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Lol @ Izukwu, manage it like that abeg, I need to take my time to do this,I've not abandoned it.

Thanks outseb and harmvirus, you're velcome.

Thanks guys, y'all are the best.

Kite checked herself out in the floor length mirror in Ise’s walk in closet and nodded, she did look good, no, she looked hot! Sampling some of the outfits she’d bought from her trip, she looked so fashion forward in the black ‘Chloe’ P-leather leggings and black sequined tank that hugged her curves, the outfit showed off her curves so beautifully. She was sure heads would turn at the sight of her, which was exactly what she was going for. This would be the first time she would be meeting Ise and Jeje’s friends and she knew she had to look the part. The trip and shopping for high end over priced top brand outfits had come just in time, she’d had some interesting and nice clothes before but she knew these rich kids could smell designer brands a kilometre away.

She’d been awed every time they had stepped into a shop, the size of it, the clothes and then of course the price tags. After a while of reluctance at taking the things Ise had been purchasing for her, she’d finally given in and gone with the flow knowing there was nothing she could do about it. He was hell bent on shopping for her, so she’d let him and had also dragged him into some stores for men and forced him to do a little shopping for him self.

All in all, the trip had been wonderful, it had been an awesome experience, one she knew she might never even forget for the rest of her life, she was indeed happy that she’d agreed to go with Ise. She wished she could share the experience with her friends Lucky and Diamond but they were still on wrong terms.

She knew all she had to do was make a call to either one of them and the rift would have ended but she would then need to explain that she was living with Ise and she had a strong idea how they would take it. They would definitely not approve her staying with him especially Lucky who never hid her opinion, she would instead ask her to move back in with them and that wouldn’t go well with the plans she had. She didn’t want another argument to ensue between them so it was better to hold off on making up till she could finish this thing with Izu.

Putting finishing touches to her make up, she stared at the finished look on her face and decided she would seriously stun at the party, no trace of the jetlag she was going through, showed. Maybe it was the pill she’d taken or maybe she was well rested but she was indeed feeling way better now.

Ise had let her sleep undisturbed until about four p.m when Jeje had come running into the house screaming and elated at the car her parents had gotten her, it was a custom 2013 Range Rover Autobiography which Kite had not yet seen but she’d heard everything about it from Jeje while she’d been groggy with sleep. Jeje had been dragging her to go take a look at it when Ise had intervened telling her kite was tired and barely awake but she would see it later at the party and Jeje had reluctantly let her go while Kite had smiled her gratitude to him and decided to get up and begin preparing for the party that evening at the Dome.

They’d actually rented the whole poolside for the party; Kite didn’t want to know how much had gone into making that happen on a Saturday. The way the Williams’s spent money was crazy. The room she and Ise had shared at the Grand Hyatt in Beijing had been something else entirely. State of the art décor didn’t even begin to qualify the room, just out of this world.

She doubted she could ever get used to this kind of luxurious lifestyle, it was just too much for her poor self to understand. Ise had practically dragged her into high end shops whose price tags had raised her eyebrows but he hadn’t even blinked, paying for everything she’d picked, Jewellery, high fashion clothes, shoes and perfumes. She wasn’t used to this level of pampering, Izu had gotten her the occasional gift once in a while and she had appreciated it whenever he did, but this was another thing entirely, she’d had to begin wondering if he was trying to buy her love, but somehow she knew the reply to her own question. He was definitely not buying her love but just showing her how he felt for her. It was the way he knew how, she guessed.

She had to admit she was now falling for him, not because he was overly generous, material things didn’t hold much for her but because he seemed to genuinely care for her. She knew she shouldn’t let this happen, she couldn’t fall for him and she’d been steeling herself, holding herself back but it was getting harder everyday. The guy was so into her, he never missed a chance to touch and hold her, kiss her or tell her she was the most beautiful person he’d ever known, how couldn’t she fall for him? She was afraid things could get really complicated really soon.

Suddenly she heard a heavy sound like a power bike’s engine, coming closer till it stopped downstairs, she walked out to the veranda adjoining the room to see a very impressive looking black power bike parked downstairs with its owner, Ise dressed to the hilt in biker outfit, coming off it.

