let him in …?"

Iniobong fell on her knees. 'I am sorry dear Jesus … I failed you …'

"Acknowledge yourself as a sinner."

Prince stood and raise both hands. 'I am a sinner Jesus, how are going to ever forgive me …Oh God …'

'Confess yourself your sins."

'Oh God I was a sex addict, I fornicated, I defiled marriage beds …' Tears rolled down Chidubem face.

'I am deeply sorry O Lord … 'Imaobong sobbed with both eyes closed. 'I provoked my children to wrath, I pushed them until they became prey to the enemy. Oh …how I disappointed you as a mother.'

The final chapter comes up tomorrow.

Winnie1950: Continue! Thanks 4 this update queens xtar. Waiting 4 more.

So Welcome.

"An author once wrote, sex is like a superglue between two people. when you leave a relationship and start another sexual relationship intimacy. The glue breaks and become used again. On and on it goes … the weaker the superglue becomes.

With the earpiece still in her ears, Cynthia remembered what her mother had told. "Sex in marriage is beautiful my darling. It is a long lasting bond."


Thirty years of marriage and they were still waxing strong. Her mum had told her she had kept herself till marriage and implored her to do so. Being the last child, she had still being in the house when others have left , she studied her parents and loved what she saw and that prompted to keep myself. She smiled, knowing that keeping herself had made her to forgive and forget what Chidubem did easily.

She had mopped her flat while listening , now that they were on break, she decided to sit on a stool in the kitchen. God must love her specially, Temilade thought to herself. She knew if she had given herself to Emmanuel, she would have been more devastated. 'Thank you Jesus. ' She whispered.






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"Sex! Sex!! Sex!!! I met a boy of 16 and he said to me sex is my hobby." There was a short laugh and a silence . "Sex is marriage in the spiritual realm … for everyone you have sex with, you're married to that person. "

Prince gasped.

"Sex is also an exchange of spirit, you have sex with him or her, you give to the person and the person takes from you. No wonder Sex is a very sure weapon to destroy or ruin one's destiny regardless of who that person maybe. "

Chidubem sighed.

"Can you remember when you had your first sex …' There was a pause. "You bet you can whether it was good or bad.You easier to abstain when you've not had sex at all than when you've indulged. "

Imaobong swallowed hard.

Listen to the story of a young girl who had a great future until she met a street urchin who wouldn't give up on her until she gave to being friends with him, soon, he convinced her and they had sex. It wasn't long, she started pilfering, she couldn't help herself until she was caught. She could have being badly injured or killed, if not that people who knew her and her family intervened. They took her from one place to another until the truth was discovered and she was delivered. "

'Deliverance. ' Indifreke mused.

Iniobong glanced at him before directing her attention back to the radio.

zika1: tnx a million luvly! Been busy d whole week even on my own bdai. I do appreciate nd as 4 ur cake ermmmm mayb ermmm.... We will talk bout dat later

Hmmmm …

zika1: Nice1. Didn't read 4 sometime cos I wnted d updates 2 be a lil lengthy b4 checking it. Nice one tho. Wen nxt re u updating? Pls I am begging 4 an update 2morow a lengthy pls as a bdai gift. Tnx in advance

Oh Sweetheart, I Wish you a Happy Birthday and All God's best! I Wish I could update but am under the weather. I sincerely Wish you the best. send me my cake.

Happy Sunday Dear readers.

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