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**king Of Poet** {group A} Laykorn Vs Testerfuze by kr0ne(m): 6:31pm On Dec 08, 2014 |
Topic: The Sky is Within My Limit Instruction: It is self-explanatory. We've done something similar to this. Sky being within your reach is as well as saying nothing is impossible for you to achieve. So explain Creativity-- 2 points Flow- - 1 point Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points Consistency/Topic-- 4 points Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points Vocabulary-- 2 points Imagery --2 points Rules (must be strictly adhered to) - 8bars/16Lines... - Deadline is Wednesday, 10th of Dec, 2014 - Verses should be posted by both contestants on or not later than deadline date. - No biting, swaying, stretching, feeding or recycling. - No complaining about votes. - No dissing of opponent - No unnecessary comments - Good luck! |
Re: **king Of Poet** {group A} Laykorn Vs Testerfuze by Nobody: 6:54pm On Dec 08, 2014 |
[b]The sky's within my limit so I do a thousand things,try to combine/ It's a spirit so I try more and when I don't get what I want I re brand,try to refine/ Cos success ain't your count o' gold but how much you go beyond the sky,the way I define/ See me going beyond the sky,before it was poetry addiction,today I was diagnosed with rap incline/ The sky's within my limit and that's why I'm here tonight/ Rhymes are mystifying,but I I'm here with my first rhymes fighting for a Kings' crown, yeah I'm alright/ You know I stand atop the skies and that seems plain impossible to your heretic mind./ You run in sneakers, on tracks, away from facts, get this into your head man,it doesn't take time./ The sky's within my limit so I stand atop it hustling,moving steps closer to success/ Today I had another call from another popular actress/ Said she's broke,gave her plenty money in dollars but I still got trillions in my account with Access/ That's why I gotta fly more cos when these things happen only in my dreams what's the essence?/ The sky's within my limit so I try to be many at once. Mandela, Obama, and now Commando./ My brother said its impossible,and it said 'm possible so I took some classes in Taekwondo./ Now I give these speeches, free these masses and knock out rude niggas to stupor with my magical kick combos/ So when they wake,they talk of seeing Commando and the dope ones say they were knocked out by Candal's 1Hobo/ The sky's within my limit and that's why I write some poetry/ Comes from deep within,announces some kind of body and mind silent solidarity/ I used to think inking lines were impossible for me,but I was gradually becoming R. Brooke when he inked of peace or unity/ But the day I crossed the sky, I edited my copy of the dictionary and crossed out in permanent ink, the word 'impossibility/ "The sky's within my limit" it talks about me/ I heard it first when I was young but I took it unserious cos I was mad loving Simbi/ But I remember hearing it first from a loser, late now, was a symbol of misery/ Funny he said it, cos losers have the sky above them, but never within their limits/ Winning is a choice/ The sky's within my limit and that's why I threw all choices away but kept 'winning'/ There were days I was so lonely, and stared at the ceiling so much I crushed on the ceiling/ But the next day, I still went hustling, hiding my real self behind these smiles,hiding those awry feelings/ My real self is somewhere on a lonely island, crying or reading or writing or sleeping, doing something/ I hide it, try to forget it so I'm not always sure where it is or what its doing/ But cos the sky's within my limit, I battle the challenges, jump the hurdles, if its all about winning/ And if someone ever calls this thing 8 bars,remember I scripted it/ Scripting this, is my definition of winning.[/b] Ayamlaykorn 3 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: **king Of Poet** {group A} Laykorn Vs Testerfuze by Testerfuze(m): 8:24pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Laykorn pls modify your post cus I won't be able to post tonight cus I was pretty busy to script today....pls pardon me till tommorow Tags Kr0ne Guykhena |
Re: **king Of Poet** {group A} Laykorn Vs Testerfuze by Testerfuze(m): 7:12pm On Dec 11, 2014 |
THE SKY IS WITHIN MY LIMIT The sun goes down and stars come out/ My writtens 'll go places so my bars born Proud/ Only left for me to spill it/ No Shortcut dramas or gimmicks/ Cus its a believe i had in me that the sky's within my limit/ Me... A overhyped Hippo/ Bros abeg Biko/ Am destined for the top and impossible not in my dico/ Life is not a bed of Roses,so dnt expect to sleep on it/ If fatai Rolling dollar @ 86 or 40 years Old giggs on Kit/ Could deliver,how much more of a teenager like me yappin spits on spits/ With the gees on Street/ Freestyle wit my niggas while i treat the. text world wit my written frees on sheets/ Who that??/ The coming of a messiah who's gat/ The power to change the universe rude acts/ Best believe the True fact/ Am a believer myself plus i DReam big and wide like say na toolz back/ Hustlers hustlin on they grind/ Steven wonder and cobhams Both made it blind/ So am inclined to believe Success sorely depends on your current state of mind/ I dnt care bout who recycles,i dnt care bout the dogs biting/ Cus am already Dead,witness the uprising/you think its impossible for me to rise again from whr i lie since/ Wêll tester came back with more Energy in him...fuse gone bison/ Gud ent gud enough,cus after good thr is a better/ So I'll kneel and plead with nature...amma beg her/ To pls give me her feathers/ To elevate myself cus the sky ent a Limit whr there is an ether. #Rapberry. 1 Like |