“Hey Sexy!” She called down to him thinking he looked really good in the leather jacket and protective gear, he looked up smiling.

“You like?” He asked spreading his arms for her appreciation.

“Really hot!” she shouted back at him nodding.
He laughed “Thanks, so do you, are you done yet?”

“Yeah.” She replied, “I’ll be right down.”

“bring along a jacket because it will get chilly later at night.”

“Alright,” She said leaving his room and going down to hers, she heard her phone ringing and ran toward it, goodness only knew how long it had been ringing for.

“Hello?” She asked not bothering with the caller ID.

“Kite, I swear you’re trying my patience.” The voice on the other end shouted angrily.

“Izu,” she said, well, she should have known. She’d not picked any of his calls in the morning.

“You think I’m playing with you, right? You think I’m bluffing, isn’t it? You’re not taking my threat seriously, are you? If you were, you would never have left the country with your rich boyfriend without telling me. Now, if you don’t meet me out here in five minutes, I swear I’m going to him with what I have.”

Kite took in a deep breath, “Izu.” She started calmly,
“I cant meet with you now, Williams and I are going out.”

“ Tell that to the birds, I want you out here in five minutes.”

“Izu,” She couldn’t help but raise her own voice, why was he being so unreasonable? “Did you hear what I said?”

“Five minutes, Kite!” and the line went dead.

“Shit!” She spat.

“Hey, everything okay?” She turned around to see Ise in the doorway of her room.

“Yeah, how long have you been there?”

“I just came in. It was taking you quite a while getting your jacket.”

“Yeah, I’ll just get it now.” She said moving over to the ward robe, she remembered putting it up not too long ago. There was still loads of unpacking to do in the room, the new things she’d bought were now added to her previous stuff and the room was now even more cluttered. She made a mental note to get through with it compulsorily the following day. She found the jacket and turned to see Ise watching her in a strange way.

“What?” She asked.

“Nothing.” He replied handing her a helmet “Let’s leave.”

She followed behind him, not liking the look she’d seen, she began wondering just how long he’d been standing in the doorway to the room and how much he’d heard her say over the phone.
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Izu shook his head as he saw the two love birds zoom off on the power bike that came out of the heavily fortified gates. He felt his heart cringe painfully, Kite seemed to be enjoying herself with this guy, he hoped she didn’t get too comfortable with him. He knew what she had with him would never last, since it was based on lies, secrets and blackmail. She was only with him because he’d pushed her to him in order to get the money he needed to get Brenda off his back, he hoped she remembered that.

Afraid that she was enjoying this new lifestyle too much and was beginning to think he’d only been bluffing, he planned to do something now that would get her to think again and realise just how serious he was about this thing. It was already Saturday, he wondered how she’d make up ten million by Monday.

He had changed his mind on accepting money from her, he didn’t like the trail it always left. He’d come up with something better after taking one look at the Range Rover that had left the compound earlier being driven by a young lady whom he knew to be the rich guys sister.

When he was done here, he was going to join the party people at the dome where it was being held, that info had come from the jealous P.A, when she’d told him they would be back in time for it. So he would get to the party and let Kite know about the change of plans. He smiled as he thought about it, he already knew what she would think about his idea but he didn’t care. She had no choice in the matter, as far as he was concerned it was already a done deal, he knew what he wanted and she was going to get it for him.

He was really enjoying being such a thorn in Kite’s butt, he would do everything he could to make her regret jumping into the guy’s bed.

Getting out of the car, he picked the envelope in the back seat and made his way to the gates of the rich boy’s estate.

Princess was fuming, this was the height! That tramp had definitely gone way too far this time! It was time to end this once and for all, how could Ise be this stupid anyway? Moving around with a girl like that who had no class, no upbringing or manners, just a pretty face. She’d heard from Kenny that they were actually co habiting with each other, wasn’t that too soon? What was it with men these days? They saw a pretty girl and the next thing they lost all sense of reasoning?

Did he know who she really was? Where she’d come from? To Princess, the girl had gold digger written all over her, how could he be so blind?

