Iceskidd:
thanks

007Bruce:
For punchlines - be versatile , observant.. You can get your PL from watching movies, news(CNN), history, reading some battle raps.. Just be witty - Use your BRAIN your BRAIN yeah your BRAIN

coogar:


that's the advanced part.....

you just have to be creative with that. for example ibime is also known as bis. people say he's fat too.

so a powerful hypocatasis for ibime would be o'bis(obese)

007Bruce:
your prob is you're lazy.. You can never be dope if you dont write out those wack bars in your head.. Try freestyling regularly you can see kslib

Iceskidd:
who asked 4 ur opinion? Smh. Are you coogar? Cos i only asked for his advice. Mtcheew and u think you're d0pe? Abeg dnt even think of replying this. Thanks

coogar:


that's the advanced part.....

you just have to be creative with that. for example ibime is also known as bis. people say he's fat too.

so a powerful hypocatasis for ibime would be o'bis(obese)

Blingston:

pardon me but shouldnt a wordplay make sense both ways

captainflash:
smh. .i call out iceskid and 007bruce. .one of you should acept the call out. .

Ksslib:
You know, at first, i always felt rhymes only meant matching something like hook with book, crook, look, fluke.. e..t..c Not until i heard about multies i..e Multi syllabic rhyming..

Like i've been told many times, my lines lack multies. Truth is, its not like doing multies is too difficult for me to master but i always find myself subconsciously wanting to just rhyme the end word rather than the syllables cos it sounds better..
E..g i find it strange rhyming something like chair with cup... stool/fan--- though the syllables rhyme.. Same with table/oven ... Button/handle e..t..c cos the pronounciation aint even close.. It just sounds not cool and i end up just rhymin the end words rather..

Well, i ll like to master multi syllabic rhyming and know whats its really ALL about cos i believe i am perhaps missing something that makes it so cool.

Lemme give an Example with 4 bars:: Now i ll try as much possible to sacrifice rhyming the end words like i normally do ...
..

I silence this nigga, no re-mute control/cuz you throw slow punches like BB phones booting your blows/
..... erryone refutes you dO.p.e/ cos your line's like stagnant gutters! dude, you's needing a flow/!

I lunch daggers and stab the f@g/hes a fake nigga, a lying lad/
I make venues crowd in millions just by spitting facts/
But @his last show, he dropped a 'wind blower on its feet' & claimed he got 'standing fans'/


Lib converse with gods/cuz am smart and awesome with words/...... this dumb lad his mum denied ' br£ast milk'... so i showed why am fear 'some with swords/
When i slayed to make the nigga rest @ da 'bosom' of the lord/!

This bout is like a scuffle with his helper/ cuz i wont punch but teach texts! hes awful with the letters/ even offline, his speeches aint clever/
And wont be a smooth talker even if his lips we ruffle with sand paper/!



Now pls point out the multies in those bars. Why they rhyme or not. And why you started counting the multies from a particular word... If you didnt find any or it wasnt stable, let me know what i did wrong..

Coogar and Krone, your inputs ll be appreciated. I ll have other questions to ask pending the nature and depth of the answer i get.. Thanks!

ELYMAXiimus:


the highlighted words/phrases spoilt the multi-rhyme scheme....

When using a multi rhyme scheme.. Every first word of each line of a stanza must rhyme, nd every last word of it.....

Now the middle words should rhyme too, but some words are salient. These salient words can be ignored nd matched with another salient word which may not even rhyme with it ......

Ksslib:

I dont get you. Come again or or better still, use examples.

ELYMAXiimus:


.... This dude aint HEALTHY IN THE BRAiN/
he should stop preTENDING HE IS SANE/
cos he wouldnt draw the battle line...........
If he used his PENCILS "n" HIS PAINTS.....


Check this


K is captured by this EFFing reBEL
he needs help, nd i'm VEry aBLE/
so i'm bringing down these bars . ..... To make "Liberty" like lipton YEllow laBEL/ you get?

just an example though

Ksslib:

Heavy sigh. I still dont get it.

