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Re: Call it whatever! by somegirl(f): 4:35pm On Oct 10, 2006 |
It’s planets, barren, lonely and bleak, That circle his mighty glare without care, While petty me wanders to the unique, A blue place where I cannot but stare. Here, the sun treats me like a queen and crowns me with finest, gulden hair, While beneath, people praise the seldom seen And from the heart a wish they declare. But following my inner-most desire, I leave them in search for a distant spark, Seeking desperately what money can’t acquire I struggle on the long way through the dark. |
Re: Call it whatever! by macalurs(m): 8:04pm On Oct 10, 2006 |
somegirl: There are different types of games, different types of wins and different types of loses. Compromise itself is a game; in a chessmasters terms it's call'd a stale. For their best intrests players write the rules and adjust 'em as they see fit. Everything's a game, difference is: d'you know the rules? |
Re: Call it whatever! by somegirl(f): 8:07pm On Oct 10, 2006 |
No, that is not a compromise; it is a checkmate. A compromise is when both don't WISH to win. Now tell me: Who plays check without even attempting to win? I told you, love is not a game --- |
Re: Call it whatever! by macalurs(m): 8:11pm On Oct 10, 2006 |
A stale-mate? Do you know chess? |
Re: Call it whatever! by somegirl(f): 8:14pm On Oct 10, 2006 |
Hmhm, checkmate might be the wrong word. But that's what I found in the dictionary (hehe, was too fast that entry means something else! ). Let me check somewhere else again. |
Re: Call it whatever! by macalurs(m): 8:15pm On Oct 10, 2006 |
A stale-mate is when no one wins and no one loses. |
Re: Call it whatever! by somegirl(f): 8:18pm On Oct 10, 2006 |
Ok, thanks for the English lesson. I know a little chess but I am bad teacher and got nobody else who wants to teach me. |
Re: Call it whatever! by gwatala(m): 8:24pm On Oct 10, 2006 |
"Love is an Ass" |
Re: Call it whatever! by somegirl(f): 8:28pm On Oct 10, 2006 |
Poet Francis Egbokhare seems to be happily married. But I agree that love is an "ass". Look it up in the German dictionary than you see why! This poet, being very verse in languages, surely reffered to the German meaning of the word. |
Re: Call it whatever! by somegirl(f): 9:52pm On Oct 10, 2006 |
It's a roller coaster of emotions, Up and down, fast is the ride, My words are blown away: Sorry, I should not have spied. Second round got really tough, Up and down, I thought you lied, It almost broke my heart, You know how hart I cried. I'm so sorry I didn't take it back, Up and down, it was my pride And my hurt soul but now I wonder: Can I ever again be at your side? |
Re: Call it whatever! by macalurs(m): 11:33pm On Oct 10, 2006 |
Love is everything. Love is nothing. |
Re: Call it whatever! by gwatala(m): 5:00pm On Oct 11, 2006 |
It's almost over, though now I cry my tears are frought with endless bile. My muse is flown, gone, lost with style, and naked on this pillory strut now I. She could have stayed, she could have. I stretched my cords to stay the strain. From my mile of rage I rolled in pain with the last lone strand that once was love. But it's gone, with the last hot wind, not of me but a strain that may never mend. And it looks, oh it looks like the end: A last touch with the likes of a saner mind. Like life, I'll write this down in folds of chagrins. A dream fading off before its meaning begins. |
Re: Call it whatever! by somegirl(f): 5:29pm On Oct 11, 2006 |
Still, my love for you is still alive, please give us another chance I've stepped on your toe and you on mine, but let's not stop this dance. Hear the band is playing our tune, the whole world is the floor for our dance, let's face the crowed together, me'n'you, please give us another chance. |
Re: Call it whatever! by gwatala(m): 5:36pm On Oct 11, 2006 |
If love be alive, girl, and one is dead. How do we dance when the tune is fled? Doom postponed now stares in the face Like a flood. Just be there to say the grace. |
Re: Call it whatever! by macalurs(m): 5:45pm On Oct 11, 2006 |