Well she would help Ise regain his reasoning, but how? She and Kenny hadn’t come up with anything tangible that would get her thrown out immediately, and Princess knew she needed a hat trick, something to tip the scales in her favour very fast and quickly.

Her intercom began to buzz and she stared at it, irritated like the device was the cause of all her troubles. Glancing at the caller screen, she saw it was the reception on the ground floor.

“Yeah?” She asked into the receiver.

“There’s a visitor here who’s requesting to know the whereabouts of Miss Omoh, I told him she’s accompanied the boss on a trip but he wants more detailed info. What do you suggest?”

“Who’s he to her?” She asked.

“Ummm, Let me ask” There was a short pause as Tess
consulted with the person “ fiancé, that’s what he says.”

Princess literally felt her jaw drop. “What?”

“I said….” Tessy was about repeating herself.

“I know what you said,” she cut her off “Just send him up to me.” Wow, now this was what she needed, she smiled to herself, an ace up her sleeve finally. So the tramp even had a fiancé? Wow this was juicier than she’d ever expected.
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Izu stormed into his apartment, fuming, that ex-girlfriend of his didn’t waste time at all, she was already getting really nice and cozy with the billionaire. He felt like the jealousy and anger was going to rip him into shreds. He’d been appalled to have learnt that she’d accompanied him out of the country and without informing him too, he’d been calling her line for two days now without a response from her and had ended up making enquiries after her at the office. He’d finally met with the irritating Princess, who had filled him with everything, telling him nasty stuff about Kite which he obviously knew were lies. He’d listened like he’d believed it all and had told her a few lies of his own.

That ever since Kite had gotten this job, she’d begun acting funny and had moved out of their house together. He’d so perfectly played the part of a lover who’d been jilted for someone else, and knew that Princess wouldn’t wait to use this new found weapon against Kite. The lady was so petty, he placed her to be in her early thirties. Her hatred for Kite would be her undoing, he was quite sure about that.

After the brief meeting he’d found a renewed anger against Kite, he wasn’t sure if he was angrier that she’d travelled with her boss or that she hadn’t called him, was she taking his threats as a joke? She probably was. Well he would show her that she wouldn’t mess with him and go scot free. The thing with Princess would be nothing compared to what he’d do to her, when she got back.

“Hey Babe,” Brenda came into the sitting room with a
towel around her body, obviously just coming out of the bathroom. Her body still glistened with little specs of water and he felt himself go hard as the thought that she was naked save that little towel that could be pulled off with a simple tug.

The girl had a huge three bedroom duplex to herself but she preferred staying at his apartment. He wasn’t bothered, she did indeed take good care of him. Love was a funny thing, such a wonderful feeling but when abused could fuel some dark emotions. He’d loved Kite to the death, they’d both loved each other but wrong doing on his part had sent them into this mess they all were in. He knew he’d been at serious fault cheating on Kite with Brenda but that didn’t mean Kite should have slept with her boss instantly. The whole shit was just ‘Cray’.

“Hey.” He replied her dropping on to the sofa.

“You don’t look too good, what’s the problem, babe?” She asked him coming closer.

“It’s Kite, she travelled out of the country with her boss two days back, without informing me. Could you imagine her audacity? I’m just so angry right now.” He said fuming.

Brenda frowned, unconsciously tucking in the towel some more “ So… are you angry she left with her boss or because you weren’t informed?”

That was the same thing he’d been asking himself but he said this for Brenda’s benefit “ What do you think? She left without informing me, she’s obviously taking my threat for granted.” He said heatedly, he would just have to show her that he wasn’t bluffing; she would really regret this action of hers.

“Baby,” Brenda approached him “You really need to relax and that’s something you know I’m really great at.” She knelt in front of him and began undoing his shirt buttons. Izu didn’t stop her but instead smiled slyly.
“but you just had your bath,” he said.

“I’ll just have to have it all over again and perhaps this time, you could join me?” She asked going for his belt buckle now and some seconds later he was enveloped in the warmth of her mouth.

