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Thanks................ Its good you could get pass the boredom and still enjoy the story.

Ladywilyms: Woah! This is really a nice job
wat abt getting a powerful man of God 2 pray n break d curse then live happily?

Nike is a Santeras a divinity i find it hard that she would choose to walk that path after her encounter in Valley of flames ministry. Tunde is a thief with no respect for religion, culture and human life. i didn't think it would be fair for him to have a happy ending. Never the less getting a power man of God to break the curse would make all the suspense meaningless. The joy of suspense is the inability to predict what comes next.

DNA1: ah! Tragedy ke.
Biko Zuby do something for your numba one fan na....why did u allow ogunshola and princess to live happily ever after, and then u are leaving tunde and nike just like that! No oooo.....no be so ooo.....try adjust am abeg...

DNA my number one fan. How would you have preferred it to end? Remember the curse can't be broken she has accepted it. If you can Come up with some creative suggestion that would prevent Nike and Tunde from dying but ensure that their son still grows up an Orphan.Then i would be willing to tweak it a little. Ok....

DNA1: Interesting story...waiting 4 ur next book....u av really inspired me to complete d book i started several years ago.....

But d epilogue seemed as if u RUSHED it...
Besides why did u kill our dear Nike and Tunde..
Waiting for your reply.

Thanks DNA i hope to read the story i inspired you to complete.

An epilogue is usually just used to bring closure to a story. It helps reveal the faith of a character after all the events that occured in the story.It shouldn't be expected to take thesame form as the main chapters of the story.

I didn't kill NIke and Tunde the story said nothing is really known all we have is speculations all we are sure of is that she had a son. We can't confirm if they died or just decided to go their separate ways and leave their son in an orphanage. Its a tragedy dear...

Hugs hugs hugs

arabanibaba: this is so cool and i enjoy it so much i just consult the oracle and your ifa name shall be oworinsogbe

Lol no be small thing oh. Owonrin Sogbe The Odu of Ogbesowonrin talks about the evils of retaliation and how this doesn't solve any problem. Wash your Ori with omi tutu(cool water). I am happy you enjoyed the story.

Clemzy16: Lovely story it is. . .
Definately a front page material. Let's call on the MOD's in this section to move this to the front page.

Thanks clemzy you always had my back. If you really want to endorse the story for front page then go ahead thats the link for that https://www.nairaland.com/1210134/endorse-topics-make-frontpage/12

feedback... feedback... oh! Let me know your opinions.

lovely that all i can say

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Clemzy16: i don't think there is anything wrong with the scene. You can go ahead writing it...besides we are not complaining. Also, they are no longer in nigeria but america where the tolerance of woman-beating is at level zero.

Clemzy there is no woman beating scene in the whole story. I am talking about the scene after Iya's death when tunde arrived and took the statue from her and people attacked him. i want something different.

[quote author=bee-y]Thanks man @ Zub actually I read ur update only when I'm either tired or bored...u are one of the main reason I make comment on NL. Also wish u success in ur Professional exams. Peace.[/quote]You would be fine then nothing do you...

Candis009: I started ds piece today n finished it,it kept me glued to my seat 4 hours,u've gat great talent o

U r now added to d list of my great writers on NL.. Weldne

Thanks for having the patience to make it past the 1st chapter. Most people get bored initially because of the numerous characters and simultaneous events but if they could get past that and see the linkage they love it.

DNA1: d last update was wow....

Hurray ! DNA said my update was wow

I don't like the fact that there are two angry mobs scenes one with Tunde and one with Ogunshola. Would like to change the Tunde scene to something more dramatic any ideas people.

"She goes over and sees Tunde. He asks her to give him the statue but she refuses. He comes close to her, pushes her, and grabs it. Instantly an angry mob attacks him and begins to beat him. She shouts at them to stop but they just continue. He lets go of the statue and she picks it up and the crowd stops."

Thats the scene i want to change...

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jlee: Ask me to rate this story, i will give a five star rating. The best i've come accross, it meets the standard of likes of wole shoyinka's works. Good one there

Thanks Jlee am happy you think highly of my work.

Clemzy16: So far i'm happy and glad to have been part of this journey, from chapter1 now in chapter 6, it has been wonderful all the way.


If this story finds it way into the market i believe it's going to sell. Don't you ever get discouraged of the thought that people might copyright your works when posted online?

Also, what does the curse/spirit of IKU do?

I have measures in place that prevent that so i am not scared. You can't steal my intellectual property without getting into a fight its every writer's responsibility to protect his or her work.

As for what the curse and iku does i refer you to this quote from chapter 1

zubike01: Little does Nike know that Iya has placed a curse as old as history on her, called KASALA. Kasala is a spell that creates a bad aura around the individual it is placed on. It makes things of doom happen all around the individual but shields the person from its effect.

[quote author=bee-y]@ Zub baba I just dey over gbadun u. now I've kept My books away till either I --------or I'm thru wt ds[/quote]Priorities man try and find a balance i need you to smash your professional exam...

OP i didn't understand your rant but i have a question for you. If you were the president of Nigeria how would you change Nigerian? Tell me the changes you would make and how you would go about it.

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i like the way you describe things its very captivating but........

Clemzy16: *In will smith's voice, i say 'GOOD JOB! Is it true that the next update marks the end of this beautiful story?

No we are still in chapter 5 "Ogunshola Quest". We still have chapter 6 "Tears of a Loved One" and it would definitely take more that one update, a chapter is like 8 updates plus or minus . After that the epilogue.

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[quote author=bee-y]@Zub I'm not serious at all wt my professional exam and na u cos am(lol) because if I study as much as I've been reading ur update, I'll definately get qualified this year. More energy to ur fingers.[/quote]lol no be my fault oh what exam is that? Who knows i fit be your professional colleague, but not to worry this is the 2nd to the last chapter, so very soon you would have enough time to study.

Clemzy16: Just read ur last two updates. It was really superb. Can't wait for the next line of action.

Don't worry Clemzy am sure i'll meet all your expectations and beyond. It good fans like you that give us hope.

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DNA1: so...I've been meaning to ask. What inspired u to write this story?

I had the kasala jass and Nike in my mind but i needed a twist so i brought in tunde it still din't have a good twist so i brought in Ogunshola still dind't go well so i brought in the secret and it became perfect.Truth be told my main source of inspiration are davince code the whole secret thing and final destination( A movie about people who cheated death and it was coming after them in form of various accidents.)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XPPglUzoh_0

zubike01: [quote author=DNA1]hahahaha...that should be Nike..

Yeah Nike is very likable but my favourite though is Ogunshola he is a rich kid, a lover boy and he has honour, courage and he has no choice than to be the bad guy

DNA1: update d story ooo, what r u waiting for?

Madam i've updated for today oh but don't worry i would still update more later on. Anyway DNA1 who is your favourite character?

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Clemzy16: This story is getting more interesting by each post. . .

Keep it up bro. More greece to your elbow!

Thanks Clemzy

Damex333: If i dont comment then am a thief cos this story/tale is so interesting that i can't resist

Thanks Damex....

I didn't know Nigerias are ready for mystical conspiracy thrillers

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fruiteeiy: what a good read...... come continue abeg
more oil to ur elbow

Thanks no wahala i go continue

jlee: Fiction or no fiction this story dose have historical facts and am trilled by your sound knowledge of this facts.
More more grace 2 ur ink

I am not sure of the facts just expressing various views of history in fiction, am happy you can relate to it.

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