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Love Poem - All About You by StephenP(m): 11:12pm On Jun 26, 2008
I have spent countless nights awake
In deep debate with my thoughts
Just to sort out the way I feel about you

I have spent days in a maze
Lost in a daze, swimming in a river of blurred nonfiction
Sinking into sweet illusions about you

I want you to know that these words
From these lips
Speak these rhymes
All and only about you

It’s about waking up to you
Your arms safely snug around my chest
If I am a gift, you are the lace that is placed to perfect me

It’s about holding your hand
Reading your palms with the tips of my finger
Like a map, I take a journey into your history
Locked like a mystery, indented and intertwined in your fingerprint
My only link to your past
So I hold you

It’s about kissing your lips
Soft and full
Tongues touch
I savor the taste of you
Like a warm night under the moon as the cool breeze flows, and the grass tickles my toes
Like the sweetest dessert melting into heavenly moans of delight
I kiss you

It’s about your eyes
Sugary brown
Feels like I’m gazing into eternity
A woman’s soul opened
I see fire in your eyes
They keep me warm
I see water in your eyes
They quench my thirst
I see the future in your eyes
They give me hope
So I gaze on into you

It’s about how much I want you
Need you
Crave you
Deserve you
Adore you

This unquenched desire
This untamed affection
Is a constant reminder that every word written
From every pen I have held
And every paper laid before me
And every heart felt spilt into an instrument-less song
Leaks emotions belonging
Absolutely
Beyond any doubt
To no one else but you

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Re: Love Poem - All About You by Nobody: 11:21pm On Jun 26, 2008
sweetheart u need a girfriend urgently
Re: Love Poem - All About You by StephenP(m): 11:30pm On Jun 26, 2008
LOL!! Why do you think so?
Re: Love Poem - All About You by Nobody: 11:44pm On Jun 26, 2008
have alot of emotional energy and you obviously need someone to pour it on instead of burnin it all on Nairaland. i appreciate it though
Re: Love Poem - All About You by Nobody: 11:46pm On Jun 26, 2008
girlfriend needed, pls apply within. grin
Re: Love Poem - All About You by StephenP(m): 11:52pm On Jun 26, 2008
Rawdeal:

have alot of emotional energy and you obviously need someone to pour it on instead of burnin it all on Nairaland. i appreciate it though

I wonder how this poem makes me look single.

davidylan:

girlfriend needed, please apply within. grin

hahahaha
Re: Love Poem - All About You by Nobody: 11:55pm On Jun 26, 2008
if ur not single, u wouldn't be sending this ti nairaland or is dat d name of ur girlfriend shocked
Re: Love Poem - All About You by Nobody: 11:58pm On Jun 26, 2008
Rawdeal:

if your not single, u wouldn't be sending this ti nairaland or is that d name of your girlfriend shocked

you're giving dear old stephenp a raw deal here. I'm sure he has sent all these to his girlfriend first.
Isnt it steve?
Re: Love Poem - All About You by StephenP(m): 12:03am On Jun 27, 2008
davidylan:

you're giving dear old stephenp a raw deal here. I'm sure he has sent all these to his girlfriend first.
Isnt it steve?

I know! After I wrote this, I sent it to my 561,342 girlfriends and counting.
Re: Love Poem - All About You by onyinye2(f): 12:05am On Jun 27, 2008
StephenP:

I know! After I wrote this, I sent it to my 561,342 girlfriends and counting.

Ahhh mayne!! i was about to give you a good complement about this poem. now i know it is all a bunch of jive.
Re: Love Poem - All About You by StephenP(m): 12:26am On Jun 27, 2008
onyinye2:

Ahhh mayne!! i was about to give you a good complement about this poem. now i know it is all a bunch of jive.

grin C'mon now, a brother's got to tell the truth.
Re: Love Poem - All About You by onyinye2(f): 12:40am On Jun 27, 2008
StephenP:

grin C'mon now, a brother's got to tell the truth.

typically male response.
Re: Love Poem - All About You by Mesmerize(f): 12:54am On Jun 27, 2008
stephen
this is hot!! mehn, i suggest you copyright/ publish your poems.
just too good wink
ok, where's the application?
the girlfriend application grin jk
but since my eyes are dark brown. . embarassed
Re: Love Poem - All About You by Nobody: 12:57am On Jun 27, 2008
Stephen lock up. that number is too much for a normal person. Was it u who applied for more girlfriends?
Re: Love Poem - All About You by StephenP(m): 1:04am On Jun 27, 2008
Rawdeal:

Stephen lock up. that number is too much for a normal person. Was it u who applied for more girlfriends?

