Paayne vs Bars !

Lets give the noobs some opportunity to show their lyrical powress.
Bars aka John Reaper has been here for some time now. So we thought it wise to get him on a battle ring with Paayne, whose venomous flows, is been pilling up on FFR. so lets go ninjas!
[/b]DONT FORGET TO BRING THOSE BARS!!![b]

Criteria
Opener - 1 point
Rhymes - 2 points
Similes/ Metaphors - 2 points
Punchlines - 3 points
Flow - 1 point
Personals - 2 points
Wordplays - 2 points
Closer - 1 point
Rules
■ 12 Bars
■ Deadline is 7pm, Sunday 20th December, 2015.
■ Verses should be posted by both battlers on or
not later than the said deadline time.
■ No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or
recycling.
■ No complaining about votes.
■ A no show will attract a ban.
■ No unnecessary comments
■ No smearing comments about any bar or biting
accusations without proof.
■ Whatever you feel is wrong with a bar or verse
- please put it in your vote. Vote and state what
you have found wrong.
■ If there's anything you need to say in defence
of your verse please save them for after voting's
over.
■ No argument with established vets or voters.,
■ Battlers should not interject between votes and
voters should just vote and leave it like that.
■ Only vets and regular section posters are
allowed to vote.
No breaking of aforementioned rules, bans will be
handed to offenders vigorously
Goodluck

Follows

Bars in......paaynee com let's drop man!!!

FREESTYLE DISS AT PAAYNEE


LEGGO......



U brought slug/
to hurt . .gob ?/but with your hasty much pop/
we still found ur shit irrelivant in ffr cuplated with sour drop/either on freestyle kicks or on punch cups/evn your silly lines shows u not though/
bitch. . Aint here for much talks/watch me burried ur head nd put the rest body on long corpse/see my punch is gnaw. .so whenever you heard me coming? You just run/cus immediately u just pause or get caught/is the holy day u end crossed/so here bars will be putting paynee ''in sac'' like ''jose murinho'' in short words/


paynee got a shapless structure that aint worth trippling/evn girls do see the fool. And start runing/. . .wait should i start by exclapecting out ur bones gimmick/how ur look view so silly/. . .okay lemme brief it/
you got a skeletal structure. . ''BIG HEAD, Tin leg'' like ''pole Mask reading/

is best this witch confess/. . .am always the head, yes my shit come first/while his script complex/so flat nd usless lik is snitch mum chest/. .fact is? I dnt value that/nd u living this bout, with no too much strees/cus na the same reason appen wey. . . PAAYNEE PAPA take divorce is bitch mum off set/

truith is. .my punch is golgi/. . .nd it kills so bloody/paynne is another victim my shit did murderer/with hits in roughly/that makes him hook on ''sudden death'' . .shit like that ''KOGI STATE GOVI/


My spits gon be bold/. .to bribe this bitch off his. own/. .the truth gon be told/. .on how I'll have dogs feast on his bones/. .u think I'll script all. these dope/. .?
for u to sit on the throne/. .u're 'clearly. lieing'. .for this tailor would 'tear his linen'. .if hes. tryna. . .
'Reap what he's sown'/. . !!!?
(rip what hes sewn)

Yea. .
I'll live a stitch on his throat/. .for forming still!
I rape his mum. .
While hes repping the gays/. .what i Tell is the fact/. .this nerdy is wack/. .
I'll have him 'kept in a bag '/. . .his famz? They'll be struck with fear,the moment the try. . .
'Bailing' the cat/. .!!!(Belling the cat)

Now

hes pictured me nailing his mum. .for real/. .and he knows Clearly hes lost duh win/. .'I'll bring guns and knives' so its best 'the bitch runs and hide'. . .or
He'll 'develop cold feet here'. . Even before i start raining insults on him/










LORD BARS!!!!!!

.

Hops In. . . . DeaDLine says 7pm, not sunday morning when person dey inside church. . . . . Anyway its just a str8 Up nd discernable verse. . No particular keywords
P.T.O

Qu1ck Shots @ Bars. . .

