Welcome, Guest: Register On Nairaland / LOGIN! / Trending / Recent / NewStats: 3,150,652 members, 7,809,471 topics. Date: Friday, 26 April 2024 at 10:09 AM |
Nairaland Forum / Entertainment / Literature / Poems For Review / Anguish (731 Views)
A Soul In Anguish...a Poem (2) (3) (4)
Anguish by Justiceenams(m): 9:16pm On Nov 20, 2013 |
ENDOMETRIOSIS. From a dark ball i fell saw light nd scream of fear they laughed as i cry then,i did'nt know why in time i did all i must thinking joy would stay long On my bed i bleed nd scream deep pain i felt within wonderin wat has caused dis answers not forthcoming a conclusion i draw within i must av been stabbed in my dream. A tale,none i could tell within i kept my fear the pain so much to bear with thought of bleeding to death aloud i whisper in one ear trying to share my fear Aloud she spoke of my plight again,they laughed as i cried this time,i did know why a curse they say on all my kind this is different,i said shy only if they knew it wasnt a lie my treasure grew old with me for pain a companion to me even,a greater pain cling to pleasure i pray years fly so i embrace my cursefree days for my pain last only as long as i bleed. 1 Like |
Re: Anguish by Tinkybabe(f): 1:35pm On Dec 02, 2013 |
This is so lovely..did you write this after Nike Oshinowo's revelation?and coming from a male,I'm really impressed. I didn't understand some lines though "they laughed as i cry" "Aloud she spoke of my plight" Who/what is she and they..I'm guessing it's a figure of speech but what does she/they represent? |
Re: Anguish by Justiceenams(m): 3:34pm On Dec 02, 2013 |
@Tinkybabe yes her revelatn inspired me.Abt d line THEY LAUGHED AS I CRY,wen a child comes out 4rm the mums womb(dark ball)the 1st thing she does is cry,at that sametime every1 around is happy nd laughing. . ALOUD SHE SPOKE OF MY PLIGHT,wen a girl sees her period for the 1st time,she tells someone(she)about it nd that person will say it outloud like ''my girl has become a woman'' Though i was dramatic there i hope you understand it now,read it again nd you would enjoy it more.you can access more of my work from my have''FROM THE DEEP OF IMAGINATION'' |
Re: Anguish by Tinkybabe(f): 3:25am On Dec 03, 2013 |
^^Alright,I get it now |
Re: Anguish by Justiceenams(m): 10:27am On Mar 10, 2015 |
The month of March is Endometriosis sensitization month oh I feel so proud of myself. |
(1) (Reply)
Ibi-tunde(eclipse Of The Joy) / Dripping Blood And Fleshy Flesh / The Sins Of A Madman
(Go Up)
Sections: politics (1) business autos (1) jobs (1) career education (1) romance computers phones travel sports fashion health religion celebs tv-movies music-radio literature webmasters programming techmarket Links: (1) (2) (3) (4) (5) (6) (7) (8) (9) (10) Nairaland - Copyright © 2005 - 2024 Oluwaseun Osewa. All rights reserved. See How To Advertise. 18 |