Is Love that lady in your bed? That thing of beauty next to you Is Love that mystrey in your head? That cloud's your mind with words unsaid Lov's The girl men love so much She's the man girls dream to kiss She's everything from cramps to blush I behold love, I feel malaise Lov's the conqueress of kings The valint wordless touch of death With words unspoken, the brute she tames Love is death, the incarnate Lov's an illusion to my brain Lov's a feeling or a place Lov's where I go to catch a train Lov's what I do to keep mundane. |
Re: Call it whatever! by somegirl(f): 6:03pm On Oct 11, 2006 |
If you're dead, I might as well just go, But, if there is still a whisper of live in you, We can make it through the low, Love is stronger than death, it’s true. |
Re: Call it whatever! by gwatala(m): 6:27pm On Oct 11, 2006 |
Yea, I'd be here, I hope, and another day may break. Hope, yes, hope may stay to soothe like a desert lake. |
Re: Call it whatever! by somegirl(f): 6:50pm On Oct 11, 2006 |
Then, I will dance for rain To return the green to us And cease our both pain. I’ll wait without a fuss Since Osun will not obey But, out of her own will, She’ll answer me one day. And I will love you still. |
Re: Call it whatever! by macalurs(m): 7:44pm On Oct 11, 2006 |
Aww! 'tis love story Makes me tear just for love for her only This hopeful lad he lives again She cried and it was not in vain I shall watch I shall wait To see these lovers Their bloom, their fate As they mold their destiny I shall watch, and I shal wait. Maybe be like them someday Maybe teach myself to play This game of love that I despise maybe I could love one day I shall watch and I shall wait Maybe be like them someday. |
Re: Call it whatever! by macalurs(m): 12:35pm On Oct 13, 2006 |
I never knew make up sex could take so long! |
Re: Call it whatever! by somegirl(f): 12:45pm On Oct 13, 2006 |
*rofl* What is sex? I can't remember --- |
Re: Call it whatever! by macalurs(m): 12:57pm On Oct 13, 2006 |
good I got someone "rofl" The silence started to get deafening. |
Re: Call it whatever! by gwatala(m): 7:27pm On Oct 14, 2006 |
I too will sign off here. And let no one find me. I go on to search, or find, what is eternity. Here is what has been much and again said, and I now believe it: ALL GREAT MEN ARE DEAD! |
Re: Call it whatever! by somegirl(f): 7:50pm On Oct 14, 2006 |
Olufe, joo, wa nbi. Jeka mu oti yii. O dara. |
Re: Call it whatever! by aparisexy(m): 11:48am On Oct 16, 2006 |
love is true only to a fool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Re: Call it whatever! by macalurs(m): 5:33pm On Oct 16, 2006 |
What is love? And who is a fool? |
Re: Call it whatever! by somegirl(f): 9:29pm On Oct 17, 2006 |
One restless night, my feet carry me away, Worried by wars, I wander and wonder, To me, the air feels alien in thought and cool, Somewhere down there in the dark lays the bay, Two tiny steps further, I might blunder Or volunteer and they’d call me a fool. Wondering, my head almost tears me apart, Memories flash through my troubled mind: Woven across vanishing human lines, A dream has snatched my hopeless heart, How to survive alone in a world this unkind? A pain remains beyond the means of rhymes. However, out of the blue a bright light Catches my eye, was it a distant star That shone many eons ago, in a another sky And now is no more than a dot of white? Forward I step and fall, knowing the ground is far But real and if you must ask: that is why. |
Re: Call it whatever! by macalurs(m): 2:15am On Oct 18, 2006 |
@Somegirl You're one of the most powerful female poets I've read from. |
Re: Call it whatever! by somegirl(f): 11:43am On Oct 18, 2006 |
*blush, speechless* Two of those lines are actually stolen and modified. I’m sure their owner recognizes them and remembers. By the way, I speak English but I’m not English and I write poetry but I’m not a poet. For me it’s just A joyful and challenging game Beyond anyone’s claim, And not just for gaining fame. or, at times, something that keeps coming to my mind. |
Re: Call it whatever! by gwatala(m): 3:33pm On Oct 18, 2006 |
I like it. Like a song sung to a different tune. But its nice. |
Re: Call it whatever! by somegirl(f): 4:07pm On Oct 18, 2006 |
No, actually it's the same tune: Without hope there is no point to linger on to an imitation of life. |
Re: Call it whatever! by macalurs(m): 5:13pm On Oct 18, 2006 |
By the way, I speak English but I’m not English and I write poetry but I’m not a poet. I sing but I'm not a singer, talk but not a talker. gottcha. |
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