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Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by AudreyTimms(f): 4:48pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
Komzzy1: [img][/img] [color=#006600][/color] crying,the best touching story everSorry. Tanx dear |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by AudreyTimms(f): 4:49pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
PrinceAdepoju: I can't sight any flaw yet..Rily? Hmm....tanx dear |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by AudreyTimms(f): 4:50pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
hephzibahbeulah: Too long,too much suspense,d outcome is predictable. Even though most parts of d story is unreal,it stil makes for good entertainment and meditation. In all,ur writing,grammar,punctuation,etc are flawless...kudos to u!U jst repeated wat I wrote bros. Predictable? Okay. Tanx |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by AudreyTimms(f): 4:55pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
JeffreyJamez:Alright. Tanx. My eye dey dt groundnut o! 1 Like |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by AudreyTimms(f): 4:59pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
Shokoloko: [code][/code]Hmm....alright |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by AudreyTimms(f): 5:02pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
annylove: Wow...what a touching and wonderful story, keep it up Audrey and i promise u,u'll go places.Tanx dear. Amen o! |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by AudreyTimms(f): 5:04pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
Jesusbaby93: I really enjoy it and i c notin wrong wit d story. Kudos to you ma!Tanx dear. Alright |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by AudreyTimms(f): 5:05pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
Jesusbaby93: I really enjoy it and i c notin wrong wit d story. Kudos to you ma! |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by stormybucci(m): 5:08pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
maryhaam: did ur food get burnt?did someone load ur card?abeg u lost ur wallet?.....y are u using panadol for another person headache naaaanone of d above .... I no blame u, na audrey i blame |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by AudreyTimms(f): 5:19pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
toykathy:Its d least I can do wen u all take ur tym 2 read and comment. Tanx dear. God bless u 2 1 Like |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by AudreyTimms(f): 5:19pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
anasbeaut: I loved everything. But I would have loved to view it from Eric point of view esp how e has been able to cope over the years plus yes Oleng is a cry baby. She needs to develop a spineAlright. Tanx dear |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by AudreyTimms(f): 5:20pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
oluwabunmilola: Finally, I got to d last page . Nice job Audrey.Weldone. Tanx dear |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by AudreyTimms(f): 5:21pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
toykathy: yeah, Eric is too silent i totally agree wit dat but, oleng is just emotional and nt a cry baby, u are also silent on oleng's mum. I ll let knw if there is any other thing i noticed. Weldone.Alright. Tanx dear |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by PrettySpicey(f): 5:23pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
JeffreyJamez: Indeed Audrey Timms, every writer has their strong point... like in all things. And every writer approaches her plot from a certain kind of angle. But in spite of her strong points and angles, writers should approach writing according to the particularities of their chosen genre. I look at Unfulfilled Promises as a Women's Lit genre work and so it's style should defer from mine as a Contemporary Homorous romance writer and from Royver's as a Paranormal writer (I think that's what he is). But then again, it is never truly clear what are our flaws as writers until we are judged by the professionals who are in our chosen field or better put, genre. I have found being certain where I belong and working towards the standards of that particular art, keeps me improving my skill and never having to get confused by what might be un-honed opinions. Above all, I despise unnecessary comparison, especially when wrongly applied. I apologise if I'm presuming too much here, Audrey Timms, but I daresay it is for you to consider every point made by readers and all and decide for yourself which is valid. when we lack book reviewers, we should use already written works to judge our style Still think this was a great work. Thank you |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by AudreyTimms(f): 5:23pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
stormybucci: none of d above .... I no blame u, na audrey i blameEhn? Wetin I do? |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by Okinjay(m): 5:26pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
I did not see any flaws oo...You are unique and wonderful in your own way of writing and that's what matters. Its not easy to have the kind of addicted-followership that you presently enjoy. Mehn,just carry go....yoooouuuu toooooo gbbbbaaassskkkkiiiii... 1 Like |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by omotalkie(f): 5:27pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
Mmm...no update yet Anxiously wating ooh. As for ur writn skills, its simply unique, ivnt noticed any flaws, Ure tryn keep it up! |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by AudreyTimms(f): 5:34pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
PrettySpicey:Wow! Tanx a lot. I've neva tot of d kind of genre I fall in2. I'll put wat u've said in2 consideration. Tanx dear |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by Harrychocoberry(m): 5:36pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
Somepeople Should not Derail here! Just for warning sake though. Mrs Timms,on a lighter note.. Abeg you don notice xay,Some names/moniker Strong come Funny even Strange pass my own sef. Hope you've seen what I Inboxed? On Another Note: Miss Goldwaters..Have you come across any Movie Titled WHITE WATERS? If not Try to do xo. ~Chocoberry~ |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by AudreyTimms(f): 5:38pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
Okinjay: I did not see any flaws oo...You are unique and wonderful in your own way of writing and that's what matters. Its not easy to have the kind of addicted-followership that you presently enjoy. Mehn,just carry go....yoooouuuu toooooo gbbbbaaassskkkkiiiii...alright. Tanx dear |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by AudreyTimms(f): 5:39pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
omotalkie: Mmm...no update yet Anxiously wating ooh.Two updates coming. *editing mode* alright. Tanx dear |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by 3Dimension: 5:43pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
Dave come back and die again o,make I buy Jeep lol#epic Jeffreyjamez no go kill person o. 1 Like |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by Cheriepet: 5:44pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
JeffreyJamez: me go get share na haba |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by goldwaters(f): 6:12pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
Harrychocoberry: Somepeople Should not Derail here!I guess u r referring to d Amstel box office movie starring joke sylva and oc ukeje. |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by AudreyTimms(f): 6:31pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
*Removed* 5 Likes |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by AudreyTimms(f): 6:36pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
Harrychocoberry: Somepeople Should not Derail here!Trouble maker! Mention dem! Abt 2 check it |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by gaczee99: 6:38pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
I also think u sidelined Eric too much. How he felt wen oleng left him, how he tried to move on and find love but it all failed cos he still loved oleng, if all diz is touched, he would come in more in d story. But your work is good. |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by AudreyTimms(f): 6:40pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
*Removed* 4 Likes |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by seunviju(f): 6:44pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
Omo this love no be small thing o.keep doind the best Audrey,nice update but am thirsty for more o |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by JeffreyJamez(m): 7:10pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
Ghenghen!!!Ghenghen!!!!.... Eshin shin carry kpomo!!!!!!! Na the part wey I dey wait for be this.... Erm...AudreyTimms.... You had some typos tho....? 1 Like |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by Nobody: 7:14pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
Nyc update *runs back to ghost mode* |
Re: Unfulfilled Promises By Audrey Timms by shaks97(m): 7:19pm On Aug 26, 2014 |
deeeep!!! |
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