darkenedrebel:

there were typographical errors in what i sent before.
check your email,i just sent the correct format. use that instead

Check again and confirm.

Ahaaaa! Oga krone i want in this cypher pls

kr0ne:

Yes, I've done it again. I highlighted those I feel are relevant, but if I still miss some lemme know.

Thanks bro ...you did good..even highlighted those i didn't highlight..thanks

highlight these those for me

satisfied the wise gods, executed gladyys & fulfilled all righteous

they will be found on the same bar..in the 3rd and 4th quatrains. Thanks

kr0ne:

Check again and confirm.

just help me spell isaac newton correctly

that's all

kr0ne:

Flow, Rhymes and Punchlines.

Plus enjoyability

kr0ne...sorry to disturb your mentions o

my first bar, third quatrain...i made a typo

it should read

I’ll make a total mess of them IF the randy farts connive

and not OF...thanks in advance o kind judge

Deadshotz:
Ahaaaa! Oga krone i want in this cypher pls

Bro, its for our tourney..we need to eliminate one of the five glads...you are two rounds late already

Smh
Next time, y'all should proofread your verses before sending them. If you wanna italicize or bold, input the codes before sending the msgs
All these stress are inhumane
If I was Krone, y'all would be begging for nothing

Too bad for me tho.... Okay fix me with one of ur guys pls... I want to have my first battle here

Hehe.

liricyst:


Bro, its for our tourney..we need to eliminate one of the five glads...you are two rounds late already

aiit bro

danbrowndmf:
wouldn't have seen this...my name is Danbrowndmf not danbrownmf....yea will be ready,which particular day?

would send my verse Saturday

kr0ne:
p When you're ready, send your verses to kroneanozie@yahoo.com I don't want that post-first-I-follow-later affair; it kills battle threads.
Cc: Danbrowndmf

yes sir..

darkenedrebel:


what is most especially darkrebel? didn't you see that he started it first?

besides, none of us complained.
this is a chatroom not FFR. just be patient till the tourney ends & I'll leave your dullsville kingdom completely. I don't find here appealing either. it's not very far.✘

I DIDNT WANTED TO PUT MY MOUTH IN THIS ISSUE BUT WHAT U SAID ATTRACTED ME THO!
OK. . .U SAID HE HAS DULLSVILLE KINGDOM, BUT LOOKING INTO IT I SAW U HAVING M0RE THAN 7 ACCOUNTS HERE!! SO WHY N0T DE-ACTIVATE AND LEAVE.

Supermiy:
would send my verse Saturday

same here...


Oga Kr0ne

danbrowndmf:
same here...


Oga Kr0ne

Sure, you know the email address, aye?

kr0ne:

Sure, you know the email address, aye?

Oga goan vote and wrap that shît up
It seems Laguna and Cooger are not coming today
3 votes are enough

kr0ne:
[b]Darkenedrebel's Verse:


sadistic sadomasochist..known for bruising the boobs/
stuffed cucumbers in vag1nas ...tagged it fruit of the womb /

Lol....

i actually was thinking about doing a punch with that cucumber in vag1na thing....chai..that babe rep go don die for her school. Cucumber girl

JigsawKillah:


Oga goan vote and wrap that shît up
It seems Laguna and Cooger are not coming today
3 votes are enough

Calm down....at least two more votes are needed

liricyst:


Calm down....at least two more votes are needed

Lemme return a favour bro
You don't have to quote me

Smh. It's a pity

liricyst:


Lol....

i actually was thinking about doing a punch with that cucumber in vag1na thing....chai..that babe rep go don die for her school. Cucumber girl

nice idea from darkrebel - but cucumber is a vegetable, not a fruit. rebel needs to start fine-tuning his bars so as not to become another modenine. he does come up with brilliant ideas but he can do better with the way he words some of his bars.

coogar:


nice idea from darkrebel - but cucumber is a vegetable, not a fruit. rebel needs to start fine-tuning his bars so as not to become another modenine. he does come up with brilliant ideas but he can do better with the way he words some of his bars.

true talk.....

ELYMAXiimus:

true talk.....

he could have used banana instead of cucumber.

coogar:

he could have used banana instead of cucumber.

lol. Oga weytin do my bars this time?

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ELYMAXiimus:

lol. Oga weytin do my bars this time?

not really structured well....
it had no direction, it was all over the place.

JigsawKillah:


Lemme return a favour bro
You don't have to quote me

sorry jare..geez i was pissed then. Person for work annoyed me big time

coogar:


nice idea from darkrebel - but cucumber is a vegetable, not a fruit. rebel needs to start fine-tuning his bars so as not to become another modenine. he does come up with brilliant ideas but he can do better with the way he words some of his bars.

Yea...true that. But still, i like reading bars crafted from things happening around. Its always nice. That said....he still had the best verse according to the judges so the rest of us need a lot more than fine tuning

liricyst:


Lol....

i actually was thinking about doing a punch with that cucumber in vag1na thing....chai..that babe rep go don die for her school. Cucumber girl

I also wanted to play roof/dylann before you did

coogar:


not really structured well....
it had no direction, it was all over the place.

wetin do my own verse

coogar:


not really structured well....
it had no direction, it was all over the place.

lwkm. Nawa for you o.... I know you were rushing to read all the verses. But if you gently read that verse, you will notice i was doing set up, punch ,,, set up, punch ,,, set up, punch,, till the end nd i think they all linked.