LOL I'm a stunna

Mesmerize:

stephen
this is hot!! mehn, i suggest you copyright/ publish your poems.
just too good wink
ok, where's the application?
the girlfriend application grin jk
but since my eyes are dark brown. . embarassed

Thanks by the way, the application is in my apartment and up in my bedroom.
Re: Love Poem - All About You by Nobody: 1:11am On Jun 27, 2008
Okay stephen, do d craziest thing ever. i dare you to drop your mobile number and address on this post right now
Re: Love Poem - All About You by Nobody: 1:15am On Jun 27, 2008
rawdeal's caught in stevo's net. wink good job bro.
Re: Love Poem - All About You by StephenP(m): 1:52am On Jun 27, 2008
Rawdeal:

Okay stephen, do d craziest thing ever. i dare you to drop your mobile number and address on this post right now

Address:
234 Yahoo-Yahoo St. Apt. 419
NY, NY 10014

Tel: 718-419-1419

grin
Re: Love Poem - All About You by Nobody: 1:59am On Jun 27, 2008
It’s about waking up to you
Your arms safely snug around my chest
If I am a gift, you are the lace that is placed to perfect me


Oh my, grin . That makes me breathless [s]control yourself he's too young, too young[/s] grin cheesy
Re: Love Poem - All About You by StephenP(m): 2:03am On Jun 27, 2008
stillwater:


Oh my, grin . That makes me breathless [s]control yourself he's too young, too young[/s] grin cheesy

cheesy
Re: Love Poem - All About You by Mesmerize(f): 2:12am On Jun 27, 2008
StephenP:

Thanks by the way, the application is in my apartment and up in my bedroom.
ashewo, I bet it is!
and am sure you'll be a gentleman enough to go and get it for me wink
Re: Love Poem - All About You by StephenP(m): 2:15am On Jun 27, 2008
Mesmerize:

ashewo, I bet it is!
and am sure you'll be a gentleman enough to go and get it for me wink

LOL!! No Ma'am, you'd have to go get it yourself.
Re: Love Poem - All About You by Mesmerize(f): 2:16am On Jun 27, 2008
StephenP:

LOL!! No Ma'am, you'd have to go get it yourself.
make me! grin
Re: Love Poem - All About You by StephenP(m): 2:17am On Jun 27, 2008
Mesmerize:

make me! grin

Quit frontin' I know you will. It's somewhere on my bed.
Re: Love Poem - All About You by Mesmerize(f): 2:26am On Jun 27, 2008
StephenP:

Quit frontin' I know you will. It's somewhere on my bed.
Hmmmm. .
The last time someone told me that, he got punched in the balls wink
Re: Love Poem - All About You by StephenP(m): 2:38am On Jun 27, 2008
Thanks for the info I'll make sure that I wear my metal boxers.
Re: Love Poem - All About You by Mesmerize(f): 2:42am On Jun 27, 2008
StephenP:

Thanks for the info I'll make sure that I wear my metal boxers.
hmmm. .
stephen, watch it oh
you're going to the danger zone grin
Re: Love Poem - All About You by StephenP(m): 2:48am On Jun 27, 2008
I'm not afraid.
Re: Love Poem - All About You by Mesmerize(f): 3:03am On Jun 27, 2008
You should be.
very very afraid.
Re: Love Poem - All About You by StephenP(m): 5:12am On Jun 27, 2008
lol. . . not tryna be corny or anything but show me what you got.
Re: Love Poem - All About You by Mesmerize(f): 5:26am On Jun 27, 2008
StephenP:

lol. . . not trying to be corny or anything but show me what you got.
See this yeye boy!
Am telling you to be afraid, you're here asking for danger! shocked shocked
You dnt fear?

Ok, give me your hands! grin
Re: Love Poem - All About You by StephenP(m): 5:55am On Jun 27, 2008
What are you gon' do with them?

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