Laying back on the sofa, he let her perform her ministrations on him, putting Kite out of his mind, he would deal with her later.
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Ise felt Kite snuggle closer into him in the back seat of the car as Sal drove them home, It was about six thirty a.m and they’d just landed. She was so tired, Beijing had been too much fun, so much to do in so little time coupled with the long flights and since this was the first time she was crossing so many time zones, the jetlag had gotten to her. He’d adjusted more easily to the jetlag since he was used to travelling but for Kite, all she’d done was sleep all through the sixteen hour flight back and was still asleep.

He smiled as he recalled all they’d been up to, she’d had the time of her life seeing things through virgin eyes. She’d never for once masked her awe at the sights, she’d been like a kid taken to Disneyland for the first time, all opened eyed and mouthed. He’d lost count of the number of times she’d said ‘wow’ and she’d taken so many pictures and videos, his sixteen gig memory card hadn’t even been enough. He could swear she took at least five shots of anything she found
interesting which was almost everything. Right from the airport, she’d dug out his camera and began snapping away. She’d given tourist a new meaning.

Beijing was indeed a wonderfully crafted city with a lot of tourist sites, they’d only been to few as they’d been time strapped. After conducting his business and main reason for taking the trip visiting the factory and warehouse where most of the company’s production and manufacturing was done, he’d taken Kite out on the town. On the first day, they’d managed to tour through the Forbidden City, the Schichahai lakes, Tiananmen Square and the Tower of Heaven and of course the great wall but the highlight of the day had been in the evening, when he’d gotten Kite to eat the famed ‘Da Dong’ restaurant’s roast duck.

At first she’d been sceptical as she’d never had duck
before, but he’d convinced her that it was way better than chicken, really crispy and she would love it with the pancakes that went along with it. She’d accused him of being a foodie who would eat anything but had finally decided to have a tiny taste and had been convinced, she’d eaten over half of the duck after that and then had begun complaining of a full stomach, of which he’d prescribed more walking to. They’d gone on to watch the Beijing Opera, before visiting the Stadium designed as a bird’s nest and then the National aquatics centre which was designed as a blue water cube, it had been an awesome sight to behold at night. He doubted Kite would ever be the same after all she’d seen.

The next day had been spent in the massive Oriental Plaza which housed the Grand Hyatt hotel they’d stayed in along with malls, boutiques, restaurants and even offices and serviced apartments. He’d made spa reservations the day before for the both of them knowing they would need the pampering especially after all that walk around the city the day before. Kite had dozed off for a while after her massage and if he’d let her, she would have slept there the entire day and their flight was for two p.m. So he’d roused her awake and taken her shopping at some of the boutiques in the plaza, she’d been reluctant to have stuff bought for her but he always engaged a sales clerk who saved him the trouble of cajoling her to try some stuff on and guessing they had the money to burn, would bring out things she knew would look good on Kite and by the look he saw on her face she’d been very much interested but too proud to take them.

He would threaten to pay for it all and that was when she would begin trying them on and picking what she liked best. They’d visited some high end retailers both local and international like Burberry, Coach and Chloe. She’d dragged him into the Guy Laroche store and had picked some shirts she thought would look good on him since he was hopeless at shopping for himself. They’d barely had enough time left for lunch at a restaurant in the Sky avenue section while enjoying the Panoramic view of the plaza, before taking the limo back to the airport to take the jet back home.

She stirred again and seemed to begin humming to something, he listened closely and it sounded close to Ciara’s ‘Body Party’ which was the song she’d been listening to repeatedly on her head phones on the plane. He’d not understood how one could listen to one song on repeat, over and over again, didn’t you get tired of it? Now the song was so ingrained in her head that she was singing it in her sleep.

“the things I wanna do to you….ooh, ooh, ooh, ooh, My body's calling you….. ooh ooh ooh ooh” She was saying lowly and he smiled as his eyes met with Sal’s on the rear mirror, she would be so embarrassed if she knew what she was doing.

Just before the flight had taken off she’d placed a call to her brother and had found out her mother’s surgery had gone fine, she was in a stable condition and was recuperating. She’d breathed a visible sigh of relief and had been relaxed. Even if she didn’t say it, he sensed that she wanted to see her mother, he would have to persuade her to take a short leave of absence from work and assure her it was really okay.

