Can I call you amazing?
Does that word put into perspective the effect you have on me?
Does it capture the nurture you provide for my soul?
I breathe in everything encompassing you because you intrigue me
And if curiosity kills this cat,
Don’t be worried, I’ve got nine lives.
Death never sounded so sweet
And
Love calls upon the need for defeat.
So,
You have won, and now I’m yours to keep.
You give me endless smiles and nocturnal behaviors,
And sleepless nights when you're in my arms.
I fight the lullabies of time,
Refusing to give away these moments with you to the night,
Cause there’s no way to rewind.
And I admit you’ve captivated me with your character,
In you, I see the masterpiece of a woman,
Remarkable, wonderful, magnificent,
True.
Can I call you amazing?
It is a rare finding of a woman like you.
Who gives not to be given.
Loves not to be loved,
A woman of good nature,
A woman of good heart,
Amazing.

Ohhhhhh Ohhh, that was. . oh gosh, it was more than Amazing

StephenP:

Can I call you amazing?.

StephenP:

And if curiosity kills this cat,
Don’t be worried, I’ve got nine lives.
Death never sounded so sweet

awww, I loved this line. . so so . .
And I guess you're a big lion aka Cougar?


Stephen, seriously, I loved this one. . lawwwwd!!
"Thou shall not lead me into temptation"

Call me joking o

Thanks love. You sweetie are amazing.

StephenP:

Thanks love. You sweetie[b] are amazing.[/b]

I know, I know. . No need to deny it. . lol jk

LMAO! I'll let that slide.

StephenP:

LMAO! I'll let that slide.

If you dnt let it slide nko?
We both know the true jare. .

that was really romantic Stephen. i was moved.

onyinye2:

that was really romantic Stephen. i was moved.

Thanks Miss.

OMG!! That was NICE. I like. Please, could we have some more Stephen

syren:

OMG!! That was NICE. I like. Please, could we have some more Stephen

his are okay but mine are even better

mmmhhh now i'm curious

syren:

OMG!! That was NICE. I like.    Please, could we have some more Stephen 

Thanks.

If you want to read more, check out my previous poems

https://www.nairaland.com/nigeria/topic-145952.0.html

https://www.nairaland.com/nigeria/topic-143258.0.html

https://www.nairaland.com/nigeria/topic-144486.0.html

I don't know when I'll put new ones up but trust me I'm writing.

Can I call you amazing? Anyday babe

Does that word put into perspective the effect you have on me?Hell yes

Does it capture the nurture you provide for my soul?F**k yes

I breathe in everything encompassing you because you intrigue me
And if curiosity kills this cat,

Don’t be worried, I’ve got nine lives.i aint, i have 9 too

Love calls upon the need for defeat.yes it does 

You have won, and now I’m yours to keep. , did u hear that memse??

You give me endless smiles and nocturnal behaviors,aww thanks, so do you 

And sleepless nights when you're in my arms.

Refusing to give away these moments with you to the night,
Cause there’s no way to rewind.
And I admit you’ve captivated me with your character,
In you, I see the masterpiece of a woman,
Remarkable, wonderful, magnificent,
True.Very true baby 

Can I call you amazing?Any effing time again

It is a rare finding of a woman like you.Dont i know it 

Who gives not to be given.
Loves not to be loved,
A woman of good nature,
A woman of good heart,
Amazing.


Beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@tope2000

TRULY HILARIOUS!!! yeah this was a nice poem. but i like mines better no offense intended Stephen

Tope, LOL thanks. Your replies were funny but nice.

@tope
That was hilarious.

@ stephen
I prefer your other poems. This particular one lacked something, I just can't place it yet

onyinye2:

@tope2000

TRULY HILARIOUS!!! yeah this was a nice poem. but i like mines better no offense intended Stephen

funny me2

StephenP:

Tope, LOL thanks. Your replies were funny but nice.

u welcome darl , _{but seriously are u just 21} ^{i pray not}

stillwater:

@tope
That was hilarious.

me n steve as got something something going but shhhhhh don't tell memse

tope2000:


u welcome darl , _{but seriously are u just 21} ^{i pray not}

I'm turning 22 in 2 months.

stillwater:


@ stephen
I prefer your other poems. This particular one lacked something, I just can't place it yet

You couldn't find deep words?

Right on point. I couldn't find anything that took me aback.

StephenP:

I'm turning 22 in 2 months.

You couldn't find deep words?

ok, i have found the solution. i will change my date of birth, dat shud do the trick

stillwater:

Right on point. I couldn't find anything that took me aback.

I'll try to work on that on my next poem.

tope2000:

ok, i have found the solution. i will change my date of birth, that should do the trick

LMAO!!