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Princeville:
This is a wonderful piece...Keep up the good work!!
The story reminds of my ex...got attacked by a knife out of jealousy

Huh? You don't say! Attacked by a knife? Where? Hope it didn't leave a scar. How did you end the relationship?
Welcome on board dearie.

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ADUKKY:
Space booked.

Welcome on board.

emmynku:
Nice piece of literature,wot do i say? I think writing gets better with time. I would rather you unleash your descriptive ability onto the next chapter. The power of every good writer remains their ability to bring d reader into the situations the story creates. I like your work,but i think you need a lot patience while churning out ur imaginations.

I'm working on that. I appreciate your criticism, God bless you dear.

CuteChiluv:
Me enjoyed, my seat is hot because i really want to understand madam lilian and know her iissues, how is your health

I'm better dearest, thank you.

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Hope Tiger doesn't torture him.

Flakkydagirl:
Hello ma......
Ayam fine o.
Its been long i saw you here.
Couldn't believe it was you at first.
I am enjoying this work.
Just as Oga Divepen said,Lily is suffering from Inu fufu.
Patiently waiting for more updates.

Hahaha, thank you dear. More updates you will get.

Hello Flakky! It's been ages. How're you?

CuteChiluv:
What is worrying lilian plenty oo, if i follow science, she has phycological problem serious one self, culture- them the follow her from her village, religion= she needs deliverance, she has issues and i feel she is insecure, something is bothering her,
please rest well oo, i guess i should be the second doctor,stay off nairaloand until u get well biko queen,

Well analyzed. You should be in the medical profession I suppose. Fortunately story is all typed.

Divepen1:
Me ke?
Oga bi ti boo


In Yoruba we call it inu Fufu.
I'm not sure I can get the literal translation but it shows someone that gets angry excessively or that loses control when angry.

Okay. Thank you dear.

CuteChiluv:
Thanks for updating, halfbread is better than none, even though am not satisfied, cutechi is crying for more,,,,, well done, will bw waiting for dinner ,,, Thanks for updating, halfbread is better than none, even though am not satisfied, cutechi is crying for more,,,,, well done, will be waiting for dinner ,,, plssss

Sorry darling but the situation can't be helped till next week. I'm strictly on doctor order to rest immensely. By the way, what do you think Lillian problem is?

Divepen1:
I wanted to type Smh

Oh... Okay. My Oga what do you think Lillian issue is?

Divepen1:
SMU for her

What does SMU mean?

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pastorpussy:
The is a work of fiction but based on facts...
Seem and heard of similar occurrences between couples before, even worse..

Queen, where are you @??
Need to knw how the story unfolds
Nice work once again

Appreciate your comment, we'll definitely get to end of it all together.
An update comes up tomorrow by God's grace.

bummybummy:
haaaaaaaa!!! Wat kind of woman z dis?

I tire o.

CuteChiluv:
This woman s blood the boil oooo,, chaiii, biko come and continue ooo,

An update comes up tomorrow dear.

I didn't get smallie's real name and how old he is. Wonderful work Tony.

vonn:
jeez, what kind of a woman is this?

A kind of woman we tend to meet or see on daily basis. Hope you are doing well.

missuniverse:
Incredible!

You can say that again, as in ehen! How are you dear?

lenmafon:
wow! glad to have u back queenstar *gives her an e-hug* how has life been and how was ur program? welcome back.

*Return e-hug* Life has been challenging but I thank God for grace. Program was splendid, I'm working once more. Thank you so much dearest. How have you been? Miss you lots.

CHAPTER FIVE

She pattered across the mini corridor adjoining the sitting room and froze at sudden sight of him.
Relief washed over her momentarily making her forget the four meetings she had been in back to back, how her bones were crying, how she drove back home bare footed and almost walked into her home same way.
He lay fast asleep on the four-seater sectional white and purple sofa looking so innocent, adorable and peaceful like a baby. Even today, she couldn’t help the thought of what their children would look like, as she always did every time she watched him sleep and hoped they looked more like her husband.
She could have reached out, kissed, embraced him and even shed tears of joy coupled with relief but the anger bubbling within her took the upper hand. How could he be asleep so peacefully when all she had done was worry over him? Her forehead creased and her heart beats quickened.
Casting her handbag on the sofa and pulling off her shoes, she marched decisively in her skirt suit to the kitchen.
She returned with the sharpest among her collection of knives in right hand, her eyes fierce, and blood vehemently coursing through her veins with same brisk steps she had left with. Her anger fueled at his still-sleeping form.
Without pausing to think, she lowered the sharp and cold edge of the knife to his neck and slit.
Scrambling off the sofa at the sharp pain, sleep flew far from him and his eyes widened at the blood spurting from his neck.
“Jesus…Jesus ” He muttered after he grabbed his neck just for his palm to be soiled with blood. When she advanced him once more like who was possessed with an evil spirit, he used his left arm to bare the attack.
The knife fell off her hand to the rug soundless at the sight of so much blood. Panic surged through her; she made to run upstairs but barely halfway, ran back down, picked her bag and fled barefooted.
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Gnashing teeth in pain, he mustered strength, pulled off his T-shirt and wrapped it around his neck. Bent over, he placed his bleeding arm on his thigh and applied pressure. With shaky right palm, he reached for phone which was partially stained with drops of blood and hit speed dial button.
“Eni…” He began breathless with blur vision. “Come now. Lillian…stab…stab…” The phone slipped off his hand as he laid sprawled, pain numbing his senses. His right palm applying pressure on the already soaked T-shirt with his eyes closed and breaths laboured.

Don't leave without commenting.

Peterdrumz:
at list once per day

I have a life , responsibility and profession outside writing so I can't indulge you.

Do invite your friends to join the family. Remember to criticize the story, thank you.

Divepen1:
Seriously. She's yet to learn her lesson..

I couldn't agree less with you.

queenDD:
A wonderful story.. I'm definitely following. Nice one Queenxstar

I'm grateful Queen.

CuteChiluv:
Nice one,

Thank you dear.