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Re: I AM. . . by Emylexray(m): 5:00pm On May 17, 2013 |
Nice! let me try and write on your topic "i am" "i am a definition of the word priceless" "in me lies precious virtues adorned like a glossy statue" "i am a quintessence of a resplendent gold" "i am, the world's fairest greatest" "in my handsomeness maidens are stuck like a bee attracted by a scented chrysanthenum flower" "i am clothed in splendour and bathed in gracfulness" aye! I AM THE BEST OF MY KIND! 1 Like |
Re: I AM. . . by DICKtator: 5:02pm On May 17, 2013 |
Ishilove: I am firewhat are you? Choose one!!! okay you are an................. [size=18pt]OGBANJE!!!!!!!!!!!!!![/size] |
Re: I AM. . . by Theflint1(m): 5:09pm On May 17, 2013 |
Ishilove: no, a story book The others take the thrice damned souls of those who put this on front page 1 Like |
Re: I AM. . . by Nobody: 5:10pm On May 17, 2013 |
Ishilove: I am fire This is a poem worthy of front page? Mtchew. 1 Like |
Re: I AM. . . by Lilimax(f): 5:25pm On May 17, 2013 |
Ishilove: I am fireNice one!Thumb up sis |
Re: I AM. . . by Nobody: 5:25pm On May 17, 2013 |
ebamma: I am ebammanice...lol 1 Like |
Re: I AM. . . by Lilimax(f): 5:25pm On May 17, 2013 |
Logicboy03:Write your own make we see Bad belle |
Re: I AM. . . by Nobody: 5:29pm On May 17, 2013 |
Lilimax: Write your own make we see lol Extraterrestrial Love Even though we are galaxies apart I feel your presence Like a touch from an alternate universe Separated by time But connected from heart to heart Our love is carried over light-years Like a recurring dream in cryo-sleep Our love is beyond skin deep Like an alien virus That controls the body Our physical chemistry is beyond evolution Like interspecies copulation We are a chimera of emotions A mixture of pleasure and wonder Across alien worlds and dimensions 2 Likes |
Re: I AM. . . by Nobody: 6:06pm On May 17, 2013 |
Nice piece... I'm gonna pm you, let's talk business but before that I wanna make sure I don't find link to this piece from other sources on google |
Re: I AM. . . by Datsme: 6:20pm On May 17, 2013 |
pekelepekele: I am is the name of our Heavenly father (GOD) . U are being rude to have used that as a poem. edit ur post immediately before (HE) get angryif u wr asked; who r u? Please hw wil u respond? 1 Like |
Re: I AM. . . by Ishilove: 7:16pm On May 17, 2013 |
Logicboy03: The flint:Up your hole with a ten-foot pole. . . |
Re: I AM. . . by Ishilove: 7:18pm On May 17, 2013 |
Datsme:I bow |
Re: I AM. . . by Nobody: 7:19pm On May 17, 2013 |
@Ishilove.I love ur poem. Pls NLanders how do I upload mine.lots of friends say they love my writings and poems.would love to share it with u guyz |
Re: I AM. . . by ciphoenix: 7:29pm On May 17, 2013 |
Ranks007: And this is what happens when they send a thread to the front page. Those who weren't supposed to see it in the first place get to comment. 1 Like |
Re: I AM. . . by nuwell(m): 7:35pm On May 17, 2013 |
Ishilove: Tut, tut. This wont do Did not your dear mama say, In her kitchen yesterday, Never fight anyone in May Not one rage you may display |
Re: I AM. . . by nuwell(m): 7:38pm On May 17, 2013 |
lorretta u: @Ishilove.I love ur poem. Go to the Literature/Writing section and create a new topic or thread |
Re: I AM. . . by lakeside4love(m): 7:45pm On May 17, 2013 |
Ishilove u 4much..Nice Piece.. |
Re: I AM. . . by HARDDON: 7:58pm On May 17, 2013 |
Ishilove: I am fire Cold as ice Twice as nice Melting mountains Likened unto the sea I toss i ebb like water waves earth is мч name World's weight ön mah neck Still strong i stand I dance to many beats Beats of raging quill Still Tranquil chill Мч ways weird Мч days smeared Yet still on wings i lead Like the drone i take on thrones I aм but i clone 2 Likes |
Re: I AM. . . by VanTee20(m): 7:58pm On May 17, 2013 |
Double post |
Re: I AM. . . by VanTee20(m): 7:58pm On May 17, 2013 |
Wow Ishi this piece is nice. I envy you o, Anytime I try writing a poem like this, I always end up writing rap lyrics. |
Re: I AM. . . by baggy4luv(m): 8:26pm On May 17, 2013 |
aw this crappy puuuuemm take kiss front page.while coming up as a poet never wrote this watery feaces.farts and moon walk outa the thread 1 Like |
Re: I AM. . . by Nobody: 8:28pm On May 17, 2013 |
