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Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by Nobody: 5:59am On Nov 21, 2013
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Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by chycoroxie(f): 6:29am On Nov 21, 2013
Roy roy,I can't get enough of d royver fever
Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by Royver(m): 6:59am On Nov 21, 2013
Bonjour mes amies. Hope u all had a lovely night. smiley
Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by Nobody: 7:32am On Nov 21, 2013
WOW!!!!!!!
This story is......is....AMAZING?nah,i need a bigger word...ITS...GREAT....SPLENDID...WOW!good job Royver #Chuksthestronger#

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Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by Matthewbriggs(m): 7:37am On Nov 21, 2013
This story is worth turning into a movie or even a TV series. Nice job Royver.
Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by Nimen(m): 7:56am On Nov 21, 2013
Really!!! It's just awesome!!!
Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by Nuges11(m): 8:03am On Nov 21, 2013
He said updates won't be as 'often' as earlier for some weeks. If you call your previous updates 'often', I wonder what 'not-so-often' updates would be like.

Nice one bro. This is definitely worth waiting for. If you like take three years, you'll come back and meet me here. (Although I'd advice you not to take so long...I have a gun...and my fingers get itchy when I'm nervous...and I get nervous when I'm kept waitinggrin)

@princessa...hit mecheesy.

Morning y'allsmiley
Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by felipemadero(m): 8:20am On Nov 21, 2013
Good piece Roy,I sense the story is about to begin...take ur tym with the updates as well as ur official business so as give us Pure class& Quality.

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Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by felipemadero(m): 8:25am On Nov 21, 2013
I see you Mr Roy,Goodmorning.
Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by chrome008(m): 9:13am On Nov 21, 2013
Mr roy............dis ur story ehen..........
Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by beckytunde(f): 10:09am On Nov 21, 2013
hmmmm so interesting,hope someone is grabbing something, challenges tend to stay long only because we allow dem thr fear.God has gvn unto us all our weapon of warfare.hmmmm nice one.

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Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by OMA4U(m): 10:48am On Nov 21, 2013
Roy Roy Roy bobo o Rooyver
Roy Roy Roy bobo o Rooyver.

I had known you can do it since I had read your Haunted Road.
Bad Nigga, come update make boys see tory read nah!

@Madam Ishilove, you're just as good as ........
Nothing shall I compare to thee.
It seems you read from another planet where you see all. You're a great critic.
May I meet you, Ma'am?

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Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by Psychedelia(m): 11:00am On Nov 21, 2013
Following...

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Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by Ishilove: 11:04am On Nov 21, 2013
OMA4U: Roy Roy Roy bobo o Rooyver
Roy Roy Roy bobo o Rooyver.

I had known you can do it since I had read your Haunted Road.
Bad Nigga, come update make boys see tory read nah!

@Madam Ishilove, you're just as good as ........
Nothing shall I compare to thee.
It seems you read from another planet where you see all. You're a great critic.
May I meet you, Ma'am?
Thanks dear. You've met me already na smiley. I agree with you that Roy is a hugely talented fellow, and I've learnt a few things in this story.
Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by Winnie1950(f): 11:20am On Nov 21, 2013
Wow wow wow!!! Just read the first post and just had to comment. This is beautiful, absolutely marvelous. Gosh am short of words. I don't know why i did not notice this amazing story earlier. Btw am still on page 0 so wait for me abeg.
Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by Ishilove: 11:42am On Nov 21, 2013
Hmm, Roy, nice update, though I feel it is a bit rushed.

The trip through Chuk's mind could have done with more elaboration on details. They are flying up through what we assume to be his mind. The mind is very powerful thing, more powerful than we can even fathom, so I expect to feel the power when I read about it. I wanna feel chills, I wanna picture it as Chuks and the stronger fly through the mind of one so powerful. Were there poutpourri of shadows, or was it just one long loop of blurry light?

This story is a supernatural thriller/fantasy. A trip through the mind ought to be psychedelic, an exercise in exercising your imagination.

I didn't feel it and I couldn't picture that trip, Roy. However, I find it intriguing that The Stronger is ageing before Chuks eyes. It means he is finally aligning with that part of him that has laid unused for years now, and by doing so, he is becoming stronger. Nice technique.

