jezuzboi:

Well done!

Thanks Jezu.

glo3nity:
A SONG OF WELL
I dream
Of a better day
In the face of,
My horror day
Strangle me...with your mighty fist
Still I stand, stiff, and sound
Should I break
Who shalt defeat you
This is my trail
A cross to bear
Should I die
Know you die along
Their's no escape!
In this furious cage
Sing of a better day
A song of well
Sniff the air
Exhale your heat
Like an e'gle, spread; Fly away
Never return until soars are gone
And grief success send off
Sing ye faithful soul
A song of well.

Nice piece,
Can I get a theme/topic from you pls

L0nestar:



Nice piece,
Can I get a theme/topic from you pls

Sure you can!

TOPIC: A SIGHT OF NIGHT!

Jezu love your work especially the rhyming sheme.

Good job!

glo3nity:

Sure you can!
TOPIC: A SIGHT OF NIGHT!

When darkness takes once sunny skies
Decked with stars and a crescent moon
The shy creature exits the cocoon
Lured by the crickets' cries

As the lone owl hoots
And the lucky star shoots
Shadows slither beneath night's veil
Mortal hearts in dream waters sail

All is calm and serene
At the sight of night
When all colours are lost
And darkness triumphs

L0nestar:


When darkness takes once sunny skies
Decked with stars and a crescent moon
The shy creature exits the cocoon
Lured by the crickets' cries

As the lone owl hoots
And the lucky star shoots
Shadows slither beneath night's veil
Mortal hearts in dream waters sail

All is calm and serene
At the sight of night
When all colours are lost
And darkness triumphs

Nice.
Do't tell me you've been faking all along, and making me seem like a fool.

glo3nity:

Nice.
Do't tell me you've been faking all along, and making me seem like a fool.

Not at all ma'am, I needed the inspiration and you came to my rescue
Thank you