Due to the eagerness of the thumbs,
illscripts and chocckid, have decided to settle
themselves with an official brawl to see who's ddoper
Leggo
HOUSE RULES
-16lines(8bars)
-no biting
-no feeding/flipping
-no recycling
-comments are welcomed
-first five credible votes from ddope netcee
count
-date: wednesday 19th, december 2012
-Both verses should be posted before 5pm wednesday 19th, december 2012.
VOTING CRITERIAS
-imagery 3points
-punchlines 2points
-metsphors 2points
-personals 3points
-multies 2points
-wordplay 2point
-flow 1point
-opener 1point
-closer 1point
-creativity 2point


SPILL IT or KILL IT.........

CHECK

dont forget the deadline..

U FEELIN-DDOPE?like ma lyrics are 'written with flames',u're no 'match' for me,u SILLY-BRO/Coz U dnt belong here,we d 'Dawgs'..while 'KID' is just a BILLY-GOAT/
I put d 'Brakes'on his 'Train of thoughts',cos m KILLIN-HOES wen SPITTIN-FLOWS/So 'KID' is sure for 'Fast food' anytime am FEELING-SLOW/
puns: DOGS

The Techs-will-spray,its Best-u-pay/...even the judges wud be 'takin notes'lyk 'roadside Beggars'wen I 'git rid' of dz 'CLOWN' like I 'Cancelled 'CIRCUS DISPLAY'/
coz i'l Split-ya-brain/n jam 'broken Glass' 4rm ur 'window'2 ur Dome so u feel-da-'pain'/U're BAD-WITH-AIM,So I giv u 'cardiac arrest'lyk I put ur HEART-IN-CHAIN/
Puns: PANE

if u stay 'Grounded'lyk 'Trees',I'Take u down' lyk 'Deforestation'/Cos u're 'soft' lyk 'Tissues' so no need to STRIKE-HARD/
cos u Spit-Wack/...'Lighter in ya hand' u wunt still 'Heat'-Track/so u surely Gon get a 'Touch' in the head' like a NIGHT-GUARD/
Puns: TORCH

With BIG-GUNS-AND-RESPECT,i'l leave or 'Hope' in a 'Forlon'/coz even with a 'Stun-Gun'...u wunt still Gat me 'Feelin d Sparks/so i'l Put THIS-PUNK-IN-DEATH-BED/
Coz wen ma Glocks-Spray/...I blast his Brain till it 'Stays Open' like 'Hall-ways'/...'KID' will surely lose 'Here' like his 'Head'is RINGWORM-INFESTED/
Puns : HAIR

Even if u 'Direct wiv Scissors'u Wunt still 'Cut' 'SCRIPTS'/Best biliv b4 bein a 'bitch' got u 'SLEEPIN'with 'FISH'...cos I knw U STILL-SUCK-SEMENN
U blow-pipes with low-lifes/..u just HIP-HOP FIGMENT/lyk'Bed time stories'watch me lay him down' as I send 'Shots' Ova'C' lyk CIROC-SHIPMENTS/
Puns: OVERSEA

no 'hardcore pporn flick' but am Quick to 'flOor-d-bitchh/so b4 I 'take U Down' lyk a 'Timber Contractor',..bera take ur 'phone' and 'CALL'-IT-QUITS/
evn if he was a 'Pizza Boy',he wunt still make 'Delivery',so No try,else i BUST-HIS-LIP/Cos ILL iz lyk a 'Birth control pill',m quick to STOP-THE-'KID'/

d dude b Steerin-nothin/cus he lacks TACTICS//so i'l alwas b 'Above d Pussyy' lyk Belly-button/he wudnt Still gimme a 'Black Eye' bein a 'Crayon ARTIST//
ur 'punches' sud be 'royal',cos its an 'HONOUR' to 'HIT ME'/so I will bust d dude til his 'Mug catch mur 'BREWS'dan sum 'Bartender DISHES/
Puns : BRUISE

Put a 'muzzle' in ya mouth,u'l Still-'Suck'/'carryin a lighter in yo Hand'doesnt mean u'll 'ILLUMINATE' Hip-hop/so i be BAKIN-ROUNDS-ON-D-HOOLIGAN/
Git ya Grill-bucked/or I 'Wring'ur neck til u hav a Couple of 'missed-calls/coz we wudnt hav seein 'KID' if not 'GRAZIN-GROUNDS-FOR-RUMINANTS'/
Puns: RING

DONE!

na wa o, I just brawled myself

Lmao

Guy is are good !!!

..even the judges wud be 'takin notes'lyk 'roadside Beggars'wen I 'git rid' of dz 'CLOWN' like I 'C
DONE!
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Dude! Wtf you bit my ffucking line man. U seriously need to stop biting lines.

You bit my line and sleakid can testify to this. Check the flow for rank thread u line biter

every ddope heads can fink alike,if u wanna start up a beef,just lemme know....smh 4 sum guys sha

lols.dis guy na fool o,I dnt even know if u exist on nairaland....u sud know I beef based on pure creativity...or are u too blind to notice the nameplay?...do u know how many ppl don use d 'DEFEAT' ish?..who get am?
or lines like 'I will get Rid of this 'PUNK'....no hairstyles'..../
cant some nigguhs just stop hatin?

nosa gold: ..even the judges wud be 'takin notes'lyk 'roadside Beggars'wen I 'git rid' of dz 'CLOWN' like I 'C
DONE!



