edosioo:

OUCH. that really hurts ! killing 2 birds with one stone. hannibal better beware, the sickest is now very very ill

Hannibal beware?? I can't wait!!!
Where's Shaz to do her analysis?

Ho-Hum!!! With this "Gimme little time to drop ma linez", i reckon Niggaz are puttin boredom on here like sauce on pie. . . . . . . . . . . .Wat the F?!!!

respect shaz and brid, yeah it was a great battle, hannibal, big ups.may best netcee win.

Shaz""" what i'm I suppose to do? confused

@Elite netcees


sorry for the delay . . . . .but damn . . .non of u'all would wish to be shaz's shoes for real . . . . it aint easy analyzing this sick lines . . . . but never the less its going down . . . results coming up real soon aight . . . .

Peeps are so relcutant to drop so guys, I'm so sorry you didn't get a 1-year waiting period for you to drop your verses.

[center]GANJAMIND vs MAILMALC
Ganjamind[/center]

lyrically I'm like anthrax to d MAIL i leave d MAC(malc) DEAD
someone beta tell this cat this aint AMERICAN IDOL I'm too corrosive for lite RAP HEADS
I need to understand the 'forced' wordplay in the first line. Other than that, that bar is a cool opener.

xplosive like JAR HEAD on d mic when i WRAP(rap) cats i bury like MUMMY
even if d mail was SPALDIN he aint got d BALLZ to make it through d loop of this TOURNIE
wow. .ok, now this is it, practically, nice wordplays.

prayin for a missed match probably whinnin y he got paired wit d mind
too late to decline when u meet d wrath of ganja its ur fate that is defined
Hmmn . . cool

spit words that SLICE cats like KIMBO malc never bled no one xcept his period blud he shed(pussy!!!)
he d type of fella that wants a HOLIDAY in war but i Bleep JAY n put this broad to BED
lol. . cool

lyrical euthanasia I'm givin ya i get rid of whack netcees like bad habbits
look dawg ur style is gabbage wit more knock offs dan d chinese market
Well dope.

my lyrics re like crack to rap addicts spit d good isht rap fiends gotta blast it
look BOY I'm BAD as BIG on d mic don't need hype to SHINE my flows r classic
Alliterations. . but too much hype

lyrically drastic this cat so whack even if he was an open show i bet a seat he barely sold
d mail gotta b kiddin me thinkin he darth vader in d star wars episode
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL. . wow

hommie this is star warz d rap thread Bleep d jedi we red eye up in this murder bleeper
word to brid hope u got a circus thread for clowns like this sucker,
Nice closer, G

[center]Mailmalc[/center]

Upgradin ur MEMORY won't SAVE u d favour 'because u took the wrong drastic measures
*LOL, i POP* lyrical trigger to R.I.P this minor nigga like one, two STATIC MAJORs
Didn't really rhyme, plus you can't say 'LOL', it's an action, not a word. . apart from that, itz a kul opener

your whole slugs like that inscription on 'petrol trucks' are 'highly Inflammable'
so when u MATCH me i throw STICKS , ignite it to consume u because my skill's Incredible
multis are a bit forced. . and you gave him props 'highly inflammable'. . that's against you

i am WAY so sick that i have become a disease on NAVIGATION screens
ur balls so small even after magnifyin it, call me a lyrical terminator & here's your termination script
Okay, wordplays here too. . flow's off, terminator is repeated in one line - dumbs down the bar.

Ganja's mind is shaky that is why he never stays on point like a trembling aim
better-refrain because i'm BEGINNING to think this is the END of your game
lol, damn fam. . okay, one tip - you didn't need to highlight the wordplay in this line.

r ma let my instincts deal wit this, Ganjamind is an icon representing the DUMBest lyricist
so weneva i TALK sh*t i'm only telling his FAKE ass i am who hip hop's REALest is
nice multi. . forced wordplays

you's like an ancient scene me is bringing fresh drama like a movie premier
now ur LAME shine's looking dimmer, that is cause malc' never be loosin his STAND
no rhymes. weak bar

none of your weak moves ever catches mailmalc off guard because 2/4/7 he stays scheming
Ganjamind wins! Mailmalc Lose! hahahaha Ganjamind is day dreaming
filler bar

the fact is that the DIFFERENCE between you and wackness is the SAME thing
so 'brid & Shaz gon kick u out because 'retards' they sure no longer be retaining
ok. . could have been worded better tho.

My Opinion

Y'all should work on ya flows.

