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Nice one dude.
Sorry I came late.
Nice story.
First critism: don't rush it. Take your time to explain it properly. I already feel you are trying to rush it.

No offence though

Quiz question; Who is this unknown person

EPISODE 12
Part 1
MR RICHARD'S POV
"My goodness, what type of police force do we have in this country, arresting two students who risked their lives to save the school from a gang of armed robbers'' I fumed as I sat on the bed. This is total rubbish.
"Relax dear, they might have their reasons'' my wife said trying to calm me down.
"What reasons do they have? I has to do the work would go there and know their senseless reasons''
"Maybe they just want she interrogate the kids about... ''
"Interrogate for two days. Come on. And you know the situation of Nigeria prison'' I said cutting her off.
"Just take it easy'' she said as she shrugged.
I have been busy for the past two days only to check the net for the latest and I saw this rubbish. What insolence?
I took out my phone and dialled at number.
"Hello''
........
"Get me the location and division of the station that arrested those boys''
.........
"OK be fast with it'' I said ending the call.
"Honey breakfast is ready'' my wife said gently as she popped her head through the half open door.
"Be there in a minute''

I stood up from the bed and slipped out of my nightwear. I rummaged through my wardrobe till I find what I want to wear.
Now clad in a read round neck top and black baggy pants with bedroom slippers, I left the room going down the stairs heading towards the dining.
"Morning dad'' came the greeting from my beautiful daughter
"Morning dear. How was your night'' I asked as I stare into her pretty eyes.
"Fine dad'' she replied and left for the kitchen to meet her mom. Sometimes I wonder what my wife does in the kitchen. We have enough maid but yet she prefer to cook meals. Though the maids meals are no where near her's.
As I passed through the sitting room heading towards the dining, I saw it again. The pictures of the two boys being arrested on the TV as they were being shown again as headlines. It is said that the police believes they are members of the gang. I believe they are heroes and what they did was something to be rewarded with scholarship or something but definitely not with imprisonment. If what they said in the news was true, it means they could have easily absconded with the money but they choose to fight for their school.


"Dad do you believe they are heroes also'' I heard my daughter ask.
I turned back to see her standing few meters behind me. I didn't reply but only shrugged my shoulders.
"I believe they are innocent and heroes with raw talent. Not much people even trained officers could have done what they did.'' she said.
"You would get them out, wouldn't you?'' she asked when I didn't say anything.
I walked towards her and her innocent face and stared into her eyes. Those innocent and beautiful eyes. She looked so pure and gentle.
"I would get them out'' I said smiling and staring into her eyes.
"Thanks dad, uhmm I would also love to meet them you know'' she said smiling coyly.
"Sure, Anything for my princess'' I replied with a smile.
She left and went back to the kitchen while I head to my main destination, the dining. No sooner had I settled in the dining that my phone rings.
"Yes'' I said as I picked it without even checking the name.
............................
"Are you sure''
...............
"Ok'' I said as I ended the call and got up from dining chair and head upstairs to the bedroom to have a change of clothes. Coming out of the bedroom refreshed, I was now clad in a white top on a pair ofblack shinos and a white and black trainers. I also added a black face cap for fun. Descending down the stairs, I was met with an obstruction, a particular beautiful one.

"Where are you going darling'' she asked sweetly.
"I got the location of those boys. So am going there, Right now'' I replied laying emphasis on the "Right now'' As I tried to get past her.
" But you have not had your breakfast'' she said blocking me with her body. Not that I could not go around her if I want to but I have to be polite with her.
"I already had delicious smoking hot tea in bed. I think that is enough'' I replied trying to sweet talk her.
"But...... But..
"But nothing dear, I already had tea and those two innocent teenagers might not have eaten anything for the past two days'' I replied cutting her off.
"What if they are actually guilty? What would you gain from there? ''
"I would gain peace of mind and satisfied conscience'' I replied as I finally grabbed my car key from the center table, planted a peck on her lips whispering I love you then I rushed out before she can get an excuse to delay me.
Usman!
USMAN !! I called out as I walked briskly to the garage. He came out from God knows where and I tossed the key of the LEXUS RX350, a beautiful silver Lexus Jeep.
I opened the door and sat at the owners corner. He immediately rushed into the driver's sit, blared the horn twice then reversed out of the garage and went through the open gate as the gate had already been opened by the gatekeeper after hearing the loud horn.
"Oya where to'' usman asked with his thick house accent.
"Division A police station, ijoko , Ogun state'' I replied without glancing at him.
"OK sir'' He replied and the car sped off.

