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Re: One Poem For The Road by firestar(f): 9:34pm On Jul 11, 2014
cool
Re: One Poem For The Road by princesa(f): 9:49pm On Jul 11, 2014
Lol firestar, feeling cool? Ur road this night must be great. smiley

Being a while I wrote a poem describing my road.

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Re: One Poem For The Road by firestar(f): 10:11pm On Jul 11, 2014
Yesso.

Here's one fer da road:

Sous le vent is a duet of
Glass shattering sounds
On earth....

Pokarekare Ana
A melody of an angel
Of angels...

And my very favourite
Oun yoo pee.
Mo ke~ ooooooo

Mo ke... cry


...

Right on the bridge
In the thick of it
Of traffic. ..

Music flows
...
One track
Food for the soul
Share amongst commuters

Eat it up friends,
For this one here
Is for the road.

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Re: One Poem For The Road by princesa(f): 10:34pm On Jul 11, 2014
Lol, you never cease to amaze me.

If I get ur poem right, you're stuck in traffic? Oh well, Music is the good stress reliever.

Wishing u guys a sweet drive homesmiley

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Re: One Poem For The Road by timpaker(m): 11:48am On Jul 14, 2014
BACK!!! (Haiku)

We refreshed and watched
On alien screen of cloud flare
As Nairaland beams...

What's nugatory?
Dreary internet which tides,
Green 'N' and blue 'f'...

Almost seven years...
Returns Lazarus of our screens -
We frolicked - Oh yikes!

Smile stains our faces,
Itching fingers run amok
On dusty keypads ...

Joyous-complaints nags...
Was yesterday without smiles?
Seun silver-tongued.

We refreshed and watched
Our fun memories obscured
Like our past starts now

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Re: One Poem For The Road by Jodekss(m): 9:45pm On Jul 14, 2014
timpaker: BACK!!! (Haiku)

We refreshed and watched
On alien screen of cloud flare
As Nairaland beams...

What's nugatory?
Dreary internet which tides,
Green 'N' and blue 'f'...

Almost seven years...
Returns Lazarus of our screens -
We frolicked - Oh yikes!

Smile stains our faces,
Itching fingers run amok
On dusty keypads ...

Joyous-complaints nags...
Was yesterday without smiles?
Seun silver-tongued.

We refreshed and watched
Our fun memories obscured
Like our past starts now

nice...
Re: One Poem For The Road by timpaker(m): 9:54pm On Jul 14, 2014
Jodekss: nice...
Thanks boss. How you dey nah? Longest time!
Re: One Poem For The Road by senrino(m): 10:40pm On Jul 14, 2014
***Bleeding soul*** .
Bleeding soul...
Steelious mine...
Grifted heart...
Rumpled emotions...
Waved affection...
Shattered...
Hope gone missing..
Scattered...
Bleeding soul i sing...
Heart achs...
Dripping in drops...
Slowly i take...
Becked over grown rops...
Pointed sorrows..
Glowing pains..
Bleeding souls in rows...
Bound in chains...

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Re: One Poem For The Road by Jodekss(m): 11:58pm On Jul 14, 2014
timpaker: Thanks boss. How you dey nah? Longest time!
ya, have been around sir...
Re: One Poem For The Road by AmiableJay(m): 2:00pm On Jul 20, 2014
Dame's Test -PART 2.
"The wait
was
minute
like her
apathy for
my
antics"

The re-call was necessary
Ignited by a friend's angry
Tone and shock at my strangeness
But my inner friend deserved the reprimand
Her whisper of doubtings perched on me
Stinging my truest desire with bites of bee
"Call her and know the truth" my other friend said
Flight of doubtings, then reality bled
Bled to death, made rebirth necessary
Her first failure tossed.
~
Life, a telephone science
Imbued with subtle cues; through our unknown path
The nights wrapped in foggy camouflage
I rolled on my lonely bed and grabbed my phone
"Hello dame" I called the older sis, the perfect broker
Surprise lit her voice and did blind my cool
"You are Sam? Ain't you?" She fired
A barrage of stutter coiled my tongue
"Anybody there?!"
"No this is not Sam"
"Then who?"
Silence blow-jobed my mouth
"There?" I was jolted
From my hidden world of silence
"Joe I am, Carol's friend"
"Sam I know, but who are you?"
"Joe now" I almost cried
"Ohhh the lover boy. Lemme hand her the phone"
The wait was minute like her apathy for my antics
~
It was a lifetime ago
But I still know the letterings of the past
Like the bare of my palms
Like the cypher of the future
Like her whisper of no!
~
"Did you miss me?" She asked
"I miss you and..." The connection saundered
"Helloooooo!"I screamed
Screams of 'ambulance' rent the telespace
Followed by a soft cracking sound of snapped bones
Now void with a strange solemness.
~
It started with a premonition I ignored
My ears twitched
But I foresook the prophetic clues
The dawn dropped with a strange yellow
That sembled the dull of the dusk
And birthed a morning that was first in annals
When the Sun arose the Northward
Then came the urge to call her
For retest,
And ascertain her real sentiments me toward.
~
"She's slipped into the Vegetative State" The doctor said
I clasped my arm around her coma-ed shoulders
And whispered a moan
A tear of agony escaped my eyes and scalded her glossy cheek
"She'll get through" I screamed
"But the fall was fatal" He re-fired
Like he was happy with her plight, or mine
"Carol will survive this and pass this test
She'll tell me she loves me like I do!"
"Yes I do love you Joe" Her weak voice broke out.
muselord.

