Hi Guyz, I need you to help me read through and tell me what you fell about my poem.
thanks



Home and Away
With love, strength and faith
I had kept my promise
Within my father’s land
Raising her flag so high
Serving with heart and mind
Conscious of her history
Creating love from her wars
Making unity in her diversity
Considering my father’s pain
Which must never be in vain
I have crossed the seas
Going with me a nation
Letting out her heritage
Through culture and pride
Sharing it to all with love and smile
In many, I come first
Through honesty and hard work
Smelling of her aura
When my heart beats her anthem

I might have leave,
But I will never be gone
To a place so far
Of a journey so long
Without my home in my heart.
In me you see my father’s land
In me you see a new generation
In me you see good people of a great nation

Home and Away
I am a Nigerian.


written by: Omotayo Suleman (fankasibe)