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Pls. Comments On Some Of My Poems by mufex(m): 12:36pm On Jul 26, 2012 |
WHERE ARE YOU, MR DEATH Where are you, Mr. Death You who forces hurricane to rattle, And command countries to battle? Where are you The evil one that made Dana air to fall, Where are you that bastard that snatched my mother from me? Where are you, Mr. Death, Roaming freely on earth; Drumming suicide to my ears, And wandering gallantly without fears? Where are you? Where are you? Where are you? YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL My love, you are beautiful And if beauty walks, Yours would sprint. My love, you are delightful, And if humans' voice is sexy; Yours is godly! TODAY IS CHRISTMAS Christ was born on christmas, We sing and pray; Children shown off their new heels, Mothers make delicious meals; Today is christmas! 'I hate christmas!'said a fowl wih wounded eye, 'Today, some of my brothers will die; Never hesitate, escape or ever try Just flap your wings, squeak and cry; Today is christmas!' |
Re: Pls. Comments On Some Of My Poems by nikkyshyne(f): 1:32pm On Jul 26, 2012 |
Why are you asking for Mr Death? Let him keep sleeping abeg. You don't want his trouble you know. I give you 1 out of 10 for "You are beautiful" because it didn't work for me. "Today is christmas" fetches you 6. That is a bit fair. |
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