Something tells me that Dave will open up about how he became sterile and Oleng too, about the pregnancy while the former will plead that Oleng should never inform Eric about it.
Thumbs up Audrey. U are indeed gifted!
*Goes back to ghostmode*

Savigne: Audrey U are good!!!....A Sandra Brown book couldn't have been more captivating.U are da BOMB!!!!
Biko come and update cause if you dont I wont eat ooooo

Sandra brown? I dnt no if I've read any of her books. Make I quickly go find dem. Tanx dear. Lol!

vonn:

Hehehehe........pass me the food nah

Longthroat

Essyydiamond: I ga asikwa! I come here almost every 1hr expecting new update,only to meet nothing,nothing,ok maybe somtin, small smtin. Audrey can u put all the story once,make I swallow am once? Hehehehehe! I pass Oliver Twist shey?

Lol!

goldwaters: I spy with my little eyes someone who's name begins with A and ends with timms viewing. Any update?

Lol! Soon

Finally!!! **wipes tears**
OMG!! I've never read any story as emotional as this on NL. ...
This story touched me so much. ....see me reading and shedding tears. ....
AudreyTimms. ...i must confess. ..you're an exceptional writer. ..love the twists and turns. .....just keep the story rolling pls
@cheriepet. ..thanks for the invitation

bussyzionite: Something tells me that Dave will open up about how he became sterile and Oleng too, about the pregnancy while the former will plead that Oleng should never inform Eric about it.
Thumbs up Audrey. U are indeed gifted!
*Goes back to ghostmode*

Nice theory bt dts if Dave won't b blinded by anger wen he finds out Eric is responsible 4 his wife's pregnancy. Tanx dear. Abeg come bck o!

How can u hurt sumone u claim u love like dis? Audrey no matter his reasons it was so selfish n wicked of Dave to have kept it a secret... yl watch his wife cry her eyes out thinking d fault of their childlessness was hers...

charijee: Finally!!! **wipes tears**
OMG!! I've never read any story as emotional as this on NL. ...
This story touched me so much. ....see me reading and shedding tears. ....
AudreyTimms. ...i must confess. ..you're an exceptional writer. ..love the twists and turns. .....just keep the story rolling pls
@cheriepet. ..thanks for the invitation

Aww...please dnt cry. We will all smile @ d end bt we go stil cry small sha. Tanx dear. Tanx 2 cheriepet also

[quote
author=charijee]Finally!!! **wipes tears**
OMG!! I've never read any story as emotional as this on NL. ...
This story touched me so much. ....see me reading and shedding tears.
....
AudreyTimms. ...i must confess. ..you're an exceptional writer. ..love
the twists and turns. .....just keep the story rolling pls
@cheriepet. ..thanks for the invitation[/quote]


Tanks hon anything for u....

AudreyTimms:
I don order champagne 4 una. Ask d bar man 4 ur share

Correct....Ya head is dia

Cheriepet: How can u hurt sumone u claim u love like dis? Audrey no matter his reasons it was so selfish n wicked of Dave to have kept it a secret... yl watch his wife cry her eyes out thinking d fault of their childlessness was hers...

Wen love pass love, e go turn 2 obsession. I guess dts Dave's prblm. BTW tanx 4 inviting pple 2 check out d story. I appreciate it.

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author=AudreyTimms]
Wen love pass love, e go turn 2 obsession. I guess dts Dave's prblm. BTW tanx 4 inviting pple 2 check out d story. I appreciate it.[/quote]

u're welcome.... btw i cant read a beautiful story without call unto friends to come join me.... So proud to associate wit u

AudreyTimms:
Hmm. Sory I cdnt disappoint u on dose 2 tins. He's hurt and he seems lyk d bad guy rite nw. Since u cud actually predict one of dese two tins happening to him, u've given me an idea in twisting d story again. Its 2 late 2 do dt here. Mayb in anoda site or my blog or evn wen I publish it. Tanx dear

Hmm..... Audrey you can twist anyhow you want but don't touch Oleng and Eric oo.

#Team OlengEric

That right there is the game changer! The lying bagger just came out! Oleng pls quit that marriage asap! Nonsense! Mtchewww

Dear, dis is too short. Even Super story wey dey do diff advert dey long pas dis update.... We need more......

AudreyTimms:
Yeah, I hv abt 4 more bt dis is one of my strongest. Tanx dear. I no I will still post more on dis site bt mite nt b d ones I'll publish sha

Okay

Sterile? Lemme wait 1st b4 I crucify d guy.. Buh im surprised

capip120: what has thou done not to see an update by the Day? Audrey you bringeth me out of thine nemesis and set me on the path to Genesis, yeah thou I was reading through the path of an elongated depression then I saw your story. I heard a voice say unto me "read son! for in this you shall find solace and when I started reading this piece I didn't just find solace but I found comfort also.
I opened my eyes and saw the Angels saying son! never forget to check on this story cos this story promised to offer something unique and since that day I have made a resolve to see this story to the end.
Audrey you can give chimamanda an oso for her ego! (a run for a money). Keep the piece coming.
Goodmorning Nigeria =

Hw could I have missed dis beautiful piece! *stretching out my hand 4u 2 flog it* I'm so sorry. Tanx so much dear. Chimamanda? Hmm.....

Dave is just an insulent bast.ard!!!!!!
He should be shot dead......when I remember how those demons he calls family threw Oleng out I just wanna punch his face till I can feel hi's blood on my fist.

Hey guys, long update coming up bt dt will b it 4 2day. I nid 2 take drugs and rest cos of d flu. Tanx 4 alwys following and commenting. I appreciate u all. *u guys shdnt judge Dave harshly sha*

OP. This is brilliant.
Engaging narrative with exciting dialogue.
Have you published any book of your prose?

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Orikinla: OP. This is brilliant.
Engaging narrative with exciting dialogue.
Have you published any book of your prose?

Tanx dear. No, I hvnt bt I'm thinking of publishing dis one and anoda. Hw far wit ur stole nemesis? I ws following it. Tanx 4 gracing dis thread wit ur presence and 4 commenting

Hmmm dat useless Dave wanna commit murder.....infact Oleng is a fool for still staying with Dave after he told her about his infertility why was he silent for the past 5yrs..

It's funny how we feel committed to those who have hurt us. Walking away is not easy as saying it.

See,me I don't blame Oleng one bit o.....Dave is a sekg righteous beast..... and I bet Zinny and Co knows about this..

Wow!!!!! Bravo go Audrey you are da best need i call you sidney sheldon of Nigeria. Love your story. many lesson to learn from it. Oleng has really suffered they are both guilty. But i hope nothing will happen to our dear Oleng.

Its either Dave dies or gets a divorce....... SIMPLE!

Queenxstar: It's funny how we feel committed to those who have hurt us. Walking away is not easy as saying it.

Hmmm.....dis jst twisted my head. Honestly, I cdnt hv done better. Spoken like the true writer that u r! I agree with u. Tanx dear

Hmmm, Dave...
What has happened to Oleng now? She has suffered a lot, why is her life so unhappy? Why was she born to be unlucky?

Thanks Audrey and please give us answers by updating again.
Nice update...

sammyjay3: Hmmm dat useless Dave wanna commit murder.....infact Oleng iears a fool for still staying with Dave after he told her about his infertility why was he silent for the past 5yrs..

My dear, it isnt as easy as it sounds o! Na real lyf scenario b dis. Oleng hs her personal reasons 4 staying wit him. First is guilt, den family history. Moreover, if u understand temperaments, her phlegmatic side won't allow her leave where she hs being 4 almst six years. D 1st tym she left ws bcs she ws chased out by her in-laws