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Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by Guykhena(m): 9:31am On Nov 25, 2014
Title : If I Control Time

Description:Based on what you'll do if you could control time,what mistakes will you right,what scenarios will you prevent or change and so on. (Seems straight forward)


Criteria

Creativity-- 2 points

Flow- - 1 point

Imagery- - 2 points

Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points

Consistency/Topic-- 4 points

Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points

Vocabulary-- 2 points

Emotion

Rules (must be strictly adhered to)

- 10 Lines...

- Deadline is Wednesday Nov 26th 4pm

- Verses should be posted by both contestants on
or not later than deadline date.

- No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or
recycling.

- No complaining about votes.

- No dissing of opponent

- No unnecessary comments
Re: Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by obainojazz(m): 3:46pm On Nov 25, 2014
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Re: Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by Gladyys(f): 8:29pm On Nov 25, 2014
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Re: Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by Gladyys(f): 9:33pm On Nov 26, 2014
IF I CONTROL TIME

I would go back to the times,you had dos cute smiles/
I would let out those feelings I used to hide
Behind dos looks, smiles/
I 'would not act Lime',so I'd 'stop my teeth from biting' my lips!!
I would let my words incline/
If only I knew you wouldn't decline/
If only I knew yours was in its prime.
If I control time/
I would go back to the times we spent together/
Dos times wen in summer like jack and jill,d hills we went together/
And shared d blanket in a colder weather/

To the times
You wrap your warm hands around mine/
Promisin never to let me go,be alone or cold,you even said WALAI!!/

If I control time
Dis moment my heart 'break fast',wouldn't 'lunch' dis day to dine!!


Staring at d engraved inscription/
Memories dat entails your description/ trails back into my mind,takes away my diction/
Dumb n numb,thoughts elude through a slow track/
My heart tumbles into my stomach/
D strands of hair stand firm/
The terror tangles itself with fear/
Dat moment I had your dead eyes on mine/
Cold hands on mine/
I felt dead too,havin such cold feet/
Waves of death encompassed me/
Your lifeless body on lied on my hands,so feeble/
D grim snatched
Your soul from me/


If I control time
I would alter d creation of d grim reaper/
If I control time
You would still be me sweetheart/

If I control time
Right now I would be saying d words more clearly/
Kissing your lips more firmly/
Screaming I love you more dearly/
How I wish I could control time
But even now I cnt control my fears,d tears nor d pen........

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Re: Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by obainojazz(m): 9:43pm On Nov 26, 2014
........if I control time
I'd go back and be Hitler.... y'all be black and
Jews
i'll be ruler... of both the wise and fools
line y'all.....in ur socks and shoes
share u in two/ the blacks in zoo
others working from morn till noon.
...or I could be love and truth
. .means I could be Jesus.. and die for you
in my youths/now a king is dead...
he's gone too soon
.
.....if I control time
i'd go back to eden
capture the serpent
throw him in the lions den
write to God to right all wrongs happening back
den
and be back before ten
.
......if I control time
I'd go back to shekau's mom pregnancy stage
cause her a miscarriage
so the terrorist who shows all what terror is won't
come of age
and attack this sovereign state.
.
.....if I control time
i'd erase word war
earth will be a free land for all
....a place of love
where whites and blacks will be one
it will begun/ when hates be gone
or when feuds be solved
....without the guns.
.
.....if I control time
I'd won this easily
I'll go back to secondary
enter j.s three
and start studying poetry.
or
I coulda met gl@dys
she'd be mother of me kids
john, Annabel and Philips
instead of this/she had be ffucking with me.
or
I could be mod
ban peeps for fun
and claim they dump.
.....ffuck
if I control time
na me go be god.

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Re: Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by obainojazz(m): 9:46pm On Nov 26, 2014
Gladyys:
IF I CONTROL TIME

I would go back to the times,you had dos cute smiles/
I would let out those feelings I used to hide
Behind dos looks, smiles/
I 'would not act Lime',so I'd 'stop my teeth from biting' my lips!!
I would let my words incline/
If only I knew you wouldn't decline/
If only I knew yours was in its prime.
If I control time/
I would go back to the times we spent together/
Dos times wen in summer like jack and jill,d hills we went together/
And shared d blanket in a colder weather/

To the times
You wrap your warm hands around mine/
Promisin never to let me go,be alone or cold,you even said WALAI!!/

If I control time
Dis moment my heart 'break fast',wouldn't 'lunch' dis day to dine!!


