made some adjustment, its live now and running so what you think

www.wippypick.com

I no like am for that site, i go bomb am, walahi!!

Oya boys, talk now. i have too many complaints for this "website".

Maybe you should change the font used, to something like Arial. The one that is there now isn't that friendly to my eyes, and perhaps the eyes of others

Luckily, you used CSS so changing it, should you choose to, will not be a painful experience.

When view on opera mobile the logo is not showing properly.
Are you selling in Naira or USD, and the naira don't have a symbol, assuming I see prada glass 5,000 and other items in dollar, I will assume the glass is $5,000.

1.) Poor use of english on the site
2.) Bad design
3.) Bad design
4.) the links on the navigation bar is not capitalized ( the first letter )
5.) its not a Rwd

*dhtml:
I no like am for that site, i go bomb am, walahi!!

Agreed

xterra2: 1.) Poor use of english on the site
2.) Bad design
3.) Bad design
4.) the links on the navigation bar is not capitalized ( the first letter )
5.) its not a Rwd


Agreed

poor english like? point it out so i can correct it
design: it was built, not made from a downloaded template
navi not capitalised ok
RWD means what

*dhtml:
I no like am for that site, i go bomb am, walahi!!

u know i have read alot of your review and i see u like someone who can talk alot but cant deliver so if you wanna act like a 5 year old please stop talking, its review and problem are meant to be solved when its been pointed out.

logo is crappy
menu text are not capitalized, too small and somehow, boring.
bad english everywhere
blurry image of everything, did you draw that car yourself?
adsense on online store? you will trade your customers for half a cent

you need to take a peek at sites like amazon.com while fixing this.
goodluck

Webmasters with no sense of humour. . .I am sorry if you are offended.

First and foremost, I appreciate that it was done from the scratch,
But you see, some basic elements are missing.
That template has issues, like 15 different issues - someone summarized it and said bad design - very correct. I honestly don't know how to start correcting stuffs.

But my review rating is 1/10

And yes, I don't know anything - I am a baby developer that still sucks feeding bottle (3yrs old).

You want us to praise you for doing a rubbish design work? Sorry, we don't do that on this board.

Best thing is to bomb that design and rebuild it.

The whole thing isnt appealing, I can't be specific... everything just does not appeal to me. Maybe because lots of items are yet to be added to the store. All the best. Take the advice these people give you.

webdezzi: logo is crappy
menu text are not capitalized, too small and somehow, boring.
bad english everywhere
blurry image of everything, did you draw that car yourself?
adsense on online store? you will trade your customers for half a cent

you need to take a peek at sites like amazon.com while fixing this.
goodluck

He probably did.

The OP needs to learn html/css also. Using doctype more than once can still be overlooked.

<style type="text/css">
<!--
.style2 {font-style: italic}
div.c1 {text-align: left}
div.c2 {text-align: right}
span.c6 {background-color:-->
</style>

You expect that to really work?


<p><span><b>8</b> </span></p>
<p><span>item(s) available</span></p>

Why cant this be:
<p><span><b>8</b> </span><span>item(s) available</span></p>

Too many errors to correct. . .best is to rebuild.

*shakes my head and walks away*

sisqology: *shakes my head and walks away*

Is that your review? Oya review this site now now!

Hasn't this site been up for review several times?

Well, so many things going wrong at the same time is why it rubs people the wrong way.

1. Logo - Hire a designer or just write your website name in plain text.
2. Navigation - Your navigation items are small and not properly placed.
3. Currency - An online store should only be displaying 1 currency at a time, u can then put the other currency's equivalent elsewhere.
4. Graphics and Icons - There are lots of free images and icons on the web, do your research.
5. Typography - Please know when to use bold/strong in a design. You are currently overdoing it.

SCORE : You can do better. Go back to the drawing board.

guess i will have to work on the design thanks yo

bad design, bad concept
Reason: Bad font family, bad color choice, many programming errors.

Dont feel bad but pls redesign it after all am redesigning my beautify website(www.greenmousetech.com) to a new design here(www.greenmouseonline.com)

Its 40% completed but still love the new design more than the former.

skyhighweb: guess i will have to work on the design thanks yo

I can assist you a bit if you wont mind - reach me via my facebook link

skyhighweb: made some adjustment, its live now and running so what you think

www.wippypick.com

It looks uncompleted in terms of giving it a refined look. The basic is OK.

I think it's cool sha

@OP, I think you have listed this site before for review. If you can find that post, please check it again and check for my post where I listed a number of Ecommerce/online shop sites that you can get inspiration from. Go back to that post and look at those sites I listed and choose one and get visual inspiration. CSS can help you a lot and you wont be struggling this much with this if you took time out to study CSS to at least, intermediate level. Good luck.

^^^Aha, you too can see that his CSS needs a lot of brushing up.