baggy4luv: aw this crappy puuuuemm take kiss front page.while coming up as a poet never wrote this watery feaces.farts and moon walk outa the thread Thank you! This poem is really not that good.... 1 Like |
Re: I AM. . . by Ishilove: 8:39pm On May 17, 2013 |
VanTee20: Wow Ishi this piece is nice. I envy you o, Anytime I try writing a poem like this, I always end up writing rap lyrics.R-Rythymically A-Applied P-Poetry So keep writing 1 Like |
Re: I AM. . . by Ishilove: 8:40pm On May 17, 2013 |
Logicboy03:See as bad bell dey wound you |
Re: I AM. . . by Ishilove: 8:43pm On May 17, 2013 |
baggy4luv: aw this crappy puuuuemm take kiss front page.while coming up as a poet never wrote this watery feaces.farts and moon walk outa the threadThank you for your comment. Now use a bike To take a hike And never return!! |
Re: I AM. . . by PAGAN9JA(m): 8:45pm On May 17, 2013 |
Logicboy03: now thats a poem worthy of Logic! |
Re: I AM. . . by Nobody: 8:47pm On May 17, 2013 |
Logicboy03: PAGAN 9JA: Ishilove, do you see? If you had accepted me into your life, I might have improved your literary skills |
Re: I AM. . . by PAGAN9JA(m): 8:49pm On May 17, 2013 |
Logicboy03: check out my poem: An Ode To Priam Over and under, the heavy mist ran asunder As I look upon the field of sorrow For ne'er hath I conceived such a yawning blunder Upon which wouldst strike the two-pronged fork The fork of death. I remember the day, as if it were of yester When I hath redeemed that which I hath abandoned Nay, I hath not killed, but left to perish as a final gesture Paris! you who cast the shadow upon tis land The shadow of death. The Oracle hath spoke, if only I had heard The jewel hath been stolen, if only it weren't by my son Now face I must, the wrath of the Achaead My people must suffer, at the bane of their Prince The Prince of death. From Earthly to Godly, the horn didst resound Goddess of Strife! Goddess of Discord! Thou hast triumphed oer every battleground The sides hath been chosen, the die hath been cast The die of death. Love, war and light, these forces by our side Pray tell me o mighty prophecy, what hast thou in store for me? As I gazed above at the Pleiades, with ill-begat pride I think of days, whilst I lay upon the bed of roses The bed of death. The Achaeans hath arrived, in defiance of Scamander 'Revenge we seek!' they cry, in a wild chorus The death knell resoundeth through every ear My men march forward with the banner held high The banner of death. Drip, Drip, the drops of wine, that sweet divine elixir gushed forth in torrents, from the bowels of men Ah! the wails of anguish from the widows of war That resound through every nook of the city of Troy The city of death. Hector! Brave warrior, son of your father I weep as I watch thy noble frame lick the dust Old fool I were, forfeit I did, my kingdom to the tempter The Cerebrus hath been unleashed to retreive the Queen The Queen of death. 1 Like |
Re: I AM. . . by Nobody: 8:52pm On May 17, 2013 |
PAGAN 9JA: Nice poem.... Its gppd that we have a common interest in mythology (or what you call pagan religion). I liked the part about cerebrus.....a true beast of death |
Re: I AM. . . by PAGAN9JA(m): 8:55pm On May 17, 2013 |
Logicboy03: Thnx. I noticed you used the Chimera! We have to admit though, the Ancient Greeks (different from todays mixed Greeks), they truly took religion and mythology to a new level. Its sad it all had to end so abruptly though. . |
Re: I AM. . . by HARDDON: 8:58pm On May 17, 2013 |
baggy4luv: aw this crappy puuuuemm take kiss front page.while coming up as a poet never wrote this watery feaces.farts and moon walk outa the thread You must be really that gud now huh? Oh well, How about you do us a lil flow ? Here let's help Ʊ out Use "daze" and lace this space with a lil spill Bet you cudnt ενεη get your tots to roll Learn to encourage and not to pull others down. @op, you did sleek. How about you do us another? This time, with a lil soul poured into it? |
Re: I AM. . . by Nobody: 8:59pm On May 17, 2013 |
PAGAN 9JA: lol.....the ancient greeks were geniuses. We still use their stories till today. I did notice that many pagan religions share similar stories....take for instance the queen of the coast or sea.....mermaids....mammy water.....all shared in different ways by different cultures around the world Every pagan religion had a trickster god |
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