Am sorry if it looks short.
But know that this is just the part one. The part two comes up tomorrow

Cadec007:
#TEAM HEROES

Nice
Next update comes up soon

Evold:
Emmanuel and Bolu are heroes and killers at the same tym coz although they somehow saved the school,they killed recklessly and they seem to be experts in the art.!

Hmm

PoliticalThuG:
Mumu Story

Huhhhh

Skylard101:
Naaa I don't want to give all that would happen in the story

Though you guys are already guessing it

Question.
Who is the strange man. I need your quick reply.
Next update might come up today. I need to plug my phone

Cadec007:
you are very free to comment boss dont withhold ur comment pls

Naaa I don't want to give all that would happen in the story

Episode 11
"You are under arrest''
"You are UNDER ARREST''
"YOU ARE UNDER ARREST''
Those were the words that kept ringing in my heads every blessed seconds of every blessed day. It's been two days now that we have been arrested. We were arrested on Monday afternoon or is it morning and this is Thursday.
Our families have done everything humanly possible to get us released, all to no avail. I hear the voice of my dad and mum everytime as they tried to negotiate our release. For my dad to be in the station pleading means he left his work just for me. It really hurts me as I also hear my mum's voice almost crying. They don't even allow them to see us.

I am really mad with anger at this idiots on uniform.
One, they locked us up for no reason whatsoever. Perhaps they thought we were members of the gang. It's really crazy. We should have escaped with the money rather than risk our lives to save the school. Am sure the robbers would do more than just take the money. Even the director, whose as we saved did not do anything to help us. Such an ingrate. He just took his money and disappeared.

I stared Emmanuel sitting at ine corner of the cell and I felt pity for him. He jumped off a two story building and he hasn't received any medical attention since. He is lucky not to have suffered any bodily injuries like sprained only few pains in the muscle and general weakness.
To worsen the case, neither of us has eaten anything for the past two days.
Not that those nincompoops didn't serve us anything, they did but am sure my goal would not even eat such food, iced beans without water to drink. Not only that, we actually fear they may poison us, from the way they stare at us like expecting us to be dead. So we threw it out through the small window.
We were actually kept in some cells in the police station, the criminals in the other cells were not much as we were kept in a little cell with poor ventilation.
Thankfully, we were not tortured.... Too much. At least not too much beating, no hot iron, no shooting on our legs, just some interrogations. That's fair enough.

I was hearing the distant chatter of the officers. Why can't they focus on their work. I don't think they have any work though. Then, their voices went higher a pitch. I tried to make out what they are saying and it looks like they were insulting someone. I shocked my head. This has been their regular pattern. They insult anybody that comes to make a complaint. Then suddenly, everywhere became quiet. No one said anything. I strained my ears to try and hear the tiniest of sounds but nothing. I was scared and worried. Has some robbers attacked and come for us? That is very unlikely as I heard no gunshots.
I listened harder trying to focus on the littlest of sounds but I heard nothing. I stared at Emmanuel but he looks too weak to notice anything.
Then I heard salutes. "Shun sir'' no Oo sir, sir. Goodness who were they saluting. The governor?
Then everything became silent again for about 15 minutes, nothing not even a whimper. Now that is very unlikely. Then I heard footsteps approaching us. Immediately I ran to a corner and sat down feigning sleep.

