The SoothSayer: OP What planet did you come from? Sincerely, I'm sorry to say this but I'm just shocked. Why do people write like this? Do you actually call this poetry? Are you kidding me? This is one of the best poems I have read. Believe me, I've read a lot. This one is fantabulous! Your rhythm and rhyming is wow!

Psychedelia:

Ummm... Could you C.Y.M.?

peterphd:
Do you have a problem with atheists?

peterphd: Nice work christar, you're really good. About John's case, I think it would have been better to have left it at where he picked himself up and decided to get jummy back instead of saying he "gave his life to Jesus". It makes it seem like religion has really been a big factor in this whole love affair and his bi-sexuality. The average reader would predict that he'd be "delivered" from bi-sexuality and he'd become straight.This is surely Not the case in reality as even you called readers to question whether homosexuals/bi-sexuals choose to be so. The story's already written but this is my opinion.Thanks