Topic: My Hometown, My Pride

Instruction: This is more like a braggadocio writeup about ur hometown. Everything should be based on HYPE, even if there's nothing worth hyping in your hometown

Criteria

Creativity-- 2 points

Flow- - 1 point

Imagery- - 2 points

Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points

Consistency/Topic-- 4 points

Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points

Vocabulary-- 2 points

Emotion

Rules (must be strictly adhered to)

- 8bars/16Lines...

- Deadline is Thursday Dec 4th 4:oopm

- Verses should be posted by both contestants on
or not later than deadline date.

- No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or
recycling.

- No complaining about votes.

- No dissing of opponent

- No unnecessary comments

Goodluck!

*following this thread*

Sneeze...

Yeah

Abeg no time

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Wack shyt
My state is the heartbeat of the nation/
so far we done great, we dersevre a standing ovation/
back in tha day, our empire had good civilization/
any other empire that challenged us, faced a humiliating decapitation/
i ain't spewing boloney/
we gave that name to benin dahomey. [google am]/
that was the olden days/
lets take it to the modern ways/
i'm from ekpoma, we ain't never faced adversity/
nor diversity/
we produce the best law graduates, i'm talking ambrose ali univesity/
things for there, make brain/
i could say it again/
cos we got no rivers, if we lack water, we make rain/
party held almost every eve/
fück up and you'll be forced to leave/
its either you get killed, or you get short sleeve. LoL
#WeOut

Thread closed

Iceskidd wins via no show

kr0ne:
Thread closed

Iceskidd wins via no show

wetin you mean via no show...wARRIBLOOD IS ban how he go take post

Harvey2:
wetin you mean via no show...wARRIBLOOD IS ban how he go take post

When them ban u why u no talk quick? I even gave him a long time to post

Iceskidd:
Abeg no time

.
Wack shyt
My state is the heartbeat of the nation/
so far we done great, we dersevre a standing ovation/
back in tha day, our empire had good civilization/
any other empire that challenged us, faced a humiliating decapitation/
i ain't spewing boloney/
we gave that name to benin dahomey. [google am]/
that was the olden days/
lets take it to the modern ways/
i'm from ekpoma, we ain't never faced adversity/
nor diversity/
we produce the best law graduates, i'm talking ambrose ali univesity/
things for there, make brain/
i could say it again/
cos we got no rivers, if we lack water, we make rain/
party held almost every eve/
fück up and you'll be forced to leave/
its either you get killed, or you get short sleeve. LoL
#WeOut

so you are from Ekpoma ? ..menn Benin girls are hot

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