Keep it up! Now I applaud the twist. The Class rep is indebted to the shadow and his dad the chief priest so he got more work to do

Therock5555:
Jesus .... dude, why?


okay, sorry I thought you were writing a prose at first until I noticed you writing again in a drama form, I don't mean to devalue your write up sir but I find it really foolish when you mix prose and drama form of writing together, it gives me head ache. Please can you stick to one form of writing please, it would never make you a good writer if you keep that up, I'm not a literature student but I assure you that this kind of write up would get thrown out in any competition be it prose or drama writing. I couldn't read pass page 0. Maybe I'll be back later and try again.


well-done nevertheless......

You are not a literature student so on what authority do you stand to give such correction? Now lemme get things clear to you! We are in an advanced world and not a sterotyped world anymore what sold years ago is mere crap today and what's selling today will be mere crap tomorrow!

The arts have so advanced that there is no longer a disparity between prose and drama, Sculpture and Ceramics, painting and textile, film and stage drama! Classicals and New age, Reggae and Hiphop. These things are now intertwined in a large web.

The world have almost been fully explored so we have to break laws to create new things!

Quote me anywhere, when you make something out of nothing it becomes a big deal!

#Peace!