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Please encourage a new writer. I'm not that good. So ur criticism and help is needed
Kida

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OmolodMilkman93: subscribing,... Hvent updated ur Diary for like forever

sowie buh my phone was stolen and also i wasnt getting any encouragement and i felt my story was not gewd also

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Yeah babe am here behind u, make i go grab my fellowers come.

Abeg try spacing and avoid abbreviations to the lowest minimum in ur writeups.

Thumbs up dearie

The rock5555: Yeah babe am here behind u, make i go grab my fellowers come.

Abeg try spacing and avoid abbreviations to the lowest minimum in ur writeups.

Thumbs up dearie

thanks Dearie

The rock5555: Yeah babe am here behind u, make i go grab my fellowers come.

Abeg try spacing and avoid abbreviations to the lowest minimum in ur writeups.

Thumbs up dearie

Thanks a million bunches Dearie

I dey fellow u jawee....meaning of dat ثثهط؟

Sorry network is not letting me post my update

I paid a visit here...
As rock said avoid abbreviations at all cost and den do proofread b4 posting

The rock5555: Bros i go wound u oo, beta go continue ur secetary job, b4 u come back here

*sits down pateintly to await update* una good morning oo

[color=Red]*runs 4-40 outta the thread straight into my office on the rocks thread*[/color]


[color=Blue]GOODMORNING YA'ALL[/color]

As de rock no give me work na and per-say na him direct me kum here＿…nice write-up kida,which work u go give me now ooo

no update stil beta com n update o

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Abeg im suscribing jawe *comes into thread with mat,raw indomie and irish cream*

Pink-swiri:
Abeg im suscribing jawe *comes into thread with mat,raw indomie and irish cream*

Pink swiri if dat combination purge you ehn, no render our toilets useless ooh

Tritte: As de rock no give me work na and per-say na him direct me kum here＿…nice write-up kida,which work u go give me now ooo

You fit work for bar na?

Berra come drop another update b4 i typee finish ooo

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Chai!!!i hope i'm nt too late

Foxy_Flow:

vex dey kil oo

Knew about this story thru The Rock. Hope am not too late sha?
To make corrections later. Nice work.

I left the my class of the assembly ground passed through the old classrooms, as I walked through them. I heard a voice that said "hey you come here!" as I turned to look at who called me, I got a very hot slap that sent me crashing down

. A very thin girl walked up to me(she was so thin I feared that if it got too windy outside she might be blown away by it)trust me I won't say that to here face.
"see if I warn you again about Franklyn ehn anything wey you take eye see take am o"she said pulling her own ears with her bony fingers.
" Babe allow me to organize this girl today" any ugly girl said holding my head up
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"Oh my God! Save me today" I said with my heads bowed and eyes closed in prayer.
then the tall huge girl walked towards me arranging a blow, I squeezed my eyes tighter then I heard the sound of a thud on the ground.
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. I taught my spirit had left my body and then I opened my eyes expecting to see my self at the pearly gates but I saw the fat ugly short girl on the ground with blood oozing out of her nose, she looked unconscious. They all ran away and so did I not knowing an eye had seen me

Nyc update but kind of short seems u're using fone to upload ryt?
Btw the 1st line try modifying

kingphilip: Nyc update but kind of short seems u're using fone to upload ryt?
Btw the 1st line try modifying

Thank you
Kida ^Tm

*kida-berry#:
Thank you
Kida ^Tm

uwc so wen is da nxt update