Give me the smile i long 2 see
No matter what the situation might be
Even if the condition sting like Bee
It will be you &i
Even when gossips said i'll flee
I knew you'll never Agree
Even when the darkness makes u eerie
It has been you & i
In d wind i'll be d Lee
Cover you like coat made from Fleece
Then you smile at me in Glee
Be warm for you & i
All the problem that make u Dizzy
I will make sure i Bury
So we can make Merry
Let it be you & i
You smell so sweet as Jasmine
I'll show you the world in my Ferry
Don't bother abt d Money
We'll make it you & i
And when its time to Marry
The soldier will put on their Busby
Then i'll kiss the lips dat taste lik Berry
And forever you & i.........
tomiblack

any poet in d house
its my 1st poem
pls i need constructive criticism to improve