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Re: One Poem For The Road by princesa(f): 5:59pm On Jul 20, 2014
Nice poem Jay
Re: One Poem For The Road by IfyChuky(m): 1:20pm On Jul 21, 2014
senrino: Would you ever get tired of me?
When shall this be?
That you would leave my lips..
Hand and fingers to lips..
I,Mariguana..
We kiss everyday long..
With passion,emotions all wrong...
I,Marihuana
As I caress the tip of your head..
But you give me head..
I,marijuana..
With my wet tongue I lick your side..
We bad all we do is hide..
So I hold you like,there is no tomorrow..
Morning,Night all my time you borrow..
I,marijuana..
Enlighten my thoughts..
Bold,you give me guts..
Should I call her my beloved?..
Mari-juana..

Nice piece..., Quite real.

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Re: One Poem For The Road by IfyChuky(m): 2:40pm On Jul 21, 2014
Dearest Badmussace, I xpended lil time digging tru u, afta cominq to accept d fact dat dos lines u spew in ur poetry works, cud one day, drive sane naive minds to the nearest sick bed, where they'd eventually be diagnosed of mental strain...

Guy, Abeg, afta readinq "PHOENIX", ALCOHOL and GRIEF, & Other works of urs @ur_Blog, which time would not let me mention here, I felt motivated lyk I had same chase as u ('m a Non-literature student sha)... But, U truli rock bro...

Beinq tagged "WOLE SOYINKA", to me, wud mean such a downgrade, to whom i saw beneath thy beinq.

I wished i had ur shoes 4lease, even if it means 4 just a night...,

I felt the urge to write ur way, 'tho I neva possibly wud match thine soles, bt Atleazt, I knw I'd be beta than I used to be.

#Thanks for the truth abt rhymes, which u unveiled, kox truli, my lines 2me, have all gone stale, bt 'm goaded to dare the different, I appreciate u, bro... #cheers...

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Re: One Poem For The Road by senrino(m): 4:08pm On Jul 21, 2014
IfyChuky:

Nice piece..., Quite real.

thanks bro

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Re: One Poem For The Road by AmiableJay(m): 6:40am On Jul 23, 2014
DEATH
I have a mortal fear
Fear that devours my dream
Blights the bliss of the gloam
Drowns sooth when lulling near
I have this proximate demon
Hovers with glee over my head
That satin be rolled me upon
At the darkest end of my world.
~
I have a great phobia
That trails heel-near, stealthily behind me
A hostile ally that won't let me be
I feel its wanton ire
Its errand, without a pay
Pat on the back or moiety
Of heaven's manse for they
That defy the beasty treaty.

Tried hard to conform to the metric rules.
muselord.

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Re: One Poem For The Road by firestar(f): 8:25am On Jul 23, 2014
AmiableJay: DEATH
I have a mortal fear
Fear that devours my dream
Blights the bliss of the gloam
Drowns sooth when lulling near
I have this proximate demon
Hovers with glee over my head
That satin be rolled me upon
At the darkest end of my world.
~
I have a great phobia
That trails heel-near, stealthily behind me
A hostile ally that won't let me be
I feel its wanton ire
Its errand, without a pay
Pat on the back or moiety
Of heaven's manse for they
That defy the beasty treaty.

Tried hard to conform to the metric rules.
muselord.


firestar: Death leaves one...
...breathless
Makes one...
...lifeless...


... ... ...T.T


The Pain...
The [size=14pt]Groaning...
[/size]

The Sighs.



Hold still till
When the dead will live....
...And when Death~~~


Yes.



When even Death
























... will die...

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Re: One Poem For The Road by AmiableJay(m): 12:11pm On Jul 26, 2014
Yeah the part 3 is here.....

