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ThaRuthlxx7:
From my findings this will be a good story, ur consistency is too lagging.. U started this story jan 2 and till date u haven't updated upto 6times it ain't cool..with this act u cant attract lots of traffic/readers ..
Evn if it not the best story on NL there is a price for constant updater.. Hope u take this

ohh sorry boss. I will be frequent as from today. When people don't follow that's why I stopped. I promice to turn a new leaf.

Thanks for reading

standd:
Thanks
Will read yours too

am waiting 4 u boss

Hi this story is short and interesting. Oh I love it. You can also read mine. To read my story, just click on the link in my signature.

ThaRuthlxx7:
walks proudly into the thread. Present

thanks very much.

kenwins:
I aint a writer bt I believe you need to proof read or do I use the word edit your story before updating. You threw away some punctuations as well as some words.
I'm looking forward to voting you as the best writer someday.
#Still I read

thanks very much. I will edit it. Thanks very much

Following

Hi interesting short story. Really interesting. Permission to copy and paste?

Interesting bro. Keep it up

Nimen:
Try describing every imagination in the story, description makes it more interesting... Nice story though.
By the way... How you get ma moniker

lol. Thanks 4 reading.

eunisam:
nice storyline tattesco i was bored so i decided to check u out.ur good just keep it on. but try updating.

thanks for reading

We work as sales boys in Aribila's bar in one of the busiest place in lagos. Since he has brought us from the deserted road that night and have been taking good care of us. We managed his bar for him since he has no sales boy or girl

In our first two years in our working place, everything seem cool and smooth because we are being guarded by potter as people often call Mr Aribila.

"Potter boys" as we are often called by the customers of potter.

"Give us four plates of bush meat and four bottles of 33", one of snails customers ordered.

Ori (head) as he was often called is one of our regular customer. He comes to our bar every friday evening with different young girl. This evening he came with three different ladies apart from the ashawos that lives in the brothel beside our bar


Suddenly some young people suspected to be member of a secret cult stormed our s with cutlass and other dangerous weapons in their hand. They kept shouting on top of their voice beating anybody on sight.

I ran out of the bar but noticed Bidemi is out of sight, I saw him minutes ago when he went to went to attend ori.

"Kola!!" I heard bidemi calling me from afar. I turned around and saw him distance away. I was relieved.

As I attempt to run, I felt a sharp pain on my head. I felled to the ground unconscious

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I opened my eyes and saw snail and Bidemi beside me whispering to each other.

"Oh thanks God he is awake" Bidemi said that smilling to me.

"What happened" I asked trying to raise my head up.

"Those cultist gang use machete to hit you on you head" potter said explaining to me. "Just relax and get well better, I wanna go to station now to make my own statement, sorry" he said then pat my chest before departing.

"Sorry kola" bidemi patted my chest. "Mama snail bought rice for you" he said as he bent down under the bed and bought out a flask opened it.

He placed the food on the drawer and help me to sit upright.

After I finish eating. Then I noticed that there is bandage on my head.

"How did this happen" I asked confused. "When I called you that fateful even and you are about to run to my side" he started. "One of those cultist use his cutlass to cut you on your head, you slumped and went unconsious., thanks to mr Ori's courage. But unfortunately he died" he said sobberly

"What!"

To be continued...............

Marynneka:
Please don't keep us waiting o! I must confess you are doing great. Work weldone.

thanks sis

Hi here. I am new here. I will like to join this chat section of this great literature section.

I av written my first story here. You can see my signature 4 the link. Thanks

kenwins:
Update please.... Dnt kill dis story for alot of Oliver Twist are stil somewhere around the corner

I promice to update today. Thanks sis

Updates will be coming more regularly

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