I quote again----- EVERY FIRST WORD OF EACH LINE MUST RHYME. THE LAST WORDS TOO.

what do you mean by first word of a line? Point the first words of your lines that rhymed.

ELYMAXiimus:

okay. Lets say syllables instead of words...

in the second bar.... I decided to rhyme 4syllables...
E.g: eff ing re ble= 4

so here's the scheme for the bar
Effing rebel/very able/ yellow label/

notice that each of the first syllable of these phrases have the sound ER... They rhyme

Nd each of their last syllable Sounds BULL....

Hence the whole phrases are multi-rhymes



Effing reBLE/ VEry aBLE/ YEllow laBLE/

I put the main(prominent) rhymes in capitals..

The small letters are the kyna silent(not salient.... Sorry),..

007Bruce:
ksslib
raptechniques./2011/08/13/how-to-rhyme-multi-syllables-like-eminem/

Ksslib:

Ehen. This is more like it .

Now, Rebel Very and Yellow all have two syllables each. When doing multies, rather than Ryhming the first syllable, can one get away with rather rhyming the second syllable.

E..g like I did with.
Awesome fearsome and bosom

And still have the first syallables------- Awe/ fear and Bo counted as part of the multies?

Or its a general rule that multies start counting only if the first syllables rhyme?

ELYMAXiimus:

lol. You're rhyming only one
syllable.
If you're to rhyme only two syllables, then all the syllables must rhyme. Why?
Cos they must start nd end with rhyming words.... Awsome will rhyme with JUST COME,,, nd so on

Basically
ALL MULTIS START ND END WITH RHYMING WORDS....

Here's a better way to make your example a multis

I'm the Most awsome/ while this foe's fearsome/ ?.?.?.?.?

Complete the scheme with that bosom punch

Ksslib:


Lemme give an Example with 4 bars :

I silence this nigga, no re-mute control/cuz you throw slow punches like BB phones booting your blows/ right here, the error u committed was rhyming booting with remote. Reboot woulda been proper, so that reduces this line to two syllables

..... erryone refutes you dO.p.e/ cos your line's like stagnant gutters! dude, you's needing a flow/! E no too rhyme sha but it's acceptable coz the beginning of the rhyme matches, ie re- and ne-

I lunch daggers and stab the f@g/hes a fake nigga, a lying lad/ Error! Stab and ly doesn't rhyme. The first one sounds like 'ai' while the other sounds like 'ar'. Now, it has reduced ur wish to make it 3 syllables 2 instead

I make venues crowd in millions just by spitting facts/
But @his last show, he dropped a 'wind blower on its feet' & claimed he got 'standing fans'/ Same with this this one too. Spitting would rather with Hitting, while Standing would rhyme with Planning. So by judgement na only one syllable u do here ie, FACTS and FANS


Lib converse with gods/cuz am smart and awesome with words/...... this dumb lad his mum denied ' br£ast milk'... so i showed why am fearsome with swords/
When i slayed to make the nigga rest @ da 'bosom' of the lord/! This is better but one little error from the last line spoiled ur 4 syllables. If na me I for find words to complete the rest in order to make it 5 eg AWESOME WITH THE WORDS/ FEARSOME WITH THE SWORDS/ BOSSOM OF THE LORD/ See? I added 'THE' in all of them so the bar would be 5 bar instead.


This bout is like a scuffle with his helper/ cuz i wont punch but teach texts! hes awful with the letters/ even offline, his speeches aint clever/
And wont be a smooth talker even if his lips we ruffle with sand paper/! Chai!!! I was almost grinning till I saw SPEECHES! That's the only ffuck up in that bar...and u would have hit 6 syllables!!!!!!! Unfortunately, we have to reduce it to 3 AIN'T CLEVER is 3 syllables. You ruined the opportunity. Next time, look for another word to rhyme with SCUFFLE, and RUFFLE, then re-read every rhyming line in the bar AND COUNT THEM!