The footsteps came closer and stopped at our cell. I heard the dangling of keys and opening of padlock. I opened my eyes and saw an officer, the inspector standing, standing at the entrance of our cell.
"You two stand up and follow me'' He said pointing to the two of us. Wow that was nice. Most of the time they came here, they keep shouting and barking at us like rottweilers. I look at the inspector's face and what I saw surprised me. I saw fear on his face. He was scared but of who/what. I tapped Emmanuel and I helped him up. We came out of the cell and the man locked it. Then together, we went through the small passage with cells lined up on each side. We then turned left at the end of the small passage and climbed a couple of stairs which leads to the police counter. We we got to the counter, we were met with a peculiar sight. All the officers were there and on their kneels.
WHAT THE HECK? I glanced at Emmanuel and saw the surprised look on his face which was soon replaced by an amused look then we started laughing. We both laughed so had that tears started forming at our eyes, soon enough we began coughing cause our throat was kinda sore. But surprisingly, non of the uttered a word, they only stared at us with venom and anger, but Who Cares, not us anyways.
We managed to compose ourselves and the man leading us went left and we followed him. I then noticed that we were heading towards the D.P.O's office. We got to the door of the office and the inspector knocked twice before entering and we followed suite.

The D.P.O's office is a medium type office. The walls were a combination of blue and black and there was a fridge at the left corner of the office. It has a large table on which different papers are arranged on it and three swivel chairs, one large one(obviously meant for the DPO by one side of the table and two small ones opposite it. But surprisingly the DPO was seating on a small one while a strange man is sitting on the much larger one and has his back to us.
I was not really surprised with the figure I saw standing at the left side of the office. Looking surprisingly great without the normal tattered look prisoners is the one and only Dan. He doesn't have the hungry nor the tattered look of normal prisoners but looks kinda well fed. My eyes travelled to his laps where I shot him and I saw that it is bandaged and he is still leaning on the other leg. The only look that is on his face is the look of anger, suprise and fear.

My attention was drawn back to the man backing us as he turned slowly on the chair to face us. He stared at Emmanuel and I. Then he made his focused on Emmanuel for a while examining him before bringing the focus to him. The stared at me and I stared back then a staring contest ensued.
I broke the eye contact an examined him. He was clad in a white designer top over a pair of black shinos and a cool white and black trainers. He looked simple yet classy. I get this feeling that he is someone important as my eyes went to his gold wristwatch and then back to his face. I arched my brows up and gave him the "Who are you'' look

Cadec007:
i said so too all these things are based on survival instinct. I remember carrying my fathers personal pistol for the first time [an eight mm berretta] could you believe because of my preparedness its was not heavy contrary to popular believe.The more i sneaked to handle the metal the more it felt like my property and the more tempted i was to pull the trigger. Do you mean to tell me if need waranted i use i wouldn't have operated it with relatively little stress? There is this popular saying that "one does not know what he his capable of doing until he is pushed to the edge". I dont see hot it is supriring that a group of teens handled a technically easy to use weapon when in some countries child soldiers go as far as handling m16 rifles or u doubters want to tell me they had adequate training as to handling that weapon. These guys should be taken and trained i an sure in states like syria,iran,palestine they wouldn't wait to be told b4 conscripting them. My idea though.

Hmm I reserve my comment

honourable356:
The flash back at the beginning of the story is spot on. Almost everyone, I included thought that they were special force commandos on a rescue mission.

He laughs...

I would have twisted the story of I were the writer. But being unpredictable with the keyboard or bic in your hand is one of the major hallmark of a talented upcoming writer.

I would take it that it's great then

honourable356:
Have you ever handle a pistol before? or a load gun?? forget what you see in TV it is not about point ,take aim AND shoot unless the guns have be set ready.

These boys change bullet magazine, how is that even possible instincts?? No no... White movies doesn't always tell the whole story. Anyway, I won't drag this point until you can get a grip of a gun put at safety mode.

As for the police, to aid their investigation, arrest must be made, statement must be taken. And these boys are the key players. So, yes the police were right to arrest them.