Dude! Wtf you bit my ffucking line man. U seriously need to stop biting lines.

You bit my line and sleakid can testify to this. Check the flow for rank thread u line biter

nosa is right

sleakid: nosa is right

I am dissappointed mayne,wats wrong in finkin of such lines,its not even a hard line to fink of,....just admit u guys aint cool with this newbie climbin up the ladder xo fast...smh for nairaland guys mayne,na only them wan DDope...
out of the whole line,see wat u only picked out,yet u kip ranting like K.G kids...

truth is, it looks like this newbie is comin hard...so u guys wud definiteky wanna bring him down...but even if y'all 'HATES'...it will only strenghthen me...'shout to ma real niggas out there,....MIKUZ,ICE BERG,DARK SMOKE and others

Am never biased.. 4get say ♍e̶̲̥̅̊e̶̲̥̅̊ and mikuz D̶̲̥̅̊ε̲̣̣̣̥γ̲̣̣ throw shots at each other for flow for rank. Tiz normal. Outside cipher sshit ℓ̊ speak †ђξ truth mehn.
Tiz all for †ђξ fun

But if U̶̲̥̅̊ wanna take it personal with ♍e̶̲̥̅̊e̶̲̥̅̊, tiz something U̶̲̥̅̊ wuldnt wanna get down on k...

ts normal 4 some lines to be similar sumtimes mayne,if I know he had used a similar ish,i wudnt hav used it,finkk abt that...and Sleakid,I will neva beef u..even if u turn ur back against me

ILLScripts: ts normal 4 some lines to be similar sumtimes mayne,if I know he had used a similar ish,i wudnt hav used it,finkk abt that...and Sleakid,I will neva beef u..even if u turn ur back against me

word
One

and NOSA GOLD, i dnt wanna be ya enemy mayne...i've had enough haters already...so am cool with u bwo

I'm cool with you too bro but next time don't bite my lines word for word.

I said "I hope u niggers taking notes like roadside beggars"

ILLScripts: lols.dis guy na fool o,I dnt even know if u exist on nairaland....u sud know I beef based on pure creativity...or are u too blind to notice the nameplay?...do u know how many ppl don use d 'DEFEAT' ish?..who get am?
or lines like 'I will get Rid of this 'PUNK'....no hairstyles'..../
cant some nigguhs just stop hatin?

There's a clear difference between biting and recycling. When u bite a line word for word it clearly shows u bit it. If you don't want beef don't bleeping bite my lines dude all in the name of "thinking alike". Smh

if u say dat 'Roadside beggars line' belong to u,wat do u want ppl to fink mayne,if u re ma True nigga,u sudnt have made me feel like.......

It's all good bro. No p u are ma G

nosa gold: It's all good bro. No p u are ma G

thanks bwo,am happy now

ILLScripts,dnt mind HATERS,u're one dope nigguh mehn....u're SICK
I am ur fan,just that this ur fan can knock u out in a flash

[quote author=DeadScrollzz]ILLScripts,dnt mind HATERS,u're one dope nigguh mehn....u're SICK

THANKS mayne,I appreciate

didn't know this thread existed before o...was not informed. Formally requesting a rematch .

CHOCCKID,drop ur own verse nau...no need for rematch

DeadScrollzz: CHOCCKID,drop ur own verse nau...no need for rematch

i dont want him to say i had sooo much time to prepare my verse when i whoop the kid

but lemme post sha...

CHOCCKID,Just post ya Verse....and let ppl Vote

Haven't had time lately..but here goes..

See that verse you did kid ? Well I've seen 95%
of it/
. . Sad thing is he wasn't playing when he said it
was his best sh.it/You claiming that you're ill? Well, this verse is
a GET WELL letter / we all know your girl follows me blindly like stevie wonders page on twitter/

if this nigga's cold,,you could say i'm breaking the ice kinda like ice age/,
you're a household name, congrats! but
everyone has garbage.../never have you seen a slaying more wild cuz i'm a beast in this sh.it / i don't care if you're a millionaire but after this verse everyone will be saying poor script/

It’s barely competitive how ur repetitive... time
to fall / Ur lines are shopping centers.. if u’ve seen one
u’ve seen a mall(em all) /.
This battle?wasn't informed of this and I'm mad as sh.it, watch it unfurl on
your body
/I know you've got the 'will' to battle me, just make sure
your girl has a copy.

you're frustrated, maybe cause my rhyme
scheme is flawless/
sayin 'like' 86 times doesn't make ya verse chocked full of multis
/ i aint got many secrets/ I've put several men in
their 'coffins'
but after I murder script he'll be the only
skeleton in my closet'./

ya scope is narrow. And it's apparent son I'm tactically
broad
/ but you're the reason I'm do.pe.. cuz by comparison
I'm practically God/
i'm into 'grand theft auto', cause it's a relaxed game
/ I like to share, so I don't mind giving scripts the 'Max.
Payne' /

Go ahead n’ redo ya verse… bi.tch u ain’t got the balls
/ We both part of the design, you just represents
the flaws/
can't weather my hits, don't act like you could guy
/ the type to cry when i have the 'tidal' 'wave', his sorry
as.s goodbye/



I'm tempted to smack you the mess out, but was raised not to hit a bit.ch//
I'm 'constipated' reading your rhymes . . .
because I just don't give a sh.it//was gonna stop at 20 lines. mess it 30.. sh.it I'm good I
got plenty
/and if your reputation's on the line.. you prolly
shouldn't have dropped any.