He watched her as she slept so peacefully, why did she affect him this way? Aside from her dazzling physical beauty, he was drawn to her as a person, she had a beautiful mind, was really intelligent and wasn’t pretentious about anything. She was so real but he’d noticed a hitch, she never seemed able to hold his eyes most of the time, she always chose to look away. At first he’d attributed it to shyness but now he wasn’t so sure anymore, he didn’t want to begin thinking she was keeping some things from him, he wanted to trust her completely. He remembered the work that had gone into getting her to agree to dating him, he’d practically had to beg her and he’d assumed he’d finally gotten through to her but could all this be an act? If it was an act, what was she intending to gain from it? It couldn’t be material things, he practically had to beg or threaten her to accept whatever he bought for her so it couldn’t be that.

Shaking himself he decided to put those thoughts from his mind, doubt was one of the little foxes that brought down a relationship. He decided that until he had a better cause to become suspicious, he wouldn’t bother himself with negative thoughts.

Her phone began buzzing in her hand bag, the damn thing had such an annoying ringtone and on vibrate it even buzzed more annoyingly. It woke her up, she looked at him disoriented “Whats that?”

“Your phone.” He told her.

“Oh.” She went for it in her hand bag, still slow and groggy, he felt quite sorry for her. The melanin pill she’d taken prior to take off to help reduce the effects of the jetlag hadn’t seemed to help her much.
She finally got the phone but the call had gone off, just as she was about keeping the phone back, the call came in again. She glanced at the screen, hissed and switched it off, throwing it back into the handbag.
He guessed he had an idea who it could be but why in the world would her ex boyfriend be calling at barely Seven a.m in themorning? He didn’t bother asking her who the caller had been, instead he let her snuggle into him again as she resumed the humming. “Boy you should know that your love, is always on my mind, I'm not gonna fight it, I want it all the time…..”
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Izuone: ^ And What are you feeling like.

See this one o, I know you are looking for my mouth. You can't see me this evening.

Okay, I've thought about it and I'm on the fence, LVMJJ was like I'm purnishing the people enjoying the story because of comments from a few others.

I'm done with going back and forth.

Here's my decision, I will post here, but I won't listen to update hassles, I will take my time, if you don't like it, sorry but that's what its going to be.
REEPO has spoken

The next update should be here by 7.30 p.m tonight.

Hmmmm, my own terms abi? Thinking up sumthing.... Will get back to you later, lemme think well about my terms.

luvmijeje: The only part that I find somehow is kite not going to see her mum despite the reason you gave.
By the way, Repo I admire your knowledge of latest trend. How do you get to know all these?

Hi LVMJJ, good to see you after a while. Na wa o, the way some peeps are saying the story is not interesting anymore is what made me decide to back off for a while.

Truth be told, me sef dey enjoy the break, I have a newly completed chapter sef which will be on the blog later tOday, interested parties should please find their way there.

I don't have any particular day I'll update there, just whenever I'm done with a chapter.

Thanks for your glOwing review o, I don bow tire. As for knowing trends, its thanks to abuja, where I see enuf orisirisi plus google.

Thanks dearie, your comment just boosted my confidence.

That's what 'some' people are insinuating. Read the comments above.

@ sakie, thanks dear, I appreciate it.

@ chinedumo, its okay, I wasn't even offended by you, my problem is being told my story is being watered down and is loosing taste. No wahala sha I know this. Break is a good idea.

Been writing today and as I have no deadline to meet it seems to be flowing a lot better.

I am cosidering posting on the blog though, at my own pace, anyone who's got a problem with that should fly through the roof for all I care but I'm definitely not posting on NL TILL I'm done.

@iosprince, I'll join you at Princessa's soon.

maishot: Princesa and "Change" are mutually exclusive.

In all this years, u're still the same girl..,
Hmmm.
I'm guessing repro girl's rubbing on u.
Way to go girl.

I'm not exactly sure what that was meant to mean.

