nice work

Larry Larry
Don't separate our guys now

Observer3:
This one you pple are saying the story is just starting



what have we being reading since

Epilogue??

No oh,Prolouge

Observer3:
This one you pple are saying the story is just starting



what have we being reading since

Epilogue??

no o

He was introducing the story from where it all began

Pinkberry5:
No oh,Prolouge

you're really in the spirit

LarrySun:


As the friends rode happily into the sunset, what they didn’t know was that there was not going to be a next time, for this was the last time Peter Black and John Balewa would be robbing together.

After reading this paragraph, my heartbeat has increased.

The suspense is killing, please come and update ooo.

Nice work Mr. Larrysun

kingphilip:
no o

He was introducing the story from where it all began

funny dude

This z just d beginning of "BLACK MARIA".Mr Larrysun please come nd update o,d suspense z just 2 much.

LarrySun, shey you want to kill us with suspense before posting the next chapter. It's been one week already.

LARRY PLS GET OUT OF UR SICKBED WE'RE WAITING ON U LARRY PLS GET OUT OF UR SICKBED WE'RE WAITING ON U

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stuff46:



Kicking and well sire, how is life treating you?

Life, as usual, has not really been fair.

uchihaclassiq:
he had told him that his uncle living in another country had sent the television to him. He had explained that there was an excess of colour television littering the streets of London and they weren’t as expensive as they were in this country.
lol..blackie at it again...more update pls bro

Lies are beautiful. Deceptions are ugly.

prisiliveth:
Even among writers,there was honour.
May God infect ur Brain with more wisdom.

Readers are more honourable.

Thanks for your prayers.

pablobellins:
No need sire. Uncle Larry, you are updating exceptionally well this days o. I wonder why

Obviously not well enough.

Fazemood:
So long I've waited for this revenge. Larry I implore that you make this revenge worth the time spent on planning it out. Salami deserves to suffer much bt die slowly.

Great work mentor.

There will be time for revenge. It's time to sort out the chaffs.

Vicoch:
I love adventure and these crooks sure do know how to give it

LOL! Crookest of the crooks they are.

Eddyella:

I will buh Black z my real niga nd I can nt abandon him,I just dey feel him swaga.Ride on Mhizter am following.

LOL! He's all things good and bad.

Rick9:
Finally Caught up with you all, but am still disappointed that at Page 90+ the story has not ended, that's why I started reading in the first place.
Don't like incomplete stories anyway.


But O.P you write well but the beginning was some how, that was too much for a 9 year old boy.

Nice story anyway I admire Peter's intelligence.

He was actually ten. And anything can happen to anybody.

LogoDWhiz:
Larrysun. Suspense king. This story just entered another gear. Welldone larry.

It's a little twist of the knife.

kingphilip:
As the friends rode happily into the sunset, what they didn’t know was that there was not going to be a next time, for this was the last time Peter Black and John Balewa would be robbing together.

This is the turning point and where the real story began


Nice one Larrysun

Hello King.

omobs:
Hope something bad is not gonna happen to my peter

LOL! Let's hope for the best.

garex:
As the friends rode happily into the sunset, what they didn’t know was that there was not going to be a next time, for this was the last time Peter Black and John Balewa would be robbing together.


now that's what I call suspense...

LOL! Wait for the real suspense.

Observer3:
This one you pple are saying the story is just starting



what have we being reading since

Epilogue??

daremiarchs:
Larry Larry
Don't separate our guys now

LOL! Twenty friends cannot play for twenty years.

nkemdave:


After reading this paragraph, my heartbeat has increased.

The suspense is killing, please come and update ooo.

Nice work Mr. Larrysun

Thank you, sir.

Eddyella:
This z just d beginning of "BLACK MARIA".Mr Larrysun please come nd update o,d suspense z just 2 much.

Updated.

Darkcrisp:
LarrySun, shey you want to kill us with suspense before posting the next chapter. It's been one week already.

Posted. Thanks for following, dear.

SNOWBOI360:
LARRY PLS GET OUT OF UR SICKBED WE'RE WAITING ON U LARRY PLS GET OUT OF UR SICKBED WE'RE WAITING ON U

Sick bed? I hope that's a figurative expression, because I'm perfectly healthy.

LarrySun:
He was actually ten. And anything can happen to anybody.

But that was too gory anyway

LarrySun:
There will be time for revenge. It's time to sort out the chaffs.

Bro what's the plan? I'm liking it already hehehe

Wow.... The story begins!!!!!