I surrender.
Let's take that as an anomaly in the story.
What do you think about the flash back

PREVIOUSLY ON ALPHA SQUAD
"Brother Bolu wake up let's come and pray''.
.....................
Rachel:"WHY did you not come last week''
Me:"I had some things to settle at home''

Principal: "Mr Raphael has said it all. Being morally upright is about your character and behavior and also attitude towards not only people but your education''
HEAD BOY COME OUT.

Principal: Why we're you not in school last week.
Me:Am sorry sir I can't tell you because it's a private matter but it's already settled.

Me:Dude na your face be this.
Emmanuel: O BOY long time Oo.

Chika: Sen... ior Bo.. Olu the di...rector calls for.. or yo.. u.. u.
Me: Where is he?
Chika: Princ..iipal's of.. Fice

Director:Go to my office and you would see a briefcase. Bring it for me.

Me:Emmanuel let's go to the director's office.
Emmanuel : okay let's go.

Me: E-black this briefcase is a bit heavy Oo.
Emmanuel: lazy boy.
Jesus wetin dey there.
Let's check.

Me: O my God.
Let's go.

#KPA KPA.#

Me:Emmanuel.... armed robbers those were gunshots

Emmanuel: What do we do
........
Me:This key here is the Master's key.
We have the home advantage.
Remember our ultimate fantasy.
...............
Leader: where is the office
Director: in my office
Leader; okay let's go.

Leader:where is my money.
Director: I kept it here but I gave a student a key to bring the...
Leader. Shut up.

"SOME ONE HAS STOLEN OUR MONEY''

Me: wait, can't just go barging in there. We need a plan.
Emmanuel : we have no plan.
Me: I do.

Leader:Tell me who among the students is not here.

Me: LOOKING FOR US. Or should I say LOOKING FOR THIS.
Leader: give me that bag.
.............
Me:First it is not a bag.
Second, you want it, then CATCH.
.............
Leader: Someone is in that building.
..............
Leader: Well well well if it isn't the hero thief.
Me: am not a thief
Leader:Where is my money.
Me:It's not yours

Leader: Do you know why I hate heroeos, cause they die at the end.
.................
Me: do you know why I hate villains.
Cause they waste all their time talking when they could have easily completed the job.
NOW.
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Police:DROP YOUR GUN AND RAISE YOUR HAND IN THE AIR.
Me: Hey we are students.
...................
Director: where is the money.
Me: Below the stairs at the back of the ICT suite.
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Inspector: Take the bodies and this boys away.
Me & Emmanuel: WHAT
Inspector: you are UNDERARREST

Uhmm how do you guys see it.
Flashback is gonna be very essential in this story.
So how do you see it. Tell me my errors so that I can improve in the next one

Ps: easy on the critics, I have never written it before

honourable356:
A teenager pulling the trigger in a life and death situation can never be implicated.

It is a case of kill or get killed.
The kids couldn't have been capable enough to render the army of robbers incapacitated when dangerous weapon Is on display.

But, being able to handle firearm effortless as a teenager is questionable. They will be grilled on that.

A hero or killers??
They are both!

But for a good reason.

Their handling of firearms and guns are based on instincts..... Survival instincts. If you noticed most of those they shot were caught unawares. They were not really involved in a one on one gun battle involving guns and wits whereby the opponent is ready.

I hope you get it. Good contribution though.
I need more

But are the police right in arresting them

Nice. Mole and marvel this is gonna be great

Let me see your view promgurlp

Are Bolu and Emmanuel heroes or killers.

GIVE YOUR REASONS.
Cadec007. Evold , idrisbabat5, Black5050, Dranoid, honourable356, Godwinfury, EmperorTayo1864, dammypheex, YINKS89, seun0225.

Come and contribute.
Let me see your views.
Make this place lively till I come to update

Are Bolu and Emmanuel heroes or killers.

GIVE YOUR REASONS.
Cadec007. Evold , idrisbabat5, Black5050, Dranoid, honourable356, Godwinfury, EmperorTayo1864, dammypheex, YINKS89, seun0225

I have not been getting myself for sometime. But I would be updating soon. But I want to ask a question.