Staring at d engraved inscription/
Memories dat entails your description/ trails back into my mind,takes away my diction/
Dumb n numb,thoughts elude through a slow track/
My heart tumbles into my stomach/
D strands of hair stand firm/
The terror tangles itself with fear/
Dat moment I had your dead eyes on mine/
Cold hands on mine/
I felt dead too,havin such cold feet/
Waves of death encompassed me/
Your lifeless body on lied on my hands,so feeble/
D grim snatched
Your soul from me/


If I control time
I would alter d creation of d grim reaper/
If I control time
You would still be me sweetheart/

If I control time
Right now I would be saying d words more clearly/
Kissing your lips more firmly/
Screaming I love you more dearly/
How I wish I could control time
But even now I cnt control my fears,d tears nor d pen........
.
Re: Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by Guykhena(m): 9:47pm On Nov 26, 2014
Open for votes

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Re: Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by Gladyys(f): 9:50pm On Nov 26, 2014
obainojazz:
........if I control time
I'd go back and be Hitler.... y'all be black and
Jews
i'll be ruler... of both the wise and fools
line y'all.....in ur socks and shoes
share u in two/ the blacks in zoo
others working from morn till noon.
...or I could be love and truth
. .means I could be Jesus.. and die for you
in my youths/now a kind is dead...
he's gone too soon
.
.....if I control time
i'd go back to eden
capture the serpent
throw him in the lions den
write to God to right all wrongs happening back
den
and be back before ten
.
......if I control time
I'd go back to shekau's mom pregnancy stage
cause her a miscarriage
so the terrorist who shows all what terror is won't
come of age
and attack this sovereign state.
.
.....if I control time
i'd erase word war
earth will be a free land for all
....a place of love
where whites and blacks will be one
it will begun/ when hates be gone
or when feuds be solved
....without the guns.
.
.....if I control time
I'd won this easily
I'll go back to secondary
enter j.s three
and start studying poetry.
or
I coulda met gl@dys
she'd be mother of me kids
john, Annabel and Philips
instead of this/she had be ffucking with me.
or
I could be mod
ban peeps for fun
and claim they dump.
.....ffuck
if I control time
na me go be god.
Re: Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by Emaprince: 2:13am On Nov 27, 2014
Criteria

Creativity-- 2 points -Gladdys...obianojazz focused more on telling his stories straight away...gladdys had something like " 'I won't act lime' so I won't 'bite my lips' "...though it aint fantastic but half bread is better than none.

Flow- - 1 point-tie

Imagery- - 2 points-obianojazz

Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points -obianojazz...gladdys was falling in and out..


Consistency/Topic-- 4 points-obianojazz

Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points-Gladdys

Vocabulary-- 2 points -tie

MVGT-obianojazz

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Re: Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by kr0ne(m): 8:18am On Nov 27, 2014
Guys, don't make it sound like soft poem please!

Creativity-- 2 points - Tie

Flow- - 1 point -Tie

Imagery- - 2 points - Gladyys

Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points - Tie (though both of u were barely rhyming)

Consistency/Topic-- 4 points - Gladyys (she maintained her topic from start to finish)

Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points - Obainojazz

Vocabulary-- 2 points - Obainojazz

Mvgt - - Gladyys
Re: Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by ELYMAXiimus(m): 9:20am On Nov 27, 2014
Lol @ obaino's closer!.

One thing you both should know is that, you don't have to keep repeating the topic everytime...
There was too much "If i could control time" in y'all verse..

Upping. . .
Re: Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by ELYMAXiimus(m): 9:34am On Nov 27, 2014
Creativity-- 2 points = Gladys ( she a better story writer)

Flow- - 1 point = TIE

Imagery- - 2 points = OBAINOJAZZ (imagine sey i be God... undecided...smiley)

Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points = TIE

Consistency/Topic-- 4 points = TIE


Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points = GLADYS


Vocabulary-- 2 points = TIE


MVGT = GLADYS
Re: Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by Guykhena(m): 10:24am On Nov 27, 2014
Creativity-- 2 points - Gladyys

Flow- - 1 point-Gladyys

Imagery- - 2 points- Obainojazz

Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points -Obainojazz

Consistency/Topic-- 4 points - nil( You both didn't really follow the theme, you both were reciting "If I could control time" countless of times,there are different ways in which you can pass your msg across without necessary Stating the topic)

Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points-Gladyys

Vocabulary-- 2 points -Obainojazz
6-5

MVGT -Obainojazz

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Re: Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by mikuz(m): 10:50pm On Nov 27, 2014
Criteria

Creativity-- 2 points : Tie

Flow- - 1 point : Tie

Imagery- - 2 points : Obainojazz

Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points : Obainojazz

Consistency/Topic-- 4 points : Obainojazz

Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points : Gladdys

Vocabulary-- 2 points : Tie


MVGT : Obainojazz
Re: Gladyys Vs Obainojazz( King Of Poet:qualifying Series) by Geoxpress(m): 11:30pm On Nov 27, 2014
Lol. .una dy try.......^_^

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