Hell - Poems For Review - Nairaland
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| Hell by Nobody: 8:20am On Nov 24, 2014*. Modified: 11:15am On Nov 24, 2014 |
Fire on the mountain But I won't run I want to feel devils rage I want to feel a bit of hell Hell a place were all sinners shall dwell Hell a place were a pot of noddles can be prepared for just 2seconds A place God described as everlasting torment A place where you shall wine and dine with lucifer HELL a place were death is no more Hell a place for our corupt leaders Yes am going to escape hell I will go to a place filled with milk and honey A place were songs of praise is the other of the day Yes heaven Ama make it |
| Re: Hell by Nobody: 9:47am On Nov 24, 2014 |
Wow! Never knew you write poetry. Ayamlaykorn |
| Re: Hell by Nobody: 10:24am On Nov 24, 2014 |
laykorn:yes I do oo how was it I try? I mentioned you in my other poetry I wrote earlier today |
| Re: Hell by texanomaly(f): 11:20am On Nov 24, 2014 |
samflexxy:I left a comment after your poem from earlier today. Keep writing. It'll keep you sane...or at least just sane enough anyway. |
| Re: Hell by texanomaly(f): 11:21am On Nov 24, 2014 |
Have you joined the poetry club? |
| Re: Hell by Nobody: 11:24am On Nov 24, 2014 |
texanomaly:no not yet I haven't heard from oma4u |
| Re: Hell by texanomaly(f): 11:26am On Nov 24, 2014 |
samflexxy:OMA4U...this guy needs in!  |
| Re: Hell by Nobody: 11:27am On Nov 24, 2014 |
texanomaly:lols thank you am an english student I just started taking poetry class |
| Re: Hell by ggrin(f): 11:27am On Nov 24, 2014 |
Wow   |
| Re: Hell by texanomaly(f): 11:29am On Nov 24, 2014 |
samflexxy:A newbie!  I'm impressed. You are poised for greatness. Keep it up. |
| Re: Hell by Nobody: 11:43am On Nov 24, 2014 |
texanomaly:thank you ma'am Pls I would love to get poetry lessons from you and oma4u |
| Re: Hell by Nobody: 11:45am On Nov 24, 2014 |
ggrin:  |
| Re: Hell by ggrin(f): 12:54pm On Nov 24, 2014 |
| Re: Hell by Nobody: 1:51pm On Nov 24, 2014 |
Wow!!!i'm impressed,you need to join the club Asap. Good work. |
| Re: Hell by Nobody: 1:56pm On Nov 24, 2014 |
Sam,sincerely I didn't get the mention. For a beginner you're awesome. It seems like you write better than I do sef. You need to be on the club. Please send a message to OMA4U's number. Thank you sir Ayamlaykorn |
| Re: Hell by Nobody: 10:33pm On Nov 24, 2014*. Modified: 12:00am On Nov 25, 2014 |
ggrin:lols make sense if you like this time no mail am again hahahaha I think the guy is on to you what did you do to him better apologize if not he'll make nl boring for you |
| Re: Hell by Nobody: 10:36pm On Nov 24, 2014 |
Bunsky:lols thank you ma'am but I haven't seen oma4u invite to join any group even do I already gave him my no. |
| Re: Hell by Nobody: 10:37pm On Nov 24, 2014 |
laykorn:lols thank you sir my head is (biging) I will thanks a lot for your words of encouragement. |
| Re: Hell by OMA4U(m): 11:39pm On Nov 24, 2014 |
samflexxy:Join us on 08039594156 |
| Re: Hell by Nobody: 11:56pm On Nov 24, 2014 |
OMA4U:have sent you a msg via whatsapp |
| Re: Hell by texanomaly(f): 12:56am On Nov 25, 2014 |
Yaaaaaay!!!
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| Re: Hell by ggrin(f): 9:30am On Nov 25, 2014 |
samflexxy:I don't know for him o Is the guy a He or she? |
| Re: Hell by Nobody: 10:17pm On Nov 25, 2014 |
ggrin:he is a he Lols Good evening jare have been having network probs since morning |