Re: **king Of Poet** {group A} Laykorn Vs Testerfuze by kr0ne(m): 8:17pm On Dec 11, 2014 |
Open for votes Mikuz Guykhena Elymaxiimus Krone Emaprince Loonat11kk |
Re: **king Of Poet** {group A} Laykorn Vs Testerfuze by Emaprince: 8:47pm On Dec 11, 2014 |
Hustlers hustlin on they grind/ Steven wonder and cobhams Both made it blind/ So am inclined to believe Success sorely depends on your current state of mind/ Nice one! Laykorn's verse looks longer.. Creativity-- 2 point-testerfuze..just one line though Flow- - 1 point-testerfuze...laykorn's lines are too long for easy flow..y'all know this is rap section so even if na poetry,we need it to be flowable! Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points-tie consistency/Topic-- 4 points-tie...testerfuze kept it simple,ayamykorn was deeper and touched more angles but for the steve and cobham reference,testerfuze tied it. Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points-testerfuze for that "bed of roses "line Vocabulary-- 2 points-ayam laykorn Imagery --2 points-ayamlaykorn MVGT-testerfuze! |
Re: **king Of Poet** {group A} Laykorn Vs Testerfuze by kr0ne(m): 2:24pm On Dec 12, 2014 |
Creativity-- 2 points - - Tie Flow- - 1 point - -Testerfuze Rhyme Scheme-- 2 points - - Tie Consistency/Topic-- 4 points - - Testerfuze Lit Elements/Metaphors-- 2 points - - Laykorn Vocabulary-- 2 points - - Laykorn Imagery --2 points - -Tie Mvgt - - -Testerfuze Laykorn, this is your first battle on the rap section, and I must say I'm really impressed by your performance. You're a good poet, to be sincere, but this is Rap section. You lacked that swag of a rapper in your verse. I hope to see you in battles some other time Testerfuze, why 7 bars instead of 8, abi you no read the instruction? No try am again o, we even gave you time |
Re: **king Of Poet** {group A} Laykorn Vs Testerfuze by Testerfuze(m): 5:09pm On Dec 12, 2014 |
kr0ne: Oga kr0ne abeg no vex...na Rush i take script sef i was too busy thats why,...i don Vow say nuttin go make me vickybash untop NL so instead of pullin a no-show i had to write sumtin anyway. |
Re: **king Of Poet** {group A} Laykorn Vs Testerfuze by Emaprince: 5:43pm On Dec 12, 2014 |
kr0ne:honestly mehn,the lack of swag in his verse bored me die!..and the way he droped his rhymes where forced and disjointed I must say..but its his first time though,he'll still grow. |
Re: **king Of Poet** {group A} Laykorn Vs Testerfuze by Nobody: 6:13pm On Dec 12, 2014 |
Emaprince:Yeah I will grow. Thanks kr0ne. I'll try to work on that. Emaprince, I'll grow. Thanks. Ayamlaykorn |
Re: **king Of Poet** {group A} Laykorn Vs Testerfuze by kr0ne(m): 7:20pm On Dec 12, 2014 |
laykorn:My advice, visit here more often and drop bars on FFR. With time u'll grow (I know ur considered d0pe in ur own poetry world. Your vocabulary is out of the world. But here, ur style looks kinda boring coz it doesn't match with ours. Ksslib is a good example. He was dropping boring lines here when he newly joined but gradually...not gradually. He improved with such speed he won his first battle! So I believe u'd do same, if not better, if u continue dropping lines here. And it will also help u grow as a poet 2 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: **king Of Poet** {group A} Laykorn Vs Testerfuze by Nobody: 7:37pm On Dec 12, 2014 |
kr0ne: Thanks kr0ne. Where's FFR? Ayamlaykorn |
Re: **king Of Poet** {group A} Laykorn Vs Testerfuze by gottoboy(m): 8:23pm On Dec 12, 2014 |
Laykorn ϔӫц impressed me bro |
Re: **king Of Poet** {group A} Laykorn Vs Testerfuze by kr0ne(m): 8:30pm On Dec 12, 2014 |
laykorn:https://www.nairaland.com/200489/flow-rank#3141048 |
Re: **king Of Poet** {group A} Laykorn Vs Testerfuze by Nobody: 8:31pm On Dec 12, 2014 |
kr0ne:Closed thread. Ayamlaykorn |
Re: **king Of Poet** {group A} Laykorn Vs Testerfuze by kr0ne(m): 8:33pm On Dec 12, 2014 |
laykorn:Check again |
Re: **king Of Poet** {group A} Laykorn Vs Testerfuze by Nobody: 9:03pm On Dec 12, 2014 |
kr0ne:Wow! So much to read and digest o'er there. Lemme get to work. Thanks. I still have a match before I'm out don't I sir? Ayamlaykorn |
Re: **king Of Poet** {group A} Laykorn Vs Testerfuze by Nobody: 9:05pm On Dec 12, 2014 |
gottoboy:I Wow! You don't know how much this means to me. Thanks so much gottoboy Ayamlaykorn |
Re: **king Of Poet** {group A} Laykorn Vs Testerfuze by gottoboy(m): 11:40pm On Dec 12, 2014 |
laykorn:You're welcomed, later this month we'ould do a poetry colabor! Αм featuring you! Ill hit you up whǝ̥̥Ω̴̩̩̩̥ αм ready |
Re: **king Of Poet** {group A} Laykorn Vs Testerfuze by gottoboy(m): 11:42pm On Dec 12, 2014 |
laykorn:Mayb if ℓ̊ loze my last match |
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