Dibangoking: @repo i could sense anger in u...who wouldn't be anyway.Bt u cn stil calm those nerves

Am calming down small small.

[quote author=shits_happen]Just browsed thru the last chapter,' what the fvck was that?'
** goes back to sipping my vodka and coke**
pls tell that repo girl to mind herself and allow kitty and ise do the 'damned thing'.[/quote]

HMmmm, with this last outburst, jide seems really insecure, who can blame him sha?

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See as people dey wait, EKARO, You sef?

@kaboninc, points noted. Although you are repeating what I said earlier today, I'm taking time off to write and complete the story.

Candis please let's not be mean here. Everyone is entitled to talk and also to answer. I came, I argued, and I have put up my arguing boots as it seems we are going around incircles.

Ms Spaqs: My dear Repo i tink u knw wat u must do.Tk time off 2 write your story we wl b waitin 4 u wen u r ready.We humans are Insatiable.

Thanks fr understanding, ms spaqs

emsheddy: Repogirl, C.O.C.K fight? Oboy dis girl wicked oh.

, ehen nao, what else? Let the men get down to it, I want to know jide's fighting skills.

Gen gen gen, enough akshun coming up next, I can't wait.

Princessa, C.O.C.K fight O! Fists of Fury part 2!

donkelz: sista peju alias aunty repo, i lay louis vuitton shirt 4 u...am new 2 nairaland but ur story waz wat drew me 2 d literature section wia i've read mazi, princess and even oga coolval's story. Make una do go publish book. I undastand d stress u go thru in writing...am an editor of a skul magazine, i also understand u ar a wife and mother, but d gap in posting d story is killng d enthusiasm of d readers in. What can u do abt it?

Right, I've addressed this issue in my post above, I can't keep up with you guys so I know the best thing is to take time off and do it well, just like I did the first eight chapters.

At my own pace, when ever I'm ready I'll post it here for y'all.

Point gotten.
Now what was this about ?

chinedumo: As a married lady do u mind our kissing, cuddling, petting, sleeping on the same bed?

chinedumo: Repo if you feel my critic is too voluminous at the momment, i can tone it down for now and come at it some other time. I understand you might not be willing to change the already 'penciled down'.

#tinsidoforpals

Its okay, you can leave it the way it is.
The aspergers things was a joke as someone rightly pointed above cos you kept asking if I was humiliated or annoyed.

Aspergers syndrome is a mental disorder where someoine who suffers from it cannot read the feelings of people. As in they misread people's emotions.

Sorry if u wee offeneded, now that you know its relevance.

@ ohiebenemma, I take criticsm well, when it makes sense, I agree to changes and corrections when it comes from true critics and I see their point. I will not take insults disguised as critiqing.

I will also argue a point out till the end especially if I feel I'm right or unless you have better points to sway me.

On the issue of me attacking my critics in the guise of jokes, I apologise if I offended anyone, I play a lot, maybe too much, so play ends here and its to business.

On the issue of my taking too long to update, I agree with you on everything and I have to say now that I can't keep up with y'alls expetations.
If giving last minute updates is reducing the qualiry of the story then please I beg to go on a break. Let me take my time to write my story and when I'm done I will post it here for any interested readers.

This is not shakara or fronting, this is me saying it as it is, I have projects here I keep on hold because I have to upload something for you guys here.

I can't share myself into a hundred pieces, somethings have to give, I'm afraid it will have to be false pretenses.

Thanks guys for everything, y'all know y'all are the bestest!

So...chinedumo, what exactly is wrong if they kiss, cuddle, hold hands and don't do sex? Is it impossible?

Great to know some real guys are out there after all, that sex isn't the main part of a relationship.

I'm a christian too but when I write, since its not a christian novel, I write realistically which is why I go for premarital sex which is what happens most of the time in relationships.
Just saying.

As I said previously, she is over Izu but one doesn't just jump into something else just like that. She's physically attracted to ise so why wouldn't she kiss or touch him?

Hmmm, chinedu, my keypad has had enough typing for one day, I rest my humble case.

@ candis, trust na, all d guys will vote in favour of se'x.

