I was going to ask Oyin why he didn't complete this story when I saw the last update.

pabon:


That's wisdom. I will download them. Are you a writer as well?

I'm not a writer but I do a lot of typing on the mobile platform

Mirabel just made a very big mistake, should Victor decide to call off her bluffs after so much pleading, she'll start to regret her overreaction. With one fell swoop she just distrusted two people; her fiance and one of her best friends. Promise' heart shall be broken forever as she'll not forgive herself for being the cause of Victor loosing his happiness.
Mirabel could be driving Promise and Victor together and she might regret it.

pabon:

Thanks for the suggestions. I have the UK English language module downloaded. Are you talking of downloading others?

And I actually type is using word document app much like Microsoft word.

#MadeofMore

Yes, it would be better if you download more language modules, that gives the app more words to recognise as you're writing a magic story, you may need to use words across platforms most especially Espana, Portuguese, Deutsch and others. It really helps and you learn new words from the suggestion list.

pabon:

don't mind me jor. It could be longer but it takes me more time correcting errors than when I was previously using the blackberry with keypads. Do you know a better keyboard as this one keeps autocorrecting the words. Seriously, it could've been longer.


I'll still keep on trying sha.

#MadeofMore

Which device are you using?
If its an Android device, try getting the Swiftkey app, it can tailor the words after the ones you use most and your social media word choices and it can also learn as you type.

feyorpe:

So you mean such diary should be overlooked? Lai lai, a good woman must be very observant... to avoid one chance!

You know its wrong if someone from somewhere just peep into your deepest secrets without your permission, that is a line that a decent person should never try to cross.
Can you imagine yourself in Promise' place, how would you react if someone just invaded your privacy just because the person is being observant.
For crying out loud a diary is a book that contains someones deepest thought and wishes. The person may not be ready to share such thoughts with anybody. What Mirabel did is an invasion of Promise' right to privacy, many people get sued over that in civillized world

Pabon, this update is too short, considering the long hiatus, kindly update like 2 more short ones or an exceedingly long one for people to really appreciate this beautiful, out of the box storyline

This is getting interesting, Mirabel is really a jealous lady.
But she doesn't have the right to infringe on some one's privacy, she has gone a step too far by peeping into Promises' Diary. But at least she will appreciate the fact that she's not the only one who truly loves Victor.
Victor needs to be very cautious in the way he handles the case.
Hopefully Mirabel's brother will be able to convince her of her errors.

Marcus should get a second chance if he is for real
Victor should help Frederick hook up with Promise
Mirabel should be convinced to wholeheartedly forgive Marcus.


All in all, Happy Birthday Victor!!!
Have a blast!

Thanks Obinnau, You're appreciated. Queen, you need to personally contact the moderators when you run into this kinda issue next time. It took mails from people like me to call attention of Obinnau to the issue.
Now that we know that Nairaland makes use of spambots to moderate threads, I think it would be unfair to categorically blame the moderators for every ban.
Apologies to Obinnau for the accusing tone that my mail took in the course of calling your attention to the issue.
Gentlemen and Ladies, let us keep enjoying the beautiful work on this thread. @SmartestpopQueen kindly follow up for the next update ASAP, we're waiting. Go Girl!!!

Victor must not die, Lola must not die, Mirabel should not be tampered with o. Abeg.

Victor abeg post an update ASAP, pls no need for suspense this time around o. Biko.

This is getting even more interesting, setting the two of them against one another will surely, leave an opening for Victor to gain access to the outside world. Marcus is done in and Lola and Dorothy will fight till one of them drops dead when Lola finds out. Lola's love for victor and Mirabel will compel her to act. Dorothy just inadvertently stepped on a wounded and extremely venomous snake.

I think Oga Victor should just dedicate the whole set of updates on this kidnap saga to the #Chibok Girls and boys that were abducted by Boko Haram and Victims of terrorism in the world and over.

what a good job from a skilful writer, you keep improving as the story progresses, great job dude! I believe Dorothy should be be the lady behind the scene. Wait o!!! Lola is the only one that has the resources to do this kind of thing and she's also the one that knew Marcus.