My Vote
Metaphors - Both
Sting - Ganjamind
Rhyming - Both
Wordplays - Ganjamind, made more impact
Delivery - Both
Creativity & Originality - Both

[center]Ganjamind took this round. Good luck guys.[/center]

@ Shaz,

U should also rate "punches" and "vocab", "nameplays" and "creativity/complexity"

@shaz


nice job . . . .very very tight call but i completely dis-agree with the poutcome of results on the battle between ganjamind and mailmalc . . . . BY MY OWN ANALYSIS MAILMALC WON THE BATTLE

kindly respond

Shaz:

@ SAuron, they are all included. .

Nameplays are in Wordplays (no one here ever does nameplays, tho)
VOcab is really unnecessary in rap categories, I may spit the dictionary and make no sense, d'you get me?
Complexity has been there from day one
Punchlines are the 'STINGS'

Very well then.

Hybrid chose Mailmalc.
Shaz voted for Ganjamind.

If there's a tie. . . . .they should go for anutha round.

@shaz

fair enuf . . . . let the real battle commence . . . .


kindly pair the elite netcees

13th oct aint over yet and u effected walkovers.i was just about to post my verse¡#§so that means am out or what?

@ shaz,
what do you mean a no show?dont annoy me pls

@ mc brave,have u bought ur coffin??

mc brave,cock suckin knave~ma lyrical slave
my lines'll make u rant n rave~as tho yous be-ing caned

like a virus infection~imma make you go lame
give you a terror lecture~to drive you insane

dont think you done it all~ i been there n done did it
i'm sleek n fly~the crop o' the cream~innit?

slug you with lines~technically,using ma glock '9'
bow n pay homage to the king of all times

thinkin o revenge?~dont come to me with lines elementary
i make you like a criminal~no damn chance at clemency

the thrill o' the hunt~i assure you there's gonna be some killin
mc brave's the prey~taste better with some curry

being king in yo hood~a tatse of whats good~with you as ma catfood
dont think punchlines with me or yous a damn fool

down on your knees n hail the rap king eternal
or imma raze you down with lyric (de-mo-ni-cal-ly) infernal

@saucekid, shaz, n' on-lookerz

Sorry i got DQed for a NO-SHOW, y'all prolly know wat i was busy with.

If Brid would grant a rematch; i can work out some bars for ALexpissu! But the rules say: NO REMATCH!

@ tianshie,

Jesus man, you had me crackin' up like clay pots. That sh.t was crazy.

@ Shaz,

u said 12:00 GMT, yes? But you DQed them fellas around 9:30, about the same time t-rex was about to drop his verse!

greatn tourney, can't decide winner yet

@tianshe and saucekid


its a really big shame u dudes came up late . . . . i gots the uttermost respeck for u guys as fellow elite netcees . . . . . hmmmmmmmm!!! would really really wanna c u dudes spar in my tourney . . . u guys are special . . . .let me see . . .need to delibrate with shaz . . . .but the tourney already stated the rules from the outset . . .


much respeck guys . . .



@edosio and flowhsow

look . . . no disrespecting in hurr . . .not from u . . . this section is for the elite netcees,only the elite can make statements on this thread . . . u could go start ur won thread . . . .whats the deal? move one bro . . . .


@shaz


kindly delete the post by by edosio

thank you

@tianshe

kindly ignore . . .

much respeck

Sry y'al but Malc ain't dwn wit dis no more. I aint feelin it at least d freestyle battle was betta. Peace

hmmmmmmmmmmmmm

@ Alexpissu

Hey listen little brat I'm out like a knife cutting through ya brains
leaving ya pains until I leave no remains/
I don't toy with kids son cus u's just as lame as the word Dum/
Everytime I step and abuse the mic with versatility/
I balance humility wit brutal instinct/
I'll make your whole cypher look like those crackers from N'sync/
And wats that ur name again? Alexpissu/ Is that a lexative for being a red puss?/
Like the phoenix I'm heating up ready to burn this foes/
and this Mofo's(motherfuckers) trying to be hoes/
Wit this raven thoughts I'm like B.I.G/
So I'm leaving this motherfucker underneath the slum enverloped with the word D.I.E/
My breyon talk pick thick so don't ever talk shit/
And remember something nigga, while you rave and rant/
A roach can live for nine days without its head but u can't/
I'm like the air this nigga breaths/
And like rick james I'll have u bleed before u plead/

@malthuss and mailmalc

u guys fall on my list of respected netcees on the thread. . . . . i c where u dudes are coming from aight . . .
its all good . . . .we gonna spar at the lounge . . .



@shaz

with this two guys off and a couple of netcees showing late and all . . . . for real don't think the "star warz pro-elite version "can really b the same . . .the title has to earned . . with this core netcees dropping out . . .don't think the title can b earned that way

so shaz i suggest u kindly lock this thread . . . .it will be placed in suspension till further notice . . .