@ iosprince, I dnt think beycitee deserved such a response from you, maybe you wanted to refer to chinedumo ?

@princessa, I doff my own versace hat to u too. I tell you I'm learning quite a lot today. I knew guys attached an importance to sex but I didn't know it was this serious, anyway, its all good sha, thanks for the input, really educative.

@ chinedumo,' some sex' will definitely come up at the right time, just not yet, that's what I keep saying.
Remember Ise said when she comes to him, he's waiting for her to be ready and right now she isn't because she's not opening up her self to him yet.

Ise did have contact with women, just physical stuff, nothing memorable. I stated that sometime in the beginning.

Kite is over Izu but still she's got to wait a while before delving into sex again, besides, like I said before, she's not opened up her heart for Ise yet cos she believes it won't work, so she can't really have sex with him-not yet.

Alright, , we're having a small talk, no arguements.

Melancholy: This beijing trip will have nothing special btw them but the regular kissing,touching,gisting.I can see where the title 'FALSE PRETENSE' is coming from,obviously Ise ofcourse making a wrong representation of big guys that we don't need sex.

Chai, my lord, why hath thou diverted all these sex freak/ starved guys onto my story nau? There will be sex when there will be sex nau! This is deeper than sex o.

@ candis, dnt mind these guy jare, they've got me thinking that guys do really have only one thing on their mind when they're with a chick.

And I was thinking guys could be deeper than just sex, I was sooo wrong.
The way I see it sex is synonimous to love for guys while girls are into a guys actions.

Anyway, thanks for having my back against them o.

As for you, Rajosh, I smh, na so every body go just die for no reason? No nao, I gat more imagination than dat nao, stay tuned .

chinedumo: i too think d story is okay.
I also think it can be improved upon.

Chinedumo, this one you're so on about sex, na wao? You sure you aren't the one who needs the sex cos Ise isnr complaining.

This story is pro premarital sex but for the right reasons, not to quench lust. She just left her boyfriend of seven years, she has to take some time to adjust before delving into something else.

Besides for now she still believes she and Ise can't work out, they are from different worlds and she's only with him until she can sort Izu out. So should she really sleep with Ise when she's still holding herself from him?

Maybe guys can jump in and out just like that but I think for a female (a good female) it takes sometime especially one who just came out of a seven year relationship.

As for bedmatics, ofcourse Ise is an awesome lover, as seen in chapter 15, I think. Can I be with a guy who's bad in bed, well as far as he gives me all the loving, true loving o not sex, I can be with him. I will teach him how to do the sex part and as long as he's not a dunce he will learn nao.

Sex is just one small part of a relationship,I don't think a girl in her right mind would stay with a guy who always makes her feel like crap even if the sex is hot like fire!

I'm not writing a sex/lust story here, I'm trying to deal with the heart. If you need softporn, THE MAZI is there! .

And when did I say Ise loves her? I remember crush and then he's now liking her a lot, I don't remember saying 'love'.

I've not watched the video yet cos am on my mobile, possibly when am back on d PC.

And no ofcourse not, I'm not humiliated,why would I be? Maybe you shld check ursef for that Asperger's syndrome too :p besides you know I know you now, you loooove your debates, so its allowed.

Now you accused me of leaving some things unanswered , please lemme know what else I might have missed.

Thanks, your opinion is always highly welcome and valued, I just don't have to adhere to it.

I disagree with you on all the aforementioned points. Bedmatics doesn't make one fall in love. One falls inlove with a person's character and characteristics, bedmatics is the icing on the cake.

Secondly Ise doesn't need kite to do anything for him, he already likes her so much, while she's the one whose mind needs to open up more toward him, he's not doing I love you if you love me style. He's wooing her, remember?

And has Kite ever said she was going to golddig from him? All she has ever implied was she wouldn't be with him for too long. She's using him, yeah and kinda lying to him but maybe not for the reasons you think. (Now I've divulged too much.)

Lastly I know this is a ploy of yours to get LVMJJ to this thread, so you guys can debate. No wahala, with those few points of mine above, I hope I have been able to convince and not confuse you on why your points are wrong.