THE LAST TEST
"I never meant it"She retracted
My eyes rolled like a circus
The sky was stripped of its cloud and secrets
The oceans of their depths
Man's tittle soul- hers was still a mystery
E'en when I was de-spelled of her charm
Mistaken I was
I have over-loved her
But she never reciprocated the feel
And she gored my Achilles' heel
With the truth that was late
The earth switched her domain
The stars went ballistic with the gravity of the misdeal
~
Globules of sweat ringed my forehead
It was a love-mare
The sad clues were masked in the dark covers of my snooze
Aided by the unflawed revelation of nightfall
The mtchews of a franker friend waxed my inner ears
Blocked the inner voice that boldened my passion
My keyed pal opened up a secret chasm
Troononing... It wailed omniously
"Hello" Her voice kissed my benumbed ears
Facilitated alacrity that I breached from the start
"All the years I've loved you
You stole away the air I breath since our eyes foured
I placed you on the sky
And you transgressed gravity
But my feelings are higher than thy..."
"And so...!" She cut in
~
"I had a bad dream that you never loved me"
"Shut up Joe. Just shut the mess up
I never loved you,.
That changed when I fell and went into the coma
I never loved you, infact hated you for your years of silence
I've always loved you yet unloved you
At the jiffy of my anger with-your tacitness!"
But I had chewed the arsenic crystals in my hand
For I had plegded to kill me if the dream came true
My life was soaked out of my skin
"Joe !" I heard, now in vague volumes
"Joe ! I love you. More than you do"
Was the temporal antidote I needed to salvage the suicide
~
The stretcher scurried me into the theatre
"Joe please don't die!"
The moment revealed my love weightier
I was dying for love that I miscalculated
"The poison has eaten his entrails
I'm sorry his ain't salvable" The doctor declared
My eyes spinned faster and ached my heart
"We'll get through ... Joe
You won't prove you love me more by dying for love!"
In a sleight, she swallowed the remaining ten of my killer sweets
And like a skillful assassin slew herself......

Visit my blog to feed your eyes on more poems
www.muselord.

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Re: One Poem For The Road by timpaker(m): 4:20pm On Aug 01, 2014
REALITY (Logic)

Reality
What a surprising thing
Its an awakened imaginary
That is locked from the life
Of what we want to what we get
Living in a dream

Reality
Such a shocking thing
Its the only movie
We get to be ourselves
And wished others not following our path
Are living in a dream

Reality
What a dreadful thing
It is an aborted desire
That chases dreams only
When life becomes
a nightmare

Reality
Is all a dream
In spite of everything

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Re: One Poem For The Road by Nobody: 10:01am On Aug 02, 2014
...and so it hit me yesterday.
Mike Tyson's punch to my jugular.
Red salty taste in my mouth
And a dagger in my heart.

Knees buckle wit the weight of it all
Eyes once bright
Hazy with oven hot tears
Alas...
I'm a man
And men don't cry I tell myself.

Be strong take heart.
We can still be friends.
She tells mi-self.
I wonder how that would work...


#friendzoned
Re: One Poem For The Road by timpaker(m): 9:16pm On Aug 02, 2014
The whiff of ruffled wind
Passes through my nostril
Smelling like clay
My door also felt
A small tap
Knock! Knock!!
Windows swinging...

Fear...

A windy ghost
Seeks a friend tonight
To muscle
On his goose pimple skin
My mind bristles...
My hand rolls itself
On the drab curtains

Lost..
In emphatic stare
To the darkness
That shone from the lantern

My imbroglios
To a shivering vigil
From grandpa's tales by moonlight
Where sleep absconds.

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Re: One Poem For The Road by AmiableJay(m): 4:24pm On Aug 03, 2014
Why Not Now?
If I without a sorry
Betray the art of the respire
With no rubric eye for bounteous years
Drifts into an eternal sleep
I've longed for coy epitaphs
Say not: He's cowardly!
If this impatient lariat in my hand
Looped for a mangling mission
Then rings my neck;
Droughts the stream of life
From reaching my brutal spirit
Gasp not at this boldness
For only myself can explain to you,
Perchance, at my half-death
Or trail this same path, our eyes to four
At the feet of the Jewly King
If I let out my last glance
And cast the next on a saner realm
Say not: He doesn't deserve my pitying
Shove your virtue and learn my failings
I was a brave being
E'en never-the-less, at this other phase
Or during the daring deed
Was I less a man
My hubris, my wisdom
My wisdom, my folly
Holy folly!
Sacred suicide
Subverting death's undated visiting
Better then, I to reverse the hosting
So then If we all needs must die
Why your why?
Why not now?
Re: One Poem For The Road by AmiableJay(m): 4:40pm On Aug 03, 2014
princesa: Nice poem Jay
Thanks dear kiss. I'm sorry I just saw this. wink
Re: One Poem For The Road by timpaker(m): 5:29pm On Aug 03, 2014
AmiableJay: Why Not Now?
If I without a sorry
Betray the art of the respire
With no rubric eye for bounteous years
Drifts into an eternal sleep
I've longed for coy epitaphs
Say not: He's cowardly!
If this impatient lariat in my hand
Looped for a mangling mission
Then rings my neck;
Droughts the stream of life
From reaching my brutal spirit
Gasp not at this boldness
For only myself can explain to you,
Perchance, at my half-death
Or trail this same path, our eyes to four
At the feet of the Jewly King
If I let out my last glance
And cast the next on a saner realm
Say not: He doesn't deserve my pitying
Shove your virtue and learn my failings
I was a brave being
E'en never-the-less, at this other phase
Or during the daring deed
Was I less a man
My hubris, my wisdom
My wisdom, my folly
Holy folly!
Sacred suicide
Subverting death's undated visiting
Better then, I to reverse the hosting
So then If we all needs must die
Why your why?
Why not now?
Nice one man. I'm awed, really.

