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My 16 Bars For "hybrid-x" by makavele: 1:03am On May 05, 2008
makavele is back on da scenario~making hits
like two brothas at a game of mario~gambling's sweet
there's alot on my mind~am going to let it go
hit me wit the music~ and let me start to flow
da industry aint easy as you people think
am spitting out lines to make ladies wink
jumpin in and dashing out~like TITANIC, you're sure to sink
am tarzan and wit a length of rope i could swing
motherfcukerz said my name shouldn't be up here
but nairaland's worst nightmare is right here
i've got lyrics with canines that could tear
your bone marrows, wats all over u,? its called F-E-A-R
i'm climbing higher up nairaland's rap tree
its going to sweep you all like katrina's wind
you niggaz 'bout to hit the graves like PAC versus BIG
it's a touch of difference when am handling the M-I-C


Love y'all!
Re: My 16 Bars For "hybrid-x" by Shaz(f): 3:40pm On May 05, 2008


Nice to see your staying active on this rap section, so i might as well help out in a few things.

Noonebody has been born with the rap skills and all, it takes things to make things work. Usually on other rap forums, you get people to analyse your verses - also known as 'feed'. No one does that here which is a big shame, thats why the talents here keep dwindling. Anyhoo, I'll try 'feeding' this one. .



makavele is back on da scenario~making hits
like two brothas at a game of mario~gambling's sweet

the rhymes are there, but whaddu mean 'back' when you never were here?
and what does the 'game of mario' and 'gambling' have to do with 'making hits'??


there's alot on my mind~am going to let it go
hit me wit the music~ and let me start to flow

just a filler. . nothing spectacular

da industry aint easy as you people think
am spitting out lines to make ladies wink

not a strong line either

jumpin in and dashing out~like TITANIC, you're sure to sink
am tarzan and wit a length of rope i could swing

the first line really din't have a meaning, sorry
have you ever tried multies?? eg.

like titanic, you are sure~to~sink
i'm leaving pricks smashed with no drugs to cure~this~sick


something like that. . it gives your verses more reps than single rhymes


motherfcukerz said my name shouldn't be up here
but nairaland's worst nightmare is right here

why rhyme with the same word, 'here'??

i've got lyrics with canines that could tear
your bone marrows, wats all over u,? its called F-E-A-R

when you separate words like 'F-E-A-R', then it's meant to be pronounced as single letters not a word.
and if that's what you intended, then, those things don't rhyme


i'm climbing higher up nairaland's rap tree
its going to sweep you all like katrina's wind

nice sim - the katrina wind thing- but still you haven't worded that bar well

you niggaz 'bout to hit the graves like PAC versus BIG
it's a touch of difference when am handling the M-I-C

the end?? that was not even close to a good closer. . i doubt Hybrid would even take this for a 1 Star rating, not to talk of two

anyways, that's just ma 2 cents.
Re: My 16 Bars For "hybrid-x" by FLOWSHOW: 4:09pm On May 05, 2008
nice analysis shaz, can u pls analyse my own verse. its right here under

@MARKOLINI AKA MACARONI. HERE IS UR FINAL BURIAL!

i aint trying to win this battle ~ because am already declared the very best
am just here to show everyone~ that your the wackest among the rest
i come from naija land ~ where flowshow is blazin hot
u got a draw and u think u stinkin hot~ we all know u simply nut (not)(0)
even with your bullet proof vest on~my slugz will shatter your fcukin chest off
face first ~ stab your breast~cut your throat~ to make your lungs rest
multis and metaphors no other rapper can flip those
you is a fake 'drug' cus you lack 'dose
flowshow is the winner~ macaroni is the loser
i drop more beats than fruity loops producers
my flowshows come in convoys ~like punches delivered by oliver mccall
like dry lands on wet rivers ~ macaroni's punchlines 4ever lie fallow
u couldnt spit ill ~ because chocolate is the only bar u swallow
your rhymes are shallow~cus u grew horn like bufallos
my punchlines severe~ makes u catch cold ~ to make ya body shiver
flowshow is the soul reaver ~ you is the gay mister~ the queen of sheba
throwin punchlines for u is harder than nigerians flashin text messages
asking of u is like asking bout a boxer~ who never knew ali existed
your style might be fly ~ but am an eagle ~ your a fcuckin penguin
stick ya head into your mothers pussi ~ send u back to your origin
they call me flowshow the cobra~ but i think i am the stingin viper
markolini rhymes are nasty~ like uncleaned poops from his momma diaper
they said am the illest~ but i think i surpassed that
cut u to bits ~zip you up like mp3s in ipods
squeeze ya neck till u give up~turn your lungs to gizzards
because me beatin you ~ is easier than chinese eating lizards**
I want hiphop heads to record the time and date markolini turned to macaroni
with one single line i will have him shaking hands with makavelli, u wonder why?
dam nur u ekam lliw that enil a tog I esuaceb <<<-read this backwards***
Re: My 16 Bars For "hybrid-x" by Shaz(f): 4:18pm On May 05, 2008
I would, but prolly not on this thread, cuz itz meant for Makavele
Re: My 16 Bars For "hybrid-x" by makavele: 7:44pm On May 05, 2008
i wanna thank shaz for the rap analysis
what more could hold us together~if not symbiosis
its great to know~ there's someone to always count on
practice makes perfect, so this rap battle would be won
no one else deserves that lyrical highness but makavele
am about to go platinum, bout' to hit the TV
am trying to change the way the game is played
i aint a mutha bleeper~ aint like a LovePeddler dats' always getting laid
june 23 brought about the birth of a hero
i'm like genie, its time for some mirror mirror
i think it time to hit ma bed, clock says nine-fifty nine
will talk later~been long i saw alexpissu~
tell him i said hiiiiiiiiiiiiii

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