standd:



What is sensei? I really don't know grammar the way folks feel. In Somalia where I school, we don't speak big Engilishi

Scrypt:


Lol. So you left France for Somalia already?

standd:



Never been to France
Write another poem na, love-themed.

Scrypt:


Whao! Thats uncharted territory. I'll need a muse for that. Will you be that muse?

standd:



Nah. You have one already and I don't play second fiddle.

Oh well, there goes your poem.

Scrypt:
Couldn't sleep decided to write this...

Somebody Lied

Somebody Lied,
And we ate the words as feeds,
Lies they told us as kids,
Beautiful lies that tasted like sweets,
An assurance of tomorrow.

A tomorrow which may not yield,
And even if it did,
In abundance a bounty of seeds,
Seeds not from weeds,
In large bags and not quids,
Such viewed with raised eyebrows.

Eyebrows of the jealous with deeds,
Deeds carried at heart like beads,
Beads which has blinded them with greed,
Asked they'd refute it,
Refute it with words as shields,
An offspring he is.

Somebody lied,
When they said we'd reap,
Reap a plethora of sweet smelling mint,
Mint in multiple bundles the size of pints,
Accrued for days longer than a stint.

We believed,
We believed these lies,
We swallowed them like tea
They turned out to be expired pills,
Pills causing discomfort not just to the teeth,
Stomach rumbling to the scars from these seeds,
Now nauseated we fall sick,
And with regrets we should't have believed.

Somebody lied,
Ruminating we wonder who did,
The red coats who created the deed?
The men in opulence wearing fine prints?
Or the FEC sharing the seats?
Expectant we wait we sit,
We do not care whose head it fits,
The axe of justice must make its hit,
The liar or offspring must pay the fees.


-TheScrypt

Copy:

Texanomaly
Laykorn
Leki10

Scrypt:
Couldn't sleep decided to write this...

Somebody Lied

Somebody Lied,
And we ate the words as feeds,
Lies they told us as kids,
Beautiful lies that tasted like sweets,
An assurance of tomorrow.

A tomorrow which may not yield,
And even if it did,
In abundance a bounty of seeds,
Seeds not from weeds,
In large bags and not quids,
Such viewed with raised eyebrows.

Eyebrows of the jealous with deeds,
Deeds carried at heart like beads,
Beads which has blinded them with greed,
Asked they'd refute it,
Refute it with words as shields,
An offspring he is.

Somebody lied,
When they said we'd reap,
Reap a plethora of sweet smelling mint,
Mint in multiple bundles the size of pints,
Accrued for days longer than a stint.

We believed,
We believed these lies,
We swallowed them like tea
They turned out to be expired pills,
Pills causing discomfort not just to the teeth,
Stomach rumbling to the scars from these seeds,
Now nauseated we fall sick,
And with regrets we should't have believed.

Somebody lied,
Ruminating we wonder who did,
The red coats who created the deed?
The men in opulence wearing fine prints?
Or the FEC sharing the seats?
Expectant we wait we sit,
We do not care whose head it fits,
The axe of justice must make its hit,
The liar or offspring must pay the fees.


-TheScrypt

Copy:

Texanomaly
Laykorn
Leki10

laykorn:
Scrypt, you have been chasing me with mentions kwa! lol
The theme of the poem is so impressive.
You just need to work on the punctuation like my oga at the top, leki10 said.

You finished every line which is not the last on the stanza with a comma. Just try to imagine that you were writing those words beside each other in prose. Punctuate just the way you'd punctuate your prose work sir.

Oga! Please don't forget to write a love poem for standd.
Ayamlaykorn

Thanks for the review. I'll do the needful.

Standd has been suspended indefinitely, She broke my heart.

laykorn:
Scrypt, you have been chasing me with mentions kwa! lol
The theme of the poem is so impressive.
You just need to work on the punctuation like my oga at the top, leki10 said.

You finished every line which is not the last on the stanza with a comma. Just try to imagine that you were writing those words beside each other in prose. Punctuate just the way you'd punctuate your prose work sir.

Oga! Please don't forget to write a love poem for standd.
Ayamlaykorn

Scrypt:



Thanks for the review. I'll do the needful.

Standd has been suspended indefinitely, She broke my heart.

laykorn:
Scrypt, you have been chasing me with mentions kwa! lol
The theme of the poem is so impressive.
You just need to work on the punctuation like my oga at the top, leki10 said.

You finished every line which is not the last on the stanza with a comma. Just try to imagine that you were writing those words beside each other in prose. Punctuate just the way you'd punctuate your prose work sir.

Oga! Please don't forget to write a love poem for standd.
Ayamlaykorn

Veralaw:

[size=20pt]REVIEW MY POEM NA [/size]

Na so me self beg oh.

standd:

Scrypt:


Na so me self beg oh.

standd:


You said I broke your heart

Did you?

Scrypt:


Did you?

standd:




Acceleration is + while deceleration is -
If you tossed me your heart and I tossed it back at you, displacement is zero.
Initial velocity is zero and there's no law of physics that states otherwise.

Am I communicating

Lol. Standd! . All these for a simple question, "Did you"?
.

Interesting.

Scrypt:


Lol. Standd! . All these for a simple question, "Did you"?
.

Interesting.

standd:


You started it na. Accusing a gentle, innocent lady of breaking a heart she never even saw.
So, I decided to speak the only language I understand- Physics.

Still, it is interesting. And young lady, this conversation is not over.

Scrypt:


Still, it is interesting. And young lady, this conversation is not over.

laykorn:
Scrypt, stop derailing your collection thread.

Elantracey:
How will I be able to post mine after seeing this na

Scrypt:
Fade away, Fade away, Fade away.

Cracks like quake faults
Reeling through my being as pain pulse,
Distraught,
I sit with deep thoughts,
Thoughts of how you make me slip up,
Trapped in memory's cold port,
Port, no means to sweet shores.

My cogitations of never more,
Fade away these thoughts, fade away.

This is me, breaking the seal,
This me, telling you how it feels,
Constantly lost in thoughts,
Imagination running it's course,
This is me, doing the time.

I wonder how you feel about me,
If you really care,
When I reach out, you retract,
It hurts, thats unfair,
Fade away these thoughts, fade away.

Emotions running through my veins,
Spiked seeds of pain,
Tears I've searched but vain,
Burnt courage and scorched heart left for dead, I'm passed for insane.

I wonder if I bite your thoughts,
Like you split mine,
I wonder if I am your sort,
As a sweet wine,
Fade away these thoughts, Fade away.

How I wish to hold you close,
Kiss your lips, make a toast,
Rub your back, make you laugh,
Matter of fact, you attract,
I plead in pains,
Fade away these thoughts, fade away.

Hoping,
Wishing,
Dying for change,
You sliped through my arms,
It kills me, I'm frail.
Yet, you constantly in my face,
Fade away, Fade away, Fade away.

It hurts, I'm just the other guy,
Around me, how uncomfortable you got,
It breaks me, I'm sore.

Maybe I'm doomed, when it's about you,
My league is a factor, what do I do?
I hope somehow, now we are two,
That someday, you'll see me as true,
Fade away these thoughts, fade away.

Copy:
Texanomaly
Laykorn
Leki10

Scrypt:
[center]Shreds,
Broken heart,
Pieces as tears,
Her memories, her fears,
Love, attention, affection, she's scared,
Scared of reflections impaired.
Prince, the heir,
Affection repaired,
Pearl.


[/center]

EverestdeBliu:

owkay now Scrypt,lemme involve you a lil, What's the theme of this piece?