Is the police right in arresting Bolu and Emmanuel.

Give your reasons

Am really sorry for not updating yesterday. Somethings came up and I was very week. I would update today by God's grace

Black5050 how do you see the story

Dranoid:
I actually agree with the police officers. What bolu and emmanuel did was right but unlawful, multiple counts of murder, illegal and underage use of firearms, for the ones that engaged them they can still claim self-defense but what of the others and besides if the leader won't want to talk the police can question them.

I sha hope they will emerge victorious sha

Wait.... You agree with the officers. Seriously.
You know what next time, I would just watch them steal the money kill the director and others without doing anything. Or better still I would have escape with the money.

Anyway what you listed are not the reason the police arrested them. You'll see

honourable356:
Wait a minute, which secondary school could that be??

A military secondary school??

or just any other government or private school??

It is highly absurd for a merely secondary school student of 17 years old no matter his fantasy to know how to use a gun... not just a gun but a variety of guns with a glaring confidence!

The audacity at which there boys wield the gun even if the both had a hint of military background which was not even obvious leaves one major comment: Very very odds!!!

Yeah.... yeah.. I get it I get it, it is just a story nah... it is not like it is real.


Inasmuch as I agree with the above assertion, inasmuch as this action filled story kept the audience at the edge of their seats, it have got a huge hitch... it doesn't conform to the happening in the world today.

Make believe stories ALWAYS lives on.

So does culture and tradition,
Magic, and
Even sex.

Exceptional storyline is important to entice the audience BUT it shouldn't be something that will get one of these legend or experienced readers laughing saying,..

"HOW IS THIS EVEN POSSIBLE"?
SOUNDS MORE LIKE A CARTOON?

FALLACY!!!!!

However,this being your first time/or first story.. I have absolutely confidence in you judging by this very storyline that you will get it right, if not it this story, then probably the next one.

Not every great writer announce their entry in the literacy world with a Bang.

He smiled...
Show us what you can do for the potential is potent and obvious!

Best wishes!!!

Hmm. Wow I get it.
I would still try to make it great.
Guess the beginning has a little error.
Thanks for noting that though.

Godwinfury:
Naija police sef, their papa!

If an America people, u go hear, "You guy did what a lot of people couldn't have done, am proud of you boys, you guys are heroes", but Naija? Nigeria? 9ja? tarh!!!, them go torture u till u confess say na u orchastrate the robbery.
Silly ¢unts.

Exactly

But I have update na. And I update regularly. I already told you once a day

Episode 10
I stood were I was as I awaited my death; the leader, 2 armed men and the two business men came in armed except the business men and here I am defenceless. I started at the business men with hatred. They orchestrated it all. They are the master mind of It all. I looked at the two doors on my left and right again reconsidering my decision of running into it. They walked in confidently and I stared at them. I stared at death. They walked slowly towards me, the leader in front, two armed men beside him but a little bit behind and the two business men at the further back. I took a step backwards as they advanced towards me, then another one then I stopped I could not take another one as my back had reached the wall. I pressed my back against the wall wishing I could enter it and escape from this monsters. Then I felt it, the cold metal pressing against my back, my only hope, the UZI. Maybe am not totally defenceless after all. All I need to do is strategize. The police are outside I just need to stall them till the police gets here.

