Nigeria is not hopeless with minds like you. Respect!

Beautiful. My jaw drops with awe!

devigblegble:
Needed these so bad on a Sunday morning ... Thanks op

you welcome sire

kossyablaze:
If you participated in Shiloh, or the Redeemed program and you
are still supporting GMB as the right person to rule this country, I
am beginning to doubt your Christianity....Obviously God didn't
speak to you... *last bullet*I love you OP!

wow! Thanks

POEM: TERROR IS JUST A LITTLE ERROR THAT TOOK "T"

We heard the rumours and all we did was murmur,
What was once a little tumor is now causing giant tremors,
We have been robbed of our sense of humour because we refused to notice the clamour,
The son that should have brought us glamour has ended up shattering our muscles, tendons and even femurs,
Terror is just a little error that took T

He should have been tutored and preferably mentored,
Was meant to be lectured all the way while he matured,
Alone in the streets he ventured void of love and care and constantly pressured,
You complain now that he is not cultured when all the while he was never nurtured,
Terror is just a little error that took T

Now a bomber over here and yonder,
We paying for our blunders even though we claim we don't remember,
Many are sober but yet he doesn't bother,
Thinking nothing can hinder him from taking away your sister, brother and even father,
Terror is just a little error that took T

Where do we go from here since tomorrow isn't rily clear,
One moment there is calm in the air but the next a blast might rip and tear,
We are all gripped with fear even if its nowhere near,
But the fact remains that souls so dear have been brutally sent to an untimely rest up there,
Terror is just a little error that took T

The future is bleak because our spirits are weak,
Many are advocating we break but whose is Nigeria to take,
We are busy fighting for a piece of the nations cake when our future is being drained like a drying lake,
Its high time we fought for our nations sake by defending with integrity what's left of our stake,
Terror is just a little error that took Time...

STOP IT NOW! BE TRUE TO YOUR HUMANITY, SHOW LOVE ALL THE WAY!!!

...IGIT!!!

nkpommpko:
Nigeria is not hopeless with minds like you. Respect!

thanks sire

You make pain sound like fine wine.
It is a beautiful piece of hopeful song and its simplicity would cut across all race and ages. Edit the last stanza if you must; its iimproper to edit a poet's mind but it kills the surreal in it...Thanks for sharing

I love to see posts like this not just rubbish that people post... This is a good work from a great poet.. thumbs up.
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this is one of the best poems i have read on NL. Susrite this is a good work and you need to write more. You've got mail.

The poet should have been more original....had read another poem with this same title.

Dagah2:
The poet should have been more original....had read another poem with this same title.

there are tens of poems with same title, thats not plagiarism. Wake up people

tmx21:
there are tens of poems with same title, thats not plagiarism. Wake up people

Dude don't teach me about plagiarism because I never accused him of that....he should try fix his title same way he structured his lines...that will be more creative

I was just coming from the ncc thread here www.nairaland.com/2043677/nairaland-couples-competition-stage-2/1#28872854 and seriously i got captivated by a girl's poem the, a poem by bholutife18... You might want to read it and probably vote for any of the contestants

Dagah2:

Dude don't teach me about plagiarism because I never accused him of that....he should try fix his title same way he structured his lines...that will be more creative

am so sorry man, that was the title that came from my heart.

susrite:
am so sorry man, that was the title that came from my heart.

You are welcome bro,forgive me I'm a critic

Kindly read up Badiru Kehinde's works on www.badirukehindewrites. OP Thumbz up for this 28CC09AC

Tz 9ice buh wud be unique wid anoda title cos ma fa4ryt poem has d same title....

You've got a good lines up there, but have you come across the version of 'Sola Owonubi's Homeless not Hopeless'? You have the same focus in common, just like JP Clark and Wole Soyinka 'Abiku'.
Keep it up dear!
I represent a Literature tutor in Naija.