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Re: One Poem For The Road by AmiableJay(m): 5:43pm On Aug 03, 2014
timpaker: Nice one man. I'm awed, really.
Thanks boss. We learn from one another.
Re: One Poem For The Road by etalker: 10:26am On Aug 04, 2014
timpaker: REALITY (Logic)

Reality
What a surprising thing
Its an awakened imaginary
That is locked from the life
Of what we want to what we get
Living in a dream

Reality
Such a shocking thing
Its the only movie
We get to be ourselves
And wished others not following our path
Are living in a dream

Reality
What a dreadful thing
It is an aborted desire
[size=14pt]That chases dreams only
When life becomes
a nightmare[/size]

Reality
Is all a dream
In spite of everything


You eh... This piece is nice, in fact can I copy it and paste on my wall?
Re: One Poem For The Road by Nobody: 6:32pm On Aug 05, 2014
"IMAGE OF HER"

by

Timothy Nkenu

She is an archangel
The ‘she’ version of Gabriel
Definitely the unknown descendant of Abel
Her beauty is almost unreal as though in a fable

Maybe,
‘Cause she flawless and it got me thinking like a premature baby
As Lately,
The thoughts of her overpower me greatly

Mind’s on fire
Soul’s taken higher
Heart’s melody sweeter than a choir’s
‘Cause when she talks, even wars gets a ceasefire

They say perfection don’t exist
That is a lie I must admit
To her, my soul is an addict
She is perfection and that is my verdict

If you like it, please support by liking my page:

http://www.facebook.com/PenSideOfTim

Thanks.

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Re: One Poem For The Road by timpaker(m): 2:19pm On Aug 15, 2014
etalker:


You eh... This piece is nice, in fact can I copy it and paste on my wall?
If you wish
Re: One Poem For The Road by tolutweety(m): 3:04pm On Aug 15, 2014
Got my support n my like !!

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Re: One Poem For The Road by timpaker(m): 3:18pm On Aug 15, 2014
tolutweety: Got my support n my like !!

Chairman, How far na? How's weekend gonna be?
Re: One Poem For The Road by tolutweety(m): 5:17pm On Aug 15, 2014
timpaker: Chairman, How far na? How's weekend gonna be?

I gentle oo,brother !!
Thank God its friday ....no beta way to spend wkend than on NL na grin wink

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Re: One Poem For The Road by timpaker(m): 2:34pm On Aug 21, 2014
Dear Sonneteer (Rhyme)

How do I write a good sonnet?
When I don't consider myself a poet
Cuz I'm not skilled in juggling words that rhymes
Or think out tunes that perfectly chimes

I've heard that its not hard afterall,
That I just have to have the gall
To thread on its fourteen lines
Scheming my feelings through its pines

Well, I know that my pen shall one day rain
And that the river of poetry flows in my vein
Then would my words would roll on Adam's tongue
As a hymn on their lips like a sing-sung

For I know that one day
These words would pay
The true work of my art
Of that phrase that rhymes in my heart

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Re: One Poem For The Road by AmiableJay(m): 6:59pm On Aug 21, 2014
timpaker: Dear Sonneteer (Rhyme)

How do I write a good sonnet?
When I don't consider myself a poet
Cuz I'm not skilled in juggling words that rhymes
Or think out tunes that perfectly chimes

I've heard that its not hard afterall,
That I just have to have the gall
To thread on its fourteen lines
Scheming my feelings through its pines

Well, I know that my pen shall one day rain
And that the river of poetry flows in my vein
Then would my words would roll on Adam's tongue
As a hymn on their lips like a sing-sung

For I know that one day
These words would pay
The true work of my art
Of that phrase that rhymes in my heart

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