Son, Your career bouta be killed wif cLaps/ From raging gats/ call yo biish or yo ageing dad/ tell em how yhu pissed a savvy gLad/ For You, there z no escaping Plan/ You're a crazy Stan/ a lazy Fan/ nd yo shaky hands/ Nigg why yo perspirating glands/ circulating fast?/ . . . . . . . . . . .
Bars, Yo Neva played smart, buh ah play rough/ you come here, you tawk tough, ah blow your brains off/ ah see d cold sweats got yhu so blue, and you aint smurf/ Dis aint Yo Lame turf/ So why dropping shiit, to claim shots/ You clearLy OutLined/ Outversed, nd outshined/ most of all, You r outta yo mind/ . . . . .
Ah Drops Bars, The kid feels payne/ Son, this 'pro fit' , cos ma exercise gained/ ma state of mind reads 'insane', ah enslave Dames/ ah cut his head off, Bars can barely touch d great mane/
Im a bad ass Lyrical decepticon/ wif a Clear cape on/ I'm duh wheather dat educate storms/ Ah tame guns, nd engage dunce/ chastise biitches nd rape Nuns/ so bars Bleep yo nd Yo Lame Puns/ .. ... ... ... .... .... .
Yo stale stunts/ Don't scare a great monk/ Yhu talk shit. . You bound to see a great dunk/ silly stray cunt/ Ma c4(s) quickly beating his eardrums/ Bleep Yo Inventions/ ah aim ma guns at yo tendons/ Bust shots till yo breath'z gone/ . ... . .. ... .. .
I'm supernaturally blessed, see how ah slay d kid wif one slap/ ah drop bars, he falls back/ ah mean, who duh Bleep does that?/ when ah rap, ma guns clap/ His verse are boring nd too dull/ ah beat duh chimp up wif hard punches nd good puns/ Ah beat him to stupor/ Good Lord!/ and when ah envisage his future/ computer be Like ''error, duh kid bouta have no future''/ Plus his Last hours were even rated as too short/ no one to even show duh dude Love/
#Damn. . . .

What's this? SMH!

Judges. . . Over to You oo

mikuz:
What's this? SMH!

CharLaay! Are you here to vote or something?

smh, Open for votes

Your votes ninjas:
Emaprince
Alexpissu
Ibime
Reyginius
Airmark
Coogar
Giyazz
Glacierz
Jason21
Illverbz
Darkenedrebel
Guykhena
Limerick
Kr0ne
Ksslib
CaptAwesome
CaptainCids
Captainflash
Elymaxiimus
Funlord
YoungDaNaval
Obainojazz
Jreyez
Dj5naira
Jigsawkillah
Sinizia
Geoxpress
Heywhizzy
Grayline
Gottoboy
Sosiqdude
Liricyst
Obesemf
Sinizia
Supermiy
Dklef
Lh0od
Heywhizzy
Iceskidd
llaykorn
Danbrowndmf
Supermiy
MuhdG and other regulars. . .

Oboi, see judges wey dis bros tag!!
Na d whole NairaLand be dis na

Dklef:
Your votes ninjas:
Emaprince
Alexpissu
Ibime
Reyginius
Airmark
Coogar
Giyazz
Glacierz
Jason21
Illverbz
Darkenedrebel
Guykhena
Limerick
Kr0ne
Ksslib
CaptAwesome
CaptainCids
Captainflash
Elymaxiimus
Funlord
YoungDaNaval
Obainojazz
Jreyez
Dj5naira
Jigsawkillah
Sinizia
Geoxpress
Heywhizzy
Grayline
Gottoboy
Sosiqdude
Liricyst
Obesemf
Sinizia
Supermiy
Dklef
Lh0od
Heywhizzy
Iceskidd
llaykorn
Danbrowndmf
Supermiy
MuhdG and other regulars. . .

Oboi, see judges wey dis bros tag!!
Na d whole NairaLand be dis na

MVGT - Dklef

hehe

Paayne:
Oboi, see judges wey dis bros tag!!
Na d whole NairaLand be dis naOboi, see judges wey dis bros tag!!
Na d whole NairaLand be dis na

You still see mouth dey talk? After those dumb lines wey you type? Smh

MVG-ba.rs

.