"Well well, well if it isn't the hero thief'' the leader said as he came close enough.
Well this is my chance to stall.
"Am not a thief'' I replied boldly.
"Where is my money. Tell me and I might let you go'' He said standing more gallantly with his hands in his pockets.
"It's not yours..... It belongs to the director '' I added.
"Oo you think he is going to share it with you, right?''
"No''
"WHY, why did you do it. Why did you decide to obstruct my plans. Why did you decide to play hero'' He said that last part with a smirk.
"Cause it's my ultimate fantasy'' I replied with a smirk of my own
" You know, you are pretty good with guns and brilliant. Such a pity you a sharp mind like yours is gonna be wasted.'' I said nothing as my heart was already thumping.
"Do you know why I hate heros'' He asked as he brought out his gun and played with it.
"Cause they die at the end'' He said without waiting for my reply and placed the gun on my head. I was super scared. Holy poo. Where are the police. Jeez I can't die like this. I gotta do something. Think dude, THINK. My mind and brain stared working at Super speed that even flash would be jealous of.
"Wait'' I said as he was about to pull the trigger.
"What... Nothing can save you boy''
"Why''
"Why what'' He asked confused.
"Why are you doing this... I asked as I stylishly folded my arms behind me trying to get the Uzi out.
"have noticed every thing you have said was in pure and correct English. And am guessing you went to the University and at least came out with something. So why? Why indulge in armed robbery?'' I asked making my voice sound as cool and soft as possible. I really hoped the police gets here soon.
"Let's go Dan. End this idiot and let's leave'' one of the business man said.
"No he wants to know why.. At least let me fulfill his last wish'' He said coldly and the two business men left him.
They both went outside to try and open the gate.
"You want to know why'' He asked his voice still cold but with a bit of anger. His eyes were closed and he faced the ground. I considered taking him out then but there are also the two armed men. All I can do for now is to wait and pray.
"You Wanna Know Why'' He asked again a bit louder with more anger and he grips my shirt and held me harder against the wall.
Oops guess I hit a spot. He already dropped his gun. That's good news for me.
"4 years in the University studying mass communication. I came out with a 2nd class upper certificate, Clean. Two years down the line. I couldn't get a job. Borrowed money from family and friends and went for masters, eighteen months. Three years later I still could not get job. I lost my girlfriend that I love so much and have spent a lot on. I lost her to a rich man who used to be my best friend. Now you ask me Why? I pity you students our there that still waste your time reading because there is nothing for you. NOTHING'' He ended almost choking me as his hand was against my throat.
"Nice speech'' I said with a smile amidst discomfort.
"You said something earlier about hating heros.''
"Do you know why I hate villains'' I asked smiling as I saw Emmanuel take out the two business men and stood at the door with the AK47. They had their backs turned to him so they could not see him.

"Because they waste so much time talking and gloating when they could have easily completed the job''
"NOW'' I shouted as I already had the Uzi in my hands and shot Dan ( the leader) in his laps twice and quickly moved into the room at the right with him While Emmanuel unloaded bullets after bullets at the shocked armed men who were trying to come after me.
I came out of the room dragging the leader's body who was still alive but groaning in pains. I looked at Emmanuel who leaned on the wall weakly with the AK47 dangling on his right hand. I left the body and went over to Emmanuel. I patted him and placed his right hand over my shoulders making his weight rest on me and we moved outside together with his AK47 dangling in his right hand while my Uzi dangled in my left. We came out of the building only to meet about 20guns pointed at us.

"DROP YOUR GUNS AND RAISE YOUR HANDS IN THE AIR'' one of the officers said with a megaphone. What is the use of the megaphone when we are so close. I looked around and saw that we are surrounded by mostly police officers while some are in different uniform. So they are finally here. After we are done with the job. What rubbish.
"Hey we are students'' I said loudly showing them the badge on the uniform.
"Bolu, Emmanuel, my goodness. About five policemen then went inside and where shocked when the saw the dead bodies.
"One is still breathing sir'' an officer said as he came out.
"Bring him out'' the higher officer replied.
"Oo that is their leader, dan'' I said in recognition as they carried him out. I saw the officer arched a brow up.
"Where is the money'' the director asked. It's at the back of the ICT suite. It's hidden under the tables and chairs behind the door at the back of the suite... This is the master key'' I said bringing the key out of my pocket and giving him.
" Take the bodies and this boys away'' the highest officer there said after being silent for about 2 minutes.
"What'' we asked weakly in unison and with confusion. "WHY take us away.''


"YOU ARE UNDER ARREST''

Next update comes up today

EmperorTayo1864:
you this guy ehn, ah no know wetin i go do for your matter o

What did I do

dammypheex:
Oya.... d rest part

It's coming