Great job Roy, keep it up grin

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Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by MightyFortress: 12:15pm On Nov 21, 2013
Sumbody help me wit a link to Royver's Haunted Road. Cant find it. This guy is a genius!!!

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Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by Yanenwen(f): 1:22pm On Nov 21, 2013
Meklex: royver na my twin bro,,, I was the one that started the story but left it with royver to finish. Erm erm.....
lol...
Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by Yanenwen(f): 1:23pm On Nov 21, 2013
Ishilove:
Easy there...

grin
Haha! Jes sayinq mi mind o
Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by Yanenwen(f): 2:02pm On Nov 21, 2013
Royver: ..

hello Yanenwen, I see you oh smiley Ca we talk?

Lol, yea...
Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by Yanenwen(f): 2:12pm On Nov 21, 2013
Matthew briggs: This story is worth turning into a movie or even a TV series. Nice job Royver.
Seconded

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Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by Wealthyone: 6:29pm On Nov 21, 2013
Ishilove: Hmm, Roy, nice update, though I feel it is a bit rushed.

The trip through Chuk's mind could have done with more elaboration on details. They are flying up through what we assume to be his mind. The mind is very powerful thing, more powerful than we can even fathom, so I expect to feel the power when I read about it. I wanna feel chills, I wanna picture it as Chuks and the stronger fly through the mind of one so powerful. Were there poutpourri of shadows, or was it just one long loop of blurry light?

This story is a supernatural thriller/fantasy. A trip through the mind ought to be psychedelic, an exercise is exercising your imagination.

I didn't feel it and I couldn't picture that trip, Roy. However, I find it intriguing that The Stronger is ageing before Chuks eyes. It means he is finally aligning with that part of him that has laid unused for years now, and by doing so, he is becoming stronger. Nice technique.

Great job Roy, keep it up grin

Seconded @ishilove, u are a good critic and observer. I tot I was d only one that couldn't picture d journey as I read it. RoyRoy, once again, kudos to U for writing dis. Although, I keep salivating for d next chapter/ episode but pls, don't rush so dat d Quality of ur work will be unrivalled.

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Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by oselenkejoor: 11:22pm On Nov 21, 2013
This episode reminds me of Casting Crowns' "Voice of truth". Nice bro, I love the religious undertone. We are all supernatural, whether we know it or not. You are an exceptional writer. Writers like you reminds me that I have not begun at all. Bravo!
Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by otagbuegede: 11:43pm On Nov 21, 2013
nice story bro. more updates pls
Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by Justwordsbyayo: 1:15am On Nov 22, 2013
Hmmmmm........ Now this is deep creativity. WOW
Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by Justwordsbyayo: 2:31am On Nov 22, 2013
That state of insanity got me cracking ... Meen the imagination is really sick.... *claps*
Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by OMA4U(m): 8:44am On Nov 22, 2013
Mighty Fortress: Sumbody help me wit a link to Royver's Haunted Road. Cant find it. This guy is a genius!!!

Check out for the short story competition, Round 1.
Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by Justwordsbyayo: 9:01am On Nov 22, 2013
I feel like the last person on this planet to attend this show but I'm happy I didn't miss out.... So Roy my imagination is ranting for more. Help my situation before I go psycho. BIG UPS BRO its efffing brilliant
Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by ProfessorD(m): 9:35am On Nov 22, 2013
I Love This.... But please leave that hidden chapter story and update this one quickly
Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by Kslib(m): 11:19am On Nov 22, 2013
Nuges11: Wow...I see a lot has been going on in my absence. *takes back row seat*

I see Princessa chilling in front. Ishilove, I can see you're really enjoying your bowl of palm wine......I hail una o. Kslib I sight you too, and e'erbody.


I sight you too my guy!! When your tori dey lauch nah? Better lauch am sharp sharp oo!!
Had to catch-up with many updates but i enjoyed reading them in bulk!!
@roy, one word 'Brilliant'...
Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by johnwizey: 12:06pm On Nov 22, 2013
Great story
Re: I See Things Others Do Not See... by christejames(m): 7:14pm On Nov 22, 2013
Roy u are just awesome, the way u align ur story is second to none. @ishilove, waow ma'am u are too much it seems u hv a third eye cos u are one powerful critic, keep it up!!!

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