Dklef:
You still see mouth dey talk? After those dumb lines wey you type? Smh

MVG-ba.rs

soooo?? Uuuugh??
I should start crying??
Mehn. . . Comments reserved tho!


First to 5 votes wins!
And ah don't see any votes yet.

Good or Bad, ma Battle still gotta be rated. . .

Dklef, I made a mistake. I'm sorry.

MVGT - Bars.

Paayne, you strike me as a very lazy rapper. (no offience.)

1-0. . . Moh Votes. . . 'Lazy rapper'. . . Lol, Every man with him opinion sha

You guys need to work on your rhymes.
MVGT: Bars

Bars:
bitch. . Aint here for much talks/watch me burried ur head nd put the rest body on long corpse/see my punch is gnaw. .so whenever you heard me coming? You just run/cus immediately u just pause or get caught/is the holy day u end crossed/so here bars will be putting paynee ''in sac'' like ''jose murinho'' in short words/


paynee got a shapless structure that aint worth trippling/evn girls do see the fool. And start runing/. . .wait should i start by exclapecting out ur bones gimmick/how ur look view so silly/

is best this witch confess/. . .am always the head, yes my shit come first/while his script complex/so flat nd usless lik is snitch mum chest/. .fact is? I dnt value that/nd u living this bout, with no too much strees/cus na the same reason appen wey. . . PAAYNEE PAPA take divorce is bitch mum off set/

truith is. .my punch is golgi/. . .nd it kills so bloody/paynne is another victim my shit did murderer/with hits in roughly/that makes him hook on ''sudden death'' . .shit like that ''KOGI STATE GOVI/


u think I'll script all. these dope/. .?
for u to sit on the throne/. .u're 'clearly. lieing'. .for this tailor would 'tear his linen'. .if hes. tryna. . .
'Reap what he's sown'/. . !!!?
(rip what hes sewn)

Now

hes pictured me nailing his mum. .for real/. .and he knows Clearly hes lost duh win/. .'I'll bring guns and knives' so its best 'the bitch runs and hide'. . .or
He'll 'develop cold feet here'. . Even before i start raining insults on him/










LORD BARS!!!!!!

.

. .. . .. . .. .. ..
Lol, so these are duh kind of verses y'aL Like to read??

More than half of him verse wey ah don quote now, wey no even follow, yet him dey lead me with 2 votes. . . . . Buhahahahahahahaha, Lmao sha
Let d votes keep hoppin in.

And pls, ah need detailed votes, not just MVGTees, why should dere be criterias, nd yet no one is following d protocol.

Lol. . . Dis forum sef ehn!

Paayne:


. .. . .. . .. .. ..
Lol, so these are duh kind of verses y'aL Like to read??

More than half of him verse wey ah don quote now, wey no even follow, yet him dey lead me with 2 votes. . . . . Buhahahahahahahaha, Lmao sha
Let d votes keep hoppin in.

And pls, ah need detailed votes, not just MVGTees, why should dere be criterias, nd yet no one is following d protocol.

Lol. . . Dis forum sef ehn!

Both of your verses were below par. Just that Bars brought some jabs and weak rhymes. You only brought weak rhymes and no jabs, hence my verdict.

more votes please
Ibime
Sinizia
Guykhena
Airmark and co

Mvgt : Bars

Following

GIYAZZ:
Both of your verses were below par. Just that Bars brought some jabs and weak rhymes. You only brought weak rhymes and no jabs, hence my verdict.

I brought dat bekus I knw am battling noob....


Yal knw my worth tho...!!!!

Guykhena:
What was paayne doing? Smh. Bars wasn't all that great either,but I'll take his over paayne's bs.

MVGT-Bars

Lols...!!!!I knw

Lol. Make me sef vote, so MVGT Bars. . .
THREAD CLOSED.

Bars got this tho


But this is